FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 57

fab update dear... tasha revealing there past ...very senti...

hi rosewonderful uddutta cleared the air abt his pastthankfully no sups & seemanaku sad...past...father happy abt the scardutta has gulit & naku loves him...dutta should reciprocate her feelingpls ud fast😊

TMD~ chapter 16

Hi Rosie,

Me panting! almost missed the boat but.. all aboard now!

Sometimes it's a quiet, consuming unspoken tragedy that one ends up in, when people around have formed expectations. Dutta seems to be in the situation, proving his fallibility..

I loved how you used two words for Dutta's condition.. "recover and heal".. recover to me in this case scenario is the mending of his physical side.. whilst to heal.. is the restoration of his broken spirit.. which you reveal fully in this chapter..

Still, the well described visit to the old, occupied house is his justification for the rationale of his uncalled for as he puts it to himself," unforgivable act". Dutta hopes for Naku's reactionary ice to thaw, so that once again she may begin to question him and if he's lucky offer him the much needed support, that he craves for, but never asks for!

But Naku, once bitten, twice shy is just pleased with small mercies. Dutta makes an effort, to share his life with her.. I guess her strength, her perseverance pays off in the end.

Quite a trauma he suffers as a ten year old. Loss of the father figure..death due to natural causeS.. but soon after follows the death of his mother.. cause.. he still as a grown man believes is him..

When he narrates, his mother's death happened on the day of holi.. he is really appealing for her understanding.. why he did to her what he did!

But then it happens, a bond of two people in a similar situation.. both motherless and suffering it's loss.. but Dutta holding himself responsible for literally killing his mother.

His vulnerability does contribute to confirming her love for him.. after the incident..her terror of him, turns to loving him..

Her side of the story.. that she was not only a reject for her father and sister, but cruelly abused by an alcoholic father, who has scarred her for life!.. somehow in the first instance, he charges up his anger.. then possibly calms , thinking she's probably had it worse than me, her face distorted from one side... and love for her is felt within him as well..

Ahhh... how sad ..brilliant bit about her name rosie..talking to herself, referring to herself, keeping herself alive, reminding herself, she may not have desired company ,but still has a feel good impression about herself.. a comparison with Dutta's wallowing in sorrow on and off.

What a fantastic way to end the chapter, Naku gently wielding a wife's power, that which is termed as haq, right! that the self-harm has to stop! he is to keep away from the fighting ring.. I think he can sense she is reasonable and very tough.. but with a bank of compassion and mercy. Hence as long as he adheres to her wishes of keeping away from the ring.. life could bring in some happy days for him..

Rose.. thank you for a very moving chapter.. I don't hack your computer.. I just warm to the tone of your story, characters, events, setting, dialogues everything! a distinct essence of LTL1.

Please continue.. much love hammie.

Promo...

Wow going out together.. Naku self-conscious about her looks..must have got some nasty gazes but.. out comes what Dutta thinks about her looks..

Waiting for monday!