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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Kya likha hai!!!!!!!!! Dj's ko ye story leni chahiye thi 😉

i agree😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
well,now it is just exciting moment,I will wait for tomorrow.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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He could feel her warm breath against his neck and felt like losing control. Seeing the shy glance from her, he tried to stop himself but she wrapped an arm uncertainly around his neck, and her touch seemed to encourage him. He decided to make a move. Lifting up her chin, he brought their faces closer as she closed her eyes.

The scene ends with Rajveer looking at Naina lovingly while she gazes down shyly at their joined hands.

What a writing skill do u have!!!I'm surprised 👏 ..

Me literally blushing 😳

Pls update soon..can't u make it daily!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The cadets pushed Gehlot and his men off the bus. There were about 3 police cars with about 6 cops, 10 to 15 army jeeps with 20 to 25 Army Officials and many more civillians gathered around the bus and the jeep Abhimanyu initially travelled with. Soon the cadets noticed that all the students and faculty of KMA were there as well. They all cheered when the first-year batch came down, and the sound became ten times when Rajveer came out. There were even some whistles for Nandini.

"Captain Shekhawat! How do you feel that your mentor and adoptive father is the one who had framed your best friend and tried to frame you while doing illegal transactions?" one of the energetic female reporters asked bravely, determined to get a good scoop for her article. Rajveer paused on his way to Brigadier Chandokh and looked at her. Everyone quietened at once, holding their breaths.

"There is a severely injured Officer, an entire group of terrorrists with their leader who were caught red-handed and ahs to be taken for trial and a batch of first-year cadets who managed to handle themselves better than any beginners. All you have to ask is what a mere Captain feels about being used and betrayed? I serve my country, but if my country doesn't look at the important things what would be left to be proud of?" He moved on without waiting for an answer.

His cadets, friends and colleagues smiled proudly at his answer. Ali started clapping, and everyone else followed. Rajveer looked around in surprise. He was speechless. Many Officers, including Abhimanyu, Nandini and Brigadier Chandokh took their hats off out of respect for him.

This time, Naina gave him a thumbs up proudly. Gehlot merely watched. It seemed like there was a conflict within him. Major Nair's anger was very evident though he tried to appear indifferent. He looked at Gehlot for directions but found his Boss confused himself.

"-Nair can save us-" Pooja heard one of the terrorists muttering to the one beside him. She looked back and forth them and Major Nair in surprise. She whispered something to the five and they stopped the guards from taking the men away.

"What did you just say?" Yudi asked threateningly. They cowered in horror and shook their heads violently.

"N-nothing! Wh-what did we say?" one of them asked, immediately being slapped by the other. Huda and Aalekh came forward menacingly. They took them by the collar and got ready to punch them when they started yelling something about Major Nair.

"Repeat that slowly, loudly and clearly." Aalekh himself ordered slowly, but with fire in his eyes.

"W-woh M-Major Nair-"

"What's this nonsense? How dare you indicate that I'm involved?" Major Nair angrily stuttered.

"Major, are you a psychic?" Abhimanyu asked. Seeing his confused face, he explained. "Because I didn't hear him say in any way that you are involved... maybe you read his thoughts. If so, enlighten us. Are you really involved?"

"Captain Abhimanyu! Watch what you say!" Nair growled. Nandini stepped forward.

"Watch what you say yourself, Major. And Captain Abhimanyu, you did go a bit far. Now, tell us clearly what you were going to say. All of you will have life-sentence or be executed, but if you give tell us everything it will be cut short; plus, what's the point of holding up an illegal and harmful activity?"

The men looked at Nair in fear. Then one of their other partners started speaking from the back.

"Major Nair has been following orders from Boss - Gehlot Saab - since he was promoted to a Major."

"That's only a year after he joined KMA as a faculty member!" Brigadier Chandokh exclaimed in shock and betrayal. "How could you?! How could you work against your own country, your motherland?"

"Sir they're making up this rubbish! Don't believe them... they - they're just trying to frame me!" He tried to defend himself, trying to move away from the crowd. Two gaurds came over and caught him by the arms tightly. "Let go of me at once! I'm a Major, and that's the respect I get for it? They're lying! Why do you believe them?!"

"We'll hear everything you have to say for yourself in court Major. Take them away." Abhimanyu ordered. The six joined hands secretly and grinned at each other.

~*~*~

"Rajveer Sir-" Naina began as she entered his room. He was sitting on the couch, looking through some papers. He looked up and shook his head.

