Forever This Way Pt-11 Pg-22

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Sarah

@HPmaniac

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Posted: 18 years ago

#151

good job.... 👏 it was very touchy....
update sooner.....

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devyani

@DesiRulz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#152

aaaaaaaa shreyasi 2 tell u d truth dis was d best part among all d episodes u hav ritten .gud goin n ya plz keep on rittin u r just gr8 😊

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Viren Agrawal

@firebolt_95

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Posted: 18 years ago

#153

ohh.... this was amazinng
im waiting for the next thingy.....
well.... sorry to say but do u think bhargav would have allowed him to do so.......
before he does it he will be soon out of the acadamy.... 😕

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yoginisahakari

@yoginisahakari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#154

hey nice story

but sorry to know that Raj died.

welll waiting for the next part soon

pl post asap

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devilangel

@devilangel

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Posted: 18 years ago

#155

i'll post the next part after some time guys..
and meanwhile HAPPY NEW YEAR

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sanyamalhotra

@sanyamalhotra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#156

So u finally Killed Raj.Y u had to do dat??????😭 This part of urs was sooooooo emotional,I got close to tears bt somehow d last scene reminded me of Kal ho na ho......SRK on hospital bed & Saif assuring him he'll take gud care of Naina.
Bt somehow it looks like Raj & Huda went for a role reversal.Huda is so strong & underastanding & Raj....an idiot.
Ne-ways Post ur nxt part soon.Dying for dat.

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 18 years ago

#157

devilangel
great, amazing..... what else i can say?
the way you potrait the feelings of all three of them is amazing. i just dont have enough word to describe my feeling about this part. the most memorable part

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