DREAMS...DO COME TRUE.. NEW UP-pg 42 - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
she was also sitting in the balconi till then thinking abt few of the good dais of her past life.... n the ineviatble bad memories asusual were not lagging behind to b remembered.... she was remembering certain light moments dat she had shared wth her famili.... she thout of scene wen she had asked the meaning of naina wen she was still a small kid... n her papa
had replied..." sweeto, naina ka matlab hain aankhein.... aur maina yeh naam thumhare liye isliye rekha hai ki tum usmein kabhi aasoon nahi laaogi... aur humesha hasthi hi rahogi..... samjhi...??"" n dat dai she had promised
her dad as a small kid dat she wud alwais stand upto the meaning of her name....dat she wud never cri.... but as thei sai....life is full of
ironies.... nw d same dad who had taken a promise 4m her nt to cri is responsible 4 all those tears which r flooding in those deep dark eies......
there were dais in which her dad was the whole world to her.... not dat she dint love her mom.... but as thei sai.... a daughter is alwais the pet of her dad.... watevr she asked....she wud get it exactli the veri net
dai.... 4 evrthing she asked seemed veri logical one 4 him..n 4 which he felt responsible dat he shud provide his little darling wth it...coz 4 him his
daughter was the perfect daughter n she wud never ask anithing dat he cudnt afford or anidng which wasnt realli worth having... he believed her
judgement was alwais rite.. in fact perrrfect ...but life..life nevr allows us to take it 4 granted.... evri single thing u believed wud change 1 dai......
or perhaps u percieve it has changed...wen it is still the gud ol ' thing....
n this came true in naina's case too...her world had come to a stand still dat dai.... wen she had to take the veri important desicion in her life...dat fateful dai....she had to choose
b/w the 2 most precious things in her life.... her love nor her dearest parents....it was n still is the most saddest desicion she evr made in her life ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
gosh !!! dats all !!! its a loooooooooooooooooong update !!! hope iu hv compenstaed 4 all mi irregulariti.... n im sorri... i jus noticed it dat i hv repeated one post...
n i will tri mi best to post a little bit more 2mrw... n then i will continue on alternate dais asual... n hope to b back on mi regular track.......😳😳😳

AND A HUGE SORRI.... FOR ALL THOSE WHO WERE WAITING ...... M REALLI SORRI.... 😕😕😕 I GUESS ITS WASTE GIVING A REASONING 4 MI IREGULARITI... COZ.... I M THE ONE WHO HAD NOT KEPT MI PROMISE.... SO .....ALL I HV TO SAI IS .....SORRI !!! ... mainli.... to..friend forever n yoginisahakari.... n to.... varun sujjal too..... REALLI SORRI DEARS.... N I MEAN IT....



NW PLZZ.... READ THE UPDATE N POST UR COMMENTS.... I DUNNO...I HV WRITTEN AFTER A LOOONG TIME.... THE WHOLE WRITING STUFF...IS SEEMING ALIEN TO ME... MAI B I HAVE LOST MI WRITING TOUCH...😒😒N IF U FEEL THE SAME TOO.... PLZZZ DO SAI ME....😕


ASUAL WAITING EAGERLI 4 UR COMMENTS.....

LUV NIKI !!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was gooooooood as usual 😳 👏 ..now try to be regular as u used to be 😳
Edited by diya7000 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chalo intezar to khatam !!
amd plz update soon the next 1
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Posted: 17 years ago
its awesome keep ur promise of update haan
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Posted: 17 years ago
very well wriiten,tooo good. Plz update soon yaar cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too good

infact great as usual

well a suggesstion i expect more pace to it

and dont need to say sorry

we can understand

pl update fast and that too a long one

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Posted: 17 years ago

@
diya
friend forever
varun_sujjal
sherlock_holmes
yoginisahakari

thanks a lot dears..... !!
😳

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@ yoginisahakari
dear.... i hope 4m 2dais episode onwards u will find the lagging pace....
4m next episode onwards.. [i mean not 2dais update but 4m next , there will b a twist of some sort... i dunno wat 2 sai abt it exactli.... shall i sai a surprise... is waiting...???!!



n well.... it seems again.... the numbr of replies r falling badli.... is it becoz of the delai or becoz of the decreasing qualiti ...??? i dunno....🥺🥺 but watevr the reason plzz sai it to me frankli... i will tri to improve the standars...tri to mi level best...to make it interesting.... 😕


well... so.... bi 4 nw evribdi !!
luv u all
niki !! 🤗
Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
next scene..
we c naina...gaining her composure... she is wiping of her tears ...n her determination has come bak..... she is detrmined to support her love....4 she is the nli other person who knws the complete truth.... n even if she dint knw...DAT TRUTH... she she still wud hv supported him... 4 the veri simple reason dat she luvs him ... n complete trust is one of the mani facets of love....n then continues her estranged conversation wth her dad...

