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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

hi dayaawesome ud...dutta inconvience😆...naku thinking abt her past...sad ...ganpat...😲...next part pls ud soon

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

😊

Hi curly locks

You r back...kitna chalaya .😆..phir milenge chalte chalte bolkar...loved the ud😊

dutta is a couch potato😆 ...no poor guy haven't got a wink...wifey dear relaxing at least trying to project...you portrayed naku's flash back too good...here is a girl rejected & dejected...step father giving her shelter she has a feeling of obligation towards him

Dutta married her...she is pondering why he did it...foolish girl ...sense of family attachment has developed...waiting for the luv to blossom in naku's heart...

Plzzz do ud soon...😊.I love it...thanks a ton for making time for us...busy schedule...big hug

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mirage123

@mirage123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Hi daya

Fab ud...naku likes his family...she never had one...soon she will like her husband too ...ud soon😊

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

this ff is quite different from what we have usually read , for instance here dutta is running behind nakku , and dutta gets to sleep on the couch 😊so cute ..like nakusha even i have several questions running in my mind, like more insight on their lives before marriage , what kind of a relationship they shared before ? guess , will have to wait ..as always a lovely update , thanks daya

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dilse14

@dilse14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

hi daya

wonderful ud

naku thinks dutta wronged her

wish she knew the truth...phase between that is interesting too😆

ud soon😊

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

ATF

Chapter 5

Hi Pappy! 😃

Tell me are you dealing with geriatrics these days.. stiff joints..? oyee tell him to get a double air mattress.. he'll be floating in the air!..knots in neck? Naku should give his neck and shoulders a massage.. mind you she ain't the serving sort..more the bite off his head sort!

Haaa ha I love "the feeling of being watched".. glared, cussed, jaw twitch more like it! this woman needs a zaoor ke sher ke roar!dharrr..

Ohhh nice, his family likes her and her them.. and Baji woh tu hai hi ladeez man.. love him to cherub..rogue!

What a sad tale of Naku .. I loved the way you have written this pappy.. sadly credible.. feeling unwanted .. made to feel a burden..

Suddenly I am sensitive to the way she is sharp and pungent.. raw deal first a rotten step dad and now a strange man as a husband making equally strange demands..

Thanks for the UD.. enjoyed it pappy, please continue.. much love,as ever yours hammie.

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

hi daya

superb ud...naku is giving hard time to dutta...he doesn't have a proper bed to sleep😆...naku past is horrorfying...with dad like her can't blame been suspious to man he got her married too

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

HI Daya

awesome UD once again loved It

Thanks as always take care

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

thank you daya for latest ud, Dutta's act of saving Nakku from a disastrous life has so far been non beneficial to him in Nakku's eyes... she might never work that one out herself ... he didn't marry her to keep him warm n bed that's for sure, apnay bed ki jagah couch pe aa gaya... this Robinhood of PV only hates the institute of marriage...

thank you daya enjoyed Nakku's thoughts and a peek into her past the relationship with her stepdad in her eyes despite everything worth her getting into an unwanted marriage.😒 well at least she will have a happy ending here rather if whatever her SD had planned for her..😊

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: sona89
Hi DayaAwesome UD...ganpat can't do anything good...this time Naku should be happy...his decision brought her in life of Dutta...pls next ud soon😊

Hiya Sona,

Thanks for liking the UD. Yes, Ganapat is definitely a horrible man & father. His disgusting action may have brought our couple together...but those to have yet to learn that they just might have to thank him (even if reluctantly) for bringing them together. This next UD should really start their bonding...I hope😛

Thanks for reading and commenting, Sona.

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