FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
hi rose
poor nakusha she had no choice pehle roopa ke atyachaar bardasht karte thi phir dutta fixed her marriag with suresh but suresh toh gaya ...ab dutta ne naku se shaadi karle aur bechari naku se kisi ne poocha tak nahi ...
anyway im happy ke dutta took naku s responsibilty ... ye shaadi in dono ke liye kasie sabit hote hai ye toh aage chala ke pata lage ga.. rose naku ke bare main toh hum ko sab pata chal gaya ab thoda dutta ke past ka batado

rose interesting story continuo soon
thanks😊
Edited by afi7861 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
hi rose
superb ud...suresh dead & dutta took nakusha as his responsibilty...scar on her face & roopa making it public...ud soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
awesumly touching part...pooor nakkku...but happpy that tasha got married...continue sooon
BTW,me going on a vacation fr a month frm 2morrow...will hav no net access...will read and comment as soon as i m back...plzzz dont delete me ...Luv ushankitvc
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

hi oxy rose
loved the ud...begining with dutta car stopping at temple..the sadness around suresh dead...dutta consider himself responsible for it...

roopa is a evil personified...the scar relevation...there must be story behind it & dutta's broken heart...which oxy rose know's it...i 'll rather enjoy the process ...as it comes😊

dutta married naku ...it reminded me of LTL...circumstances were different & the chain part

yes there is something darmiya between them...do ud soon ...

a rose for a rose
Edited by Nakusha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
hi rose
awesome ud...dutta took naku under his wing ...she has sad past ...nice story ...pls ud soon😊
Edited by uwith - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
TMD~chapter 2..
hi rosie..
Beautifully written chapter.
Loved the idea of the storm being woven into the tussle that was about to begin in the lives of the characters so far..
For suresh his untimely demise. For nakusha the storm of being bad mouthed about her fate yet again.. by roopa.the wicked sister.
For roopa , end of her reign of terror, upon her vulnerable sister.
But the biggest bolt of lightening has to be dutta's decision of saving the damsel in distress. The marriage scene was a reminder of LTL1 but with a tone of nobility around it.
Dutta's character seems larger then life already, the man has good intentions. How he embarks this new journey with the scarred naku is still to unfold?
I am looking forward to it rosie.thanks for a well thought, well written chapter.. much love hammie

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Rose,
How callous dutta can be, he doesnt remember the wedding he fixed? Wasnt he supposed to overlook or least attend to bless them? Maybe this is just another settlement he is used to fix as a rich zamindar 😛 Hmm n naku should feel obliged with his benevolence.
Wow, suresh bechara ek bhi bol bolne se pehle hi ludak gaya ? oops sorry, chalo ek hurdle gaya 😃Gosh more emotional atyachar on naku. Roopa ok now i get it right after your annotation, she is not roops n i must say she is the female version of ganpat 😡
Rose ek cheez batao, was it necessary for the wind to blow away the white sheet covering the dead body lol.. lagta hai zyada films dekh rahe ho 😆
Ok, the drunken driver being dutta,s employee n on his duty gives him sufficient guilt pangs to go ahead n marry naku. Phir toh yeh kitne ghar pe pati, baap, bhai beta banjayega PW mein 😆 Now its proved beyond reasonable doubt that dutta,s fate is linked to tragedy.
Nakusha bhi kuch kum nahi, orphaned, impoverished, abused, illfated nothing more left i thought but to add insult to injury she is scar faced. one would conclude its a gone case 😲
But what happens next is nothing short of a bolt out of blue, albeit with a silver lining.. again we have the raging storm to accentuate the mood 😉
Rose tell me why was the pandit waiting all this time, ok maybe he thought he would be called for the last rites of suresh ? (ducking from flying objects) 😆
Flashes of LtL does help in connecting instantly with the story
Thank you Rose for the annotation, promo n the update. Your promos does the job of a pm as well, a reminder of sorts. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Hi rose
super ud
lagta hai dutta has short term memory loss shaadi khud hi fix kiya aur bhul bhi gaya
roopa bahut bari drama queen hai
Poor naku why she has scar on her face ?
Ha roopa evil plan to get more money had gone down the drain
yaay dutta naku are married
waiting for next ud
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Hi rose

Tragic....suresh dead on the day of wedding...naku scar has increased further...dutta married her...roopa is very cunning ...dutta should get naku scar treated by plastic surgeon ...it may not matter to him but does for naku...she doesn't had to hide her face...pls ud soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI Rose

What an ud too good So suresh dead on his and Nakku wedding day I really feel bad for her and so Dutta takes responsibility of all that happened and of Nakku and married her. Roopa still evil towards Naku and trys to milk dutta while she can but she did not see this coming. Nakku scared face and Dutta hollow and empty heart what Is the story behind them can't wait to when It will unfold

Thanks as always pls ud really soon take care

Edited by FASSBEN - 11 years ago

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