"Uh hn... Raj." he told her, going up to her and held his arms around her. She looked at him in shock and blushed. He grinned and closed the door, and she just smiled embarrassedly at her reaction. He placed a hand on her back and guided her towards the couch. "Sit. After all we've been through - together - how can you still refer to me so formally, even when we're... alone... Cadet Naina 'Ah' Singh?" he asked, pressurising the word 'alone' instead of her name.

"How can you still refer to me so formally after what we've been through together even when..." she left off, blushing, but still determined not to let the shyness take over. He smiled at her, nearly sending her to the ninth cloud.

"Thik hai 'Nainajee'... your wish is my command." he nearly whispered. "Now, what made my star cadet visit my humble home?" he asked in a filmy way, making her laugh. Her laugh soon ended though, when she realised she left the mess in such a hurry to meet him that she forgot to make up an excuse.

Rajveer watched lovingly yet quite amused as she tried to think of an explanation.

"One thing I should make very, very clear 'Nainajee'-"

"Naina." He smiled widely at her comment.

"Naina, I think it's about time that you stop trying to have excuses or explanations of meeting me. Can't we meet just to have a chat or..."

"Or what Si-Raj?" she looked at him expectantly to finish his sentence, but instead he stood up.

"I'll show you. Come on." He held out his hand. The scene ends with Naina looking at it in confusion.

Precap - Yudi and Huda are open mouthedly staring at something, or rather someone, passing by.

"They're framing me!" Major Nair yells, but no response from anyone.

Rajveer is riding a bike with Naina behind him.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh GOD!!!next update Friday pe???? How shall I wait so long????? GOD jaldi jaldi Friday pe mujhe le chalo.

Now I want to say something to u although u r 14 years old,still I hope u trully understand the love life,and abou ur imaginary and writing power??????????????just marvelous and too.........................good.

never give up writing.It is God gifted.Keep it up.

Have a sweet dream.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey r u really 14 yrs. old?? I just can't believe!!!!...I must say that u r really a very matured person in comparison to ur age..n what writing skill u have..it's really outstanding...

Fantabulous...part... 👏 👏

Do update at friday 😊 ..will be waiting 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
plz Friday pe ek long update karna,thik hai???????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kal friday hai yaad hai to?????I am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yudi and Huda were going around, chatting away with the reporters gladly, happy to repeat the events everytime they were asked even the smallest questions. As the reporters calmed down slightly and some started leaving, they stepped back and watched as the rest tried to bribe the guards into letting them inside Brigadier's office. Huda sighed in content.

"Ay Yudiye, this is called life. Beat up a dozen terrorists, stop their entire group and come back to live a life of leisure, of hero-giri - I mean Huda-giri... all the girls, the reporters and the fame..." he said, resting his elbow on Yudi's shoulder. Yudi shrugged his elbow off and leaned back, spreading himself out.

"Dude, you've got so many things wrong in that sentence that I nearly lost count. NUmber one, you fought with only two terrorrists, not a dozen. I heard Rajveer Sir fought almost all of them even as you guys were; how awesome is that? Anyway, number two, WE didn't stop their entire group, forget about you doing it ALONE. Number three-" he stopped talking with his mouth hanging open as he saw something. Huda, who was ready to pounce on Yudi had an even more exaggerated reaction. There's a loud screech as a motorbike stops.

The person riding it is a girl. Off comes the helmet, cascades down her long hair and out shines a bright face with kajal accentuating her dark eyes. She swiftly pulled her hair back into a ponytail because of the heat. As she walks towards the entrance of KMA, where Huda and Yudi where sitting with mouths still hanging open, we see that every other male including the orderlies and reporters were reacting similarly. Who wouldn't, to her radiating aura and beauty?

She walked somewhat quickly yet gracefully towards the two, who tried to regain their composure and act normal. Instead of stopping in front of them as they expected, she walked swiftly towards Rajveer and Naina. He stopped walking and talking (to Naina) at the sight of her for a moment.

"Sherry! You're - oh..." he looked like he suddenly remembered something. Naina looked at the girl in surprise. This was Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat's sister? It felt odd standing in front of her, as if she was caught doing something wrong. Rajveer turned to look at Naina, and back at Sherry, trying to figure out what to say. By now, all the cadets (mostly male) were standing around them.

"Uhm... Nai - Cadet Singh, this is Sherry," he introduced her, then gave a hard look at the guys while continuing, "my sister." The guys backed off and some rushed out of their sight. Sherry rolled her eyes seeing this. She turned towards Naina and gave a scrutinizing look, as if summing her up. Naina felt uncomfortable under the piercing gaze though Sherry was very young.

