I have read several topics pointing out bloopers and loopholes in storyline. Let's help improve LRL instead of complaining and leaving it at that. In this topic we OBJECTIVELY point out the flaws WITH suggestions to improve, and maybe the moderators can forward them to Deeya and Toni/DJs?
Rule: don't just say, for ex, "story is crap". Say WHAT is crap and HOW would YOU improve it.
Don't ignore!! Each one give a suggestion at least..... we have loved LRL and owe it to it!
My suggestion:
1)What's wrong - some areas are grossly longdrawn. Deshdrohi raquet has been operational since forever, what with Ritu being sent by (most likely) Ghelot. The interest factor is zero.
Suggestion - his business should be finished when Rajeev leaves. Were I the story writer, I would spill the beans soon.
2)What's wrong - some areas are neglected. Peripheral subplots like that of Neelu, Rohit's murder (is the police sleeping?). Central themes like that of focus on army life.
Suggestion - complete the old stories. And, BEGIN new ones. Have the final exams and promote cadets to second year. Change the track.