Forever This Way Pt-11 Pg-22 - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago
you are such good writer keep it up but plzzzz don't kill capt. raj. AND plzzzzz post the other part soon
Edited by kali27 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
heyy shreyasi!! AWESOME FANFIC!! 👏 but plzz dont kill raj soo soon 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys!!

thxx for the nice comments and the sweet pms.. i just got back now but it will be a while before i update because its really cold and im tired + my leg got frosted ..

anyway ill post by tomorrow i think.. and in the meantime MERRY CHRISTMAS!! 🤗

shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys!!

thxx for the nice comments and the sweet pms.. i just got back now but it will be a while before i update because its really cold and im tired + my leg got frosted ..

anyway ill post by tomorrow i think.. and in the meantime MERRY CHRISTMAS!! 🤗

shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEY DEVILANGEL
YOUR FANS ARE WAITING DESPRETLY FOR NEW PART
PLZ POST THAT
devilangel thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: praks

seriously,i wish huda had such feelings in the programme 2,for rajveer....but in dis fic,he's sooooo nice....and rajveer.....ofcourse,without him,there can't be any story......he obviously can't die...hey guys,do u think dat shreyasi said dat the end isn't gonna be sad for both rn,hn fans....so do u think that ur amna is gonna enter dis😆????????please(no offence)!!!!!i just want rn 2 be 2gether...yhey simply rock yaar!!!!!👏

dont worry there will be no amna 😛.. and raj will die in two weeks.. but if you love me , you'll continue to read the story .. 😛

kidding.. the story wil end in the next two weeks of raj's life.. but i will write another.. so please comment fr this one first!!😃😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
😭hi plz plz plz plz plz continue,Iam becoming desperate. 😭
Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago
kali27 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

😭hi plz plz plz plz plz continue,Iam becoming desperate. 😭

me too please post the new chapter😭😭

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Posted: 18 years ago

His head was swirling with too much information, and well.. perhaps for the first time in his life he didn't know what to do. Calling Naina should be the first step, he thought to himself grimly.

Rrring. Rrring.

'Hello.'

'It's me again.'

'Oh. Any news?'

'Yes'

Silence

'What happened to Ra- Captain Rajveer?'

'Two weeks.'

'What?'

'He's dying in two weeks.'

'Wha - How – What?'

'Naina.. does it matter? Come to the hospital right now.'

'No, I can't'

'No? you say no? Naina, maybe you hadn't understood it yet. He's dying. Do you understand? HE'S DYING. AND HE NEEDS YOU.'

'B-but we fought.. I resolved not to see him again.'

'Why do you care about your resolves now, Naina? The man is dying. Does all that matter now?'

'Well, to me it does.'

'Naina, how could you be so selfish? There's a man in here who swallowed cyanide FOR YOU! AND IN TWO WEEKS HE WILL BE DEAD.. GONE.. LIFELESS.. AND ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS YOUR STUPID FIGHT?'

'Huda--'

'Don't you Huda me. Have you ever considered what business I had here? NONE. It was your life, his life.. but for me? NO!. what will I gain from all this? NOTHING. But still I'm here, you know why? FOR YOU!! SO THAT THE PERSON YOU LOVE WILL HAVE SOME PEACE BEFORE HE'S DEAD.' It's so typical of you, Naina Singh, to not realize that people are sacrificing everything for you, and you can't even repay them by a 10 minute visit to the hospital?'

'Huda, its not that easy. I wish I could come--'

'You wish? SHE WISHES! You know what? Don't come for your Raj, don't come for the guy who you've loved. Come for Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, your teacher and mentor of KMA, without whom you mightn't have survived. Come for a dying man, Naina. Come.'

Click.

And the phone was disconnected and he was gone, leaving Naina on the other side to vaguely wonder how he had gotten so wise.

He knocked and entered, and stopped dead in his tracks. He didn't know the man lying in front of him. you could practically see his nerves, and his breathing was shallow. There were countless tubes and monitors attached to him who were desperately trying to give him five more minutes to his life.

'You don't need to worry about Me.' the voice he knew so well was no shallow and almost dead. 'You see, I have always taken my decisions myself, I never asked anyone anything and I have always volunteered for everything myself. This is one more of decisions, probably the last one.'

'But that's why you're wrong. This wasn't your decision at all. You asked yourself for help, you risked everything you had for the girl who is waiting outside in the waiting room, knowing that she will never see you again. If you did come back for her, why are you going away again? It has never been your decision alone.'

'So what do you suggest I do? You know, it's not much use talking about what happened after it has happened. I screwed up okay? I admit it... I was scared that she wouldn't accept me again'

'No, you were afraid of facing yourself. You were and still are afraid of committing yourself to the fact that you love her. You're a coward, you know, a big coward who is afraid of facing life. You have faced wars, yes, but life? No, I don't think so.'

'How can you tell me I'm a coward when you don't know what you are yourself?'

'Oh, but I know. I am one of the bravest people I have ever met.'

'How?'

'I gave up my engagement with the most beautiful girl in the world for you. I gave up my life and my future for you. It was all for you, do you realize that? And for her as well. I have nothing to gain by all this, you know. Nothing. But still I'm here. And now you're a coward just because you're you.'

This time he was silent. He knew he was defeated, he never thought he would be taking advice from one of his former students, but he had to admit that he had messed up big time. And this time, he didn't know how to fix it.

'You're right. I'm just a complete failure.'

'You've changed Captain, for the better or for the worse, I cannot tell. But you definitely have changed. Anyway, I should get going, now.' He just nodded miserably

'And hey Captain, tell her how you feel. Maybe then you won't be the biggest failure.' He smiled slightly and left.

devilangel thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a LONG chapter.. but plese comment you guys. this chappy is all about Huda's glory.. he's really changed isnt he?

but please comment fast you guys .. theyre the only thing which keeps me going..

happy reading
shreyasi

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