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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
hey daya.. fab update... poor dutta uncomfortable on the couch and finally start working... nakku in deep thought about her past present and about their marriagev...

Hi Ranju,

Thank you for reading and commenting on my SS. I'm glad you liked the UD. LOL yep Dutta's having hard time adjusting and Naku isn't going to make it too easy either...even when they start bonding a bit...let's see where all this leads...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: uwith
hi dayaawesome ud...dutta inconvience😆...naku thinking abt her past...sad ...ganpat...😲...next part pls ud soon

Hiya Uvi,

Glad you liked the UD. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments. I greatly appreciate it.

Dutta's definitely having a hard time with this charade😛 Not the acting part just all the strings that come attached. Maybe that's saying something. Let's see where this is going...will UD soon!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Nakusha
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Hi curly locks

You r back...kitna chalaya .😆..phir milenge chalte chalte bolkar...loved the ud😊

dutta is a couch potato😆 ...no poor guy haven't got a wink...wifey dear relaxing at least trying to project...you portrayed naku's flash back too good...here is a girl rejected & dejected...step father giving her shelter she has a feeling of obligation towards him

Dutta married her...she is pondering why he did it...foolish girl ...sense of family attachment has developed...waiting for the luv to blossom in naku's heart...

Plzzz do ud soon...😊.I love it...thanks a ton for making time for us...busy schedule...big hug

Hey Nakusha,

I know, I ended up being really busy. Work and family stuff. But anyway...finally managed that UD and have the next one now ready before I get busy again from tmmrw.

Thanks for always reading and commenting on my work. I'm glad you like my SS.

Yup, Nakusha has a sense of obligation towards him...and it has always held her back...but with this marriage came two good things...one she's found a good man though she doesn't realize it yet and second her step-father's out of the picture and her life..

Of course, she'd naturally wondering what the purpose was...how does she fit into 'paying off debts" it doesn't occur to her that he may not have done it for her...and that'll eventually change...but first let's see what I can do about that love blossoming you mentioned😉

Will UD soon. Take Care!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: mirage123

Hi daya

Fab ud...naku likes his family...she never had one...soon she will like her husband too ...ud soon😊

Hey mirage123,

Thank you for reading and commenting! Glad you liked the UD. Of course, she'll come around eventually...we'll have to wait and see how ...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
this ff is quite different from what we have usually read , for instance here dutta is running behind nakku , and dutta gets to sleep on the couch 😊so cute ..like nakusha even i have several questions running in my mind, like more insight on their lives before marriage , what kind of a relationship they shared before ? guess , will have to wait ..as always a lovely update , thanks daya

Hey Rose,

It is different, I rather like the idea of him running circles around her😆 And I hope that it'll be fun to read it this way instead him walking away or angry or ignoring what he doesn't like or agree to..

it'll be clear as we go...there isn't much to their relationship before...in fact there was no relationship...just knowledge of each others' existence. But that'll be detailed later...

Glad you liked the UD. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: dilse14
hi daya
wonderful ud
naku thinks dutta wronged her
wish she knew the truth...phase between that is interesting too😆
ud soon😊

Hey dilse14,

Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD.

I think if she knew the truth things would be too easy for them both...I think not knowing can give a bit of fiery edge to their story ;)

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

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Chapter 5

Hi Pappy! 😃
Hey Hammie!
Tell me are you dealing with geriatrics these days.. stiff joints..? oyee tell him to get a double air mattress.. he'll be floating in the air!..knots in neck? Naku should give his neck and shoulders a massage.. mind you she ain't the serving sort..more the bite off his head sort!
Massage? Hmmm might be interesting...maybe will give her my metal bat while I'm at it
Haaa ha I love "the feeling of being watched".. glared, cussed, jaw twitch more like it! this woman needs a zaoor ke sher ke roar!dharrr..
Ohhh nice, his family likes her and her them.. and Baji woh tu hai hi ladeez man.. love him to cherub..rogue!
What a sad tale of Naku .. I loved the way you have written this pappy.. sadly credible.. feeling unwanted .. made to feel a burden..
Yes, she feels she cannot turn her back on him though she does want to..and now he's 'sold' her in her eyes...
Suddenly I am sensitive to the way she is sharp and pungent.. raw deal first a rotten step dad and now a strange man as a husband making equally strange demands..
Yes, she's definitely been on one roller coaster ride...
Thanks for the UD.. enjoyed it pappy, please continue.. much love,as ever yours hammie.

Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you're liking the story

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi daya
superb ud...naku is giving hard time to dutta...he doesn't have a proper bed to sleep😆...naku past is horrorfying...with dad like her can't blame been suspious to man he got her married too

Hey Jedy,

Thanks for reading and commenting. Yep Dutta's having to make sacrifices for his charade and Naku's still confused by what's going on...let's see how this turns out.

Edited by -daya- - 11 years ago