FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 10

Sorry i am late .Without further delay ,UD was fab.Your word painting was tremendous as previous.

Nakku's wedding with suresh😲,but bad luck ,you presented the scene nicely.Nakku,s condition was really pathetic ,continuous suffering.

KUCH AISI BAD NASEEBI HUM SE HAI A JUDRI

SONA BHI THAM LAIN TO MITTI SA BAN WO JAYE

The scar on her face,another aspect of her miserable condition.Roopa proved herself devil again but Dutta slapped her very well.His sensitivity was good.Nakku's concern was nice too.She wanted to keep him away from her bad luck.
HUMARA SATH DENE KA TUM EHAD LE RAHY KYO HO
HUMARA SATH DENA TO FAQAT GHATEY KA SODA HAY

The wedding reminded me of LTL .I was amazed when dutta asked about mangalsutra KAHAN HAY and pandit g was so confused 😆.But then he took out his own chain ,i always like this whether it happens in LTL or in some ff .The whole ceremony , their emotions and thoughts were well written.

NA HE KOI MUHABBAT NA MUHABBAT KA YE MALE(unity) HAY

HUMAIN YUN HE MILNA THA FAQAT LAMHON KA KHEL HAY

Once again good job👍🏼.Waiting for the UD.

Take care.

The silence between them stretched for long. She could feel his eyes calling to her to look at him. She lifted her eyes up.

" sahab..aaj ..aapne.." he was so intense and her poor brain was struggling to frame her thoughts correctly. She swallowed hard in her throat. Today he had saved her life. Protected her honor. Stood by her when she badly needed support. If he hadn't intervened and taken the entire onus on himself, she would have been shattered beyond imagination.

" nakku...apka yeh ..ehsaan..." he held up a hand to ward off another word coming from her mouth.

" ehsaan nahin galti." He corrected her. It wasn't a favor but a mistake? A sharp pain pierced through her heart. He was already regretting marrying her?

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