Seeing his cadet's fidgeting, he stepped in between them and hugged Sherry. "I -"

"-don't have to explain." she cut him off. "If dad's a terrorrist, then that's none of my business. Let him be... all I know is that I'm supposed to be here, so here I am! Just wanted to let you know I'm here since you tend to lose your mind over these things... but it looks like this time is different." she commented, sneering slightly at the two. Naina looked at her in shock. No one had ever behaved in this way with Rajveer and gotten away with it.

"Sherry-"

"Don't call me that! My name is KOEL, and that's what I'm going to be referred to as! I don't want that stupid name a prosti-"

"Fine, KOEL! You can stop this drama now and follow N - Cadet Singh to the girls' hostel." he said calmly, though it was clear that he sounded calm due to the effort he put in it.

"I'm not 'following' ANYONE... I'll find my own way. You and your precious Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia can go on to your date - oh sorry, wasn't I supposed to say that?" she sneered again before walking off in her unique gait and leaving a trail of hostility behind.

~*~*~

"Here." a guard handed a glass of water carelessly to a shaky hand. The scene moves up the hand to reveal a distraught and helpless Major Nair. He hears the guard say to another guard, "I don't get why he's even allowed to get anything at all! I mean, if I was in his place, I would commit suicide or hand myself in before going against my homeland..."

"Arre not many people have had the luck of getting such great parents as yours you know. Your father has taught you the right ways in life; he probably doesn't have a family to help him be on track! And he needs some care," Nair's face lifts up in surprise and hope, but falls as he hears the rest, "after all, he needs energy to clarify everything and give us the information on the cult in court!"

"Shut up! Shut up I said! You two have been going on about things you don't even know! Just shut up!" he yelled, throwing the platter with an untouched dry roti away. The guards just gave him a short glance before looking away and continuing chatting.

"They're framing me!" he yelled again, but no response from anyone. He helplessly looked around, but slumps down in defeat as he realized that he was truly trapped for good this time.

~*~*~

Rajveer is riding a motorbike with Naina behind him. Her arms are around him; the wind blows against them as he speeds through the empty roads of Ambala. They rode through the shadowed tunnel of trees looming over as if to protect them. After some time, Naina eased up a bit and relaxed against Rajveer's body. He glanced at the mirror to see her face full of content as she rested her head on his shoulder.

"Where are we going S - Raj? Are we allowed to? What if we get into tr-" she bumped into him even more when the bike abruptly stopped. He got off, indicating that she should too. Conufsed, she was about to ask him something when he cut her off.

"Why are you always so tensed? Relax, Naina. Why bother about problems and worry about things that probably aren't important when you're away from all those things?" he asked warmly. She thought about it, looking startled at the sudden questions. Rajveer sighed and grabbed her arms lightly, pulling her forward.

"Close your eyes." she started to protest again but stopped and did what she was told to do. "Good... now just stay as you are..." he said softly as he went behind her. Seeing her still tensed form, he commented, "you might as well relax; I'm going to keep you here for a long time... or at least till I get the result I want!"

Slowly, her taut form loosened up slightly. The muscles in her face relaxed, making the glow more visible. Rajveer had looked away after his last comment, feeling a need to give her some privacy as she took a big step towards an aspect of life. He heard the deep, steady breathing and turned around. Spinning her slightly towards the direction of the open view of the sky, he told her to open her eyes.

Her breath caught at her throat; she watched as the fiery hues of red, orange, yellow, and purple spread themselves across the seemingly endless sky. She gazed in awe at the view in front of her, while he watched the hues reflecting off her face, giving her an even more visible glow, especially in her eyes. The scene ends with Rajveer's eyes full of love.

Precap - Koel has a cadet (male) by his collar against the wall fiercely. A hand on her shoulder stops her from beating him and she turns around in surprise.

All the faculty members and Nandini are at a staff meeting, where Brigadier Chandokh announces that there are orders that Rajveer, Abhimanyu and Nandini will be promoted.


Well our wonderful viewers, another weekend full of fabulous and exciting episodes of Alternate Left Right Left by RJ has resumed! So please leave those fantastic comments behind, and of course, stay tuned for tomorrow's episode!

Note from RJ: One request; please refrain yourselves from calling her 'Sherry'... you never know, she might hunt you down for it! So Koel it is!

PS. Age is merely a number! Plus, I've seen many writers who are very, very amazing, and some around my age. They're waay better than me... but I'm glad you guys enjoy this! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I've been waiting for this epi...as usual rocking..sweet... 👏 .waiting for tomorrow's epi..do post soon..

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