naina: papa.... i hv made mi desicion ...i had made this decision long ago....n it is the fact dat.... i jus cant live without him.....n i completeli trust him....n i wud hv luvd dat u both trusted him too.... but im sure 1 dai ... u too will also understand n respect him 4 wat he did....n... after saing all this i knw... u wud hate me.... but... pap u were the 1 who taut me to stand bi principles... go wth mi heart...n dats wat im doing......i wud still hope 4 ur blessings.... but if u cant... plz ddont curse me atleast 4 all the things im gng to do.....[ her voice was determined but her face told another stori.... it depicted her agoni... her pain....her pain to choose b/w two important persons of her life.... as the tears flowed out of her eies...like an unending stream.....]

mr.aluwalia stood still ..... he had never expected his dear daughter to go against his will.... he hadnt expected this even in his wildest dream... he was speechless.. or to sai in a state of shock...he stood there wide eied lukn at his daughter.... touching his feet....4 his blessings.... even as she touched his feet , he remained unmoved still unable to cum out of the shock... naina who was touchn his feet...was infact wetting his feet wth her tears..... on feeling dat his feet were wet.... his eies to were becoming wet... but he cudnt... he never cud...or wud... bless her daughter.. as he cud never curse her also...4 doing such a crime.....

naina then touched her mothers feet... who jus cudnt resist caressing her dear daughter's head wth her tender hands....but.... was still sobbing to sai anithing.... but the touch was enuf 4 naina... 4 it told a million things which a word wudnt hv revealed....

naina singh aluwalia.... then leaves her house , the house which she belonged till nw... to b wth her beloved.... to b wth her....RAj....

she cums out n luks out 4 raj.... she is not able to find him were he was standind b4... she becomes a bit tensed....n runs out towards the gate calling his name... wth a untold fear in her voice.... but ... to her relief... he was standing there.... jus outside the gate.... with his hand on his face ..... tring to hide his tear stained face.... she then , goes near him..... n luks striaght into his eies n gives him a tight hug...... n then wispers into his ears.... "raj..... i will h alwais wth u .... no matter wat happens... no matter wat 1 sais.... the fact remains dat i will alwais luv u...."....
raj then closes his eies hearing these words wth tears flowing 4m his eies...n tightens his hold.... saing wth his actions dat he is grateful dat she trusts him... luvs him... believes in him.... wen the whole world is against him... and if she wudnt hv supported him... he wud hv been shattered to pieces..... 4 she was his life.... n if it was not 4 her...then his life wud nt have been worth living........

the scene ends bi.... showing naina resting her head on his shoulders n walking awai.... walking awai 4m their past life... for making a new home.... 4 making a new n bright future wer not even a drop of tear is welcome....it wud be full of happiness n luv n nothing but it...


BACK TO THE PRESENT.....

NAINA is back to the present.... all her cheeks wet... n tightli hugging her famili foto... IT IS THEN SHE HEARS THE SOB OF RAJ.... CRING BITTERLI IN THE ADJACENT BALCONI....

it is then she realises her mistake.... she thinks... how cud she do this.... 4 it is becoz of her raj is cring 2dai.... jus becoz she became upset... raj cudnt bear it... she sais it was all her mistake ...n is determined to cheer him up... so she then goes n washes her face n tries to put up a fake smile in 4nt of the mirror.... saing... i cant let mi past take over mi future.... i cant let mi sadness hurt mi raj..... i had promised him dat i wud b alwais wth him n now im the one who is letting him down.... saing this to herself... she towards their rum....

she enters their rum silentli.... n muvs towards the balconi.... wer raj is still holding navins foto n bitterli sobbing closing his eies... she then kneels down in4nt of him n touches his shoulders wth one hand n caresses his cheeks wth the other.... awaken bi the touch raj opens his eies to c naina in 4nt of him smiling.... he is taken aback bi sudenli seeing her there... coz he nevr wanted her to knw dat he was sad... but naina simled continousli...n this time a genuine smile came to her face 4 she wanted to cheer him up... she then wipes of the tears 4m his eies n plants a sweet kiss on his cheeks.... raj is mesmerised bi this sweet gesture n hugs her.... tears r nw flowing 4m both their eies.... but nw ...it had less of pain...but more of the satisfaction of having the luv of their life wth them.... the world nw seemed a lot more better.... in fact the feeling of being in each others arms seemed like .... like heaven....or to sai like a blissful dream come true....... a dream 4m which thei nevr wanted to b awaken 4m......

Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
HAI EVRI1 !!! THERE I HV KEPT MI PROMISE.... ITS THE NEXT PART OF YESTERDAIS UPDATE.... I CUDNT WRITE IT YESTERDAI... SO THERE...I HV WRITTEN N POSTED IT..... N ITS LOOOONG ONE TOO.... AS U ALL ASKED....NW PLZZZZZZZ POST UR COMMENTS.... I SINCERELI EXPECT MORE REPLIES THIS TIME....😊

WELL THE NEXT UPDATE WILL B ON MONDAI OR TUESDAI....N IT WILL HAVE A SURPRISE... OR WELL SOMTHING OF DAT SORTS...😆

TATA!! BYE BYE!! 4 NW !!😉
LUV NIKI !!☺️


Edited by cutipie.niki - 17 years ago

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