FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14

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jedy25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

hi rosesuperb ud...feel sad for dutta & naku...naku has forgiven him...dutta is not a bad guy..she luvs him ...he should get her scar treated...ud soon

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FASSBEN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

HI Rose

Great UD Dutta and Nakku leave the hospital he takes her to his childhood home. Dutta slowly open up to her telling he blames himself for his mothers death and she now understand the reason he hates colors he now fears he Is going to lose both anay and her. Now the feeling that he does really need her she also has fallen In love with him. She also shared her painful childhood and her cruel father It was sad how she got the scar dutta also understand why she hates being around alcohol. When he goes and wraps his arm around her that was sweet of him

I hope In due time he will open up to her more. Love how he made him promise not to hurt or risk his life again.

Thanks as always take care

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CUTE_SAPNA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

hello my dear rose,
at first i would simply say i luved & still loving the update.
drowned in luv with this ff. so much luv so much pain, are u here to redefine the luv ; the tasha love ; the gr8 tasha love.

what a scene !!!!! when i visualized it. it was like a landmark in tasha love both r sitting , his wrapping his arms around her, she places her head, cry her heart out. what a scene. and both r looking in 1 direction as if now " inn dono ki manzil ek hai". now they r i emotionally so much that there's not a need to get physically. ufff, so much pain with dsp baby. the kid with mother dead in his arms. yes, there is a gr8 secret yet to be revealed & i m waiting 4 it desperately; for 18th chapter.

i m simply waiting for the day WHEN DSP WILL KISS THE SCAR OF NAKU, but not a treatment of that scar.i hope ur understanding what i wanna say.

pleaseee update soon; if possible on next monday. pls try to follow the troupe.

so many scenes r there which i will say r the strongest point points of ur ff. will comment on that also.

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CUTE_SAPNA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

first will say LUV U ROSE & UR BEAUTIFUL WORK. muuuah.

some points of ur ff which i wold remember forever; (still reading)

in ch-1= evry word, but that will gonna long. so dsp's long gaze in naku's eyes & understanding the truth. her pain , wasn't t heat the starting point of compassion at least. after dsp's act, her understating 4 him that he's gr8. not beacuse he helper her sister, but he's actually. and this understanding of naku became the base, the very essence of their relationship. so naive girl but so matured the she even didn't harbored ant feelings 4 him, as she is always with the truth. good.

in ch-2 = foremost, the dsp in this ff is very clear, very understanding and very wise & this thing makes him at difference with the real dsp of ltl.very precise & accurate. but still so close to the real dsp. THIS IS THE GREATNESS OF UR WORK. u have been successful in maintaining 1 more quality of his = his unpredictableness.

okay, he is understanding the pain of nakusha; not even looking at her scar.i would say the starting point of his love for her.

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mirage123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Hi rose

Fab ud ...emotionally drain dutta & naku ...got a shoulder to cry...they went through tragedy...both need each other...naku loves him...he too love her...but doesn't know it...pls don't end the story so soon...with past out want to see them build future...I like the story😊...ud soon

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sona89

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Hi RoseAwesome UD...Dutta's pain ...death of father...mom ...sis & brother-in-law...He thinks he is bad omen ...Naku father was a monster...he hated her...scar & alcohol is reminder of her dad...scar can be treated & Dutta should give up drinking...sticking to each other ...ud soon

Edited by sona89 - 10 years ago

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usha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

awesum...loved tash opening their past in frnt of each other...loved their trust and support fr each other...continue sooon

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tahera57

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Thanks Rose for annos and UD it was a fab UD, Dil khush kar ditta, kiya baat hai.. not only convo but thodi dutta ke dil ki baat bhi "he needed someone like her in his life, not someone but only HER" was for me the best line .. Patil saab ka ye confession to himself was showing good days are on their way now loved how he has promised her he won't go to that place again waiting to see ab wo apnay liay kaunsi saza choose karay ga cause he hasn't forgiven himself yet .. and it might be a long way coming... but we all know with Nakku's love he will get there. thanks waiting for next.

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uwith

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Posted: 10 years ago

#559

hi roseawesome ud...dutta open door of his past to naku...naku too shared her past with him...both are in pain...hope they move towards happiness together...how they do it...its worth reading...ud soon😊

Edited by uwith - 10 years ago