Forever This Way Pt-11 Pg-22 - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago

The road is long

With many a winding turn

That leads us to who knows where

Who knows where

He walked up and down the spacious waiting room. It has been five hours and no news had come from inside. The blinds of the operation theatre were completely down and no one was there whom he could ask about his condition.

He didn't know why he had gone there tonight. All he knew that he couldn't get sleep and decided to take a walk. A long scream from a nearby building had kicked up his army instincts and he had gone in. To see.. this. He had checked the bottle after they had taken him. potassium cyanide. He didn't know what made him do it, but he had a good inkling. His mind went back to him. He had been his teacher, his mentor, his brother, and the stealer of the girl he loved. Still he respected him, more than he could imagine.

But I'm strong

Strong enough to carry on

He ain't heavy, he's my brother.

And he knew what to do for him. Whether he was dead or alive, he didn't know.. but he had to do it. He went to find the nearest payphone.

So on we go

His welfare is of my concern

No burden is he, to bear

We'll get there

For I know

He would not encumber me

He ain't heavy, he's my brother

'Hi. Its me'

Silence.

'Anything wrong?'

'You might want to come to Belle Vue Hospital now.'

'Why? Are you in danger?'

'No. But someone is.'

'Who?'

'Him.'

'Him who?'

'Him. Captain Rajveer.'

Silence

Silence

'Oh.'

Click.

Disconnected.

And the load

doesn't weigh me down at all

he ain't heavy, he's my brother.

he ain't heavy, he's my brother.

He turned back to a hand on his shoulder. It was a nurse. Then he noticed, the door of the operation theatre was open, and the flashes were up again. He made to run forward but the nurse called him back.

'Excuse me Mr.-'

'Huda.' He supplied.

'Yes. Well, how do you know Captain Rajveer?'

He ain't heavy, he's my brother

'He's.. family.'

'Oh.'

'Is he alright? Is he going to be fine?'

'I'm sorry sir. I'm afraid no.'

'What?'

'You see, the cyanide he had swallowed was very powerful. He would have died if you hadn't called the ambulance at the right time. We have taken out most of the cyanide from his system.'

'So he's going to be fine right?'

'Well.. you see, a bit of cyanide which had reached his lungs and liver could not be taken out. His breathing is shallow and his liver is slowly deteriorating. I'm sorry sir. He doesn't have much longer to live.'

If I'm laden at all

I'm laden with sadness

That everyone's heart

Isn't filled with the gladness

He turned away. He still couldn't process what he has just heard. He didn't have the courage to turn back and ask her how long the Captain has got to live. But the nurse understood, because she called after him as he turned away.

'Two weeks sir. Two weeks at the most.'

He ain't heavy, he's my brother.

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Posted: 18 years ago
the song is by Neil Diamond called 'he ain;t heavy, he's my brother.'

and well.. its getting kind of sad.. he has two weeks to live but as i said the end will not be sad for both RN and HN..
so please please comment fast!!

happy reading!!
shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh wow! My comment first!
Good part Shreyasi!

Only 2 weeks for capt Rajveer Aww... That's sad! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 😭 😭 nooo!!! raj can't die... 😭 😭
but beautiful story!!! 😳
plzz continue fast!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing I love this part more than the previous and specially the portrait of huda's feeling
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys!!

just writing to say that i wont be able to update until monday night.. probably tuesday because im going skiin in switzerland 😃 tomorrow morning. i will miss you a lot and also my fic

so plzz keep reviewing and commenting and i will update as fast as i can ..

have a nice weekend!!
shreyasi
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

amazing I love this part more than the previous and specially the portrait of huda's feeling

seriously,i wish huda had such feelings in the programme 2,for rajveer....but in dis fic,he's sooooo nice....and rajveer.....ofcourse,without him,there can't be any story......he obviously can't die...hey guys,do u think dat shreyasi said dat the end isn't gonna be sad for both rn,hn fans....so do u think that ur amna is gonna enter dis😆????????please(no offence)!!!!!i just want rn 2 be 2gether...yhey simply rock yaar!!!!!👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh my!!! im in tears... gr8 goin!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
its awesome shreyasi!!! 👏 👏
i am replyin after a longg time yaar!!! 😳
becuse i never read ur fan fic.....
but now i did..... 😳 👏
its amazing....... 😳 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
only 2 weeks 4 capt. 2 live not fair 😭 neways devilangel luv ur ritting skills n all infact i just luv 2 read ur scripts dey r so saddy saddy but still cool.

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