Love LRL? then help IMPROVE lrl!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I have read several topics pointing out bloopers and loopholes in storyline. Let's help improve LRL instead of complaining and leaving it at that. In this topic we OBJECTIVELY point out the flaws WITH suggestions to improve, and maybe the moderators can forward them to Deeya and Toni/DJs?

Rule: don't just say, for ex, "story is crap". Say WHAT is crap and HOW would YOU improve it.

Don't ignore!! Each one give a suggestion at least..... we have loved LRL and owe it to it!

My suggestion:

1)What's wrong - some areas are grossly longdrawn. Deshdrohi raquet has been operational since forever, what with Ritu being sent by (most likely) Ghelot. The interest factor is zero.

Suggestion - his business should be finished when Rajeev leaves. Were I the story writer, I would spill the beans soon.

2)What's wrong - some areas are neglected. Peripheral subplots like that of Neelu, Rohit's murder (is the police sleeping?). Central themes like that of focus on army life.

Suggestion - complete the old stories. And, BEGIN new ones. Have the final exams and promote cadets to second year. Change the track.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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infact dr. shalini nd her mysterious husband should also be givn sum imp
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Posted: 18 years ago
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U r right instead of blaming we should try 2 improve
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Posted: 18 years ago
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why dont they pay some attention to a proper script..
i had so many loopholes...
they should pay a little more attention to detailing..

for example today's episode...performance wise excellent...

but .well if he leaves him to escape then mostly Rajveer will go to sme one mayb Naina in this case and ask her to shoot him.............oh sry i forgot give her a recorder mayb saying "i love u naina"

I'm telling u its utter rubbish that they are showing us.....how the hell did the no plate became alrite again......

n y didnt anyone in the bus hear when they shot the bus..........

where's the driver today??? was the bus moving on its own accord??

i tot he had a walkie talkie with which he was talking to Abhi yest y not use that today to contact him when the tire got punctured????

i'm getting sick of the whole thing......

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