LTL Written Update
Episode ~35
12th February 2010
Patil Nivas
First floor
Its night fall. Leela paces the top corridor impatiently and Roops too appears restless as she maintains a lookout. Leela whinges, where is Tai ?,Roops whispers , how should I know? tell her she needs to hurry up! oh for goodness sake its taking so long , if she comes it'll foul up everything!... Supriya turns up in the corridor and Leela asks her nervously, oh Supriya , you seen the house have you? I am sure you like it ? and did you see the swing down stairs? you can sit on it and watch the moon did you try that?.. Leela then grabs her dupatta , Supriya! is it new..? Leela tries to occupy her as much as she can.. stop her from going into the guest room. Kala meanwhile in the guest room closes the curtains , while Roops alerts her , hurry on Tai! but Supriya comes into the room anyway! and both her and Kala look at each other.
Kala gives her a big smile and informs, I was closing the windows, at night we have to , please come and she points to the bed, come and rest, and I have turned on the AC on for you also.. and Kala turns it on with a remote control.. now you can sleep peacefully. Supriya , hesitantly says , no.. I don't really want the AC, I feel cold.. Kala and Leela are not impressed by her response, but Roops adds on, so cute Tai! they probably don't have an AC in their home, they use a table fan! Supriya says, there's a nice breeze blowing outside, I'll open the windows.. but Kala stops her from going to the windows, no windows are ever left open in Bhau's house! when a shot is fired no one can tell! warns Kala. Supriya looks shocked and helpless, as Kala continues, this world is an evil place vahini, there's no goodness left, Dutta cannot sleep without AC, so you better get into the habit too! she suggests slyly... as her sisters smile on craftily... Kala leads her to the bed , come now.. and throws the AC control on the bed and the three leave Supriya to it , but Kala stops at the door and looks back and says, oh yes bolt the door from the inside vahini ji .. good night.. and the evil trio leave.. Supriya goes towards the door and bolts it from the inside..
The trio, look on to see if she has locked her door , and then they stand in the top corridor. Leela asks Kala , what were you talking about the AC inside?!let her die in the heat, what does it matter to us!. Kala narrows her eyes and glares at her sister and shows her a small narrow red canister.. Roops says, so cute! is it a body deodorant ? Kala tells her off, why do you see cuteness in everything? stupid girl!.. Kala holds it in her fingers, and says with an evil glint, this is poison! poison! and I have put it in the AC vent ..as soon as morning approaches , that Supriya will be like a dead cockroach!.. Leela giggles with glee , oh Tai you're great! and Kala full of herself says, one who doesn't understand good or evil ? how can they understand Kalavati...
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Ground floor
Naku walks around the lower section of the house..I did wonder, she is odd , she seems a bit of a Dutta's stalker , as I assumed she will be definitely be gazing up at his room.. but its later on that I realize.. that her walkabout is purpose driven.. no... not checking up on Dutta..
First Floor
The three sisters walk together, and Kala proclaims ,smoke! smoke! poison.. poison! My sweet brother's love will sleep so deeply that no one will be able to wake her from her slumber! how sad.. how can they wake her up? no one will know..
Kala suddenly realizes! Leela is there a smoke alarm in the guest room?.. yes Tai that's why I never smoked in there.. Kala looks worried, how can I make such a mistake! I forget to turn off the smoke alarm.. come with me .. and the three head off together.. to the main switch board..
Really colours had their facts mixed up.. there was no fire.. Supriya was meant to die with poisonous carbon monoxide fumes.. for that there is a carbon monoxide detector not a smoke alarm!.. which can be turned off manually.. this scene has been mixed up with fire.. and carbon monoxide fumes..
Naku meanwhile is still walking round the lower section of the house .. she then starts to climb the winding stair case towards the first floor of the house..she walks through the long corridor that has the sleeping area of the family. The sisters meanwhile make there way downstairs from the top floor to the ground floor.
They go to the electric fuse box of the house.. Kala baffled asks her sisters , which one would be the smoke alarm switch..?none of them know! and all three look in panic
Naku meanwhile walks past Supriya's room..
Inside Supriya's room carbon monoxide fumes begin to omit out of the air con vent.. and gradually the girl begans to smell it and very soon.. Naku stands outside her door , unfolding the letter from her chunni.. so now it is known why Naku lurks around.. to deliver the letter..
The sisters continue to get confused about the switch! Roops suggests, shall I sound the alarm , so cute! and Kala tells her off, stop your stupidity!
Supriya has breathing difficulties and she starts to have a choking, coughing fit!
Naku calls for Supriya after she hears her coughing.. so she can give the letter.. Tai! she calls before a closed door. Supriya sits up in bed with a start and coughs and coughs! and then struggles out of bed hyperventilating ,gasping and coughing..
Kala tells Roops to press a switch, but much to their horror Roops spots Naku outside Supriya's closed door.. and shouts , Tai where did this witch come from! and Kala turns her face from the fuse switchboard to look upto where Naku stood..outside Supriya's room!
Naku turns to go , seeing that Supriya does not open the door..
Supriya gasps for breath stands up but in her instability she knocks a bulky decoration piece to the floor that makes a loud noise.. loud enough for Naku to hear.
In all panic Roops presses the security alarm by mistake!
Naku yells Supriya Tai !and bangs on the door urging her to open it. Supriya knees give way! and Naku bangs on her door continuously open the door Supriya Tai!. but the poor woman gasps for breath.
Dutta lying on his back in bed.. opens his eyes suddenly, throws his bed cover , sits up! looks round still half asleep..Naku bangs on Supriya's door! open the door Supriya Tai ! Supriya hyperventilates. Kala near the switchboard, orders her sisters, go! and sit in your rooms! till there's no noise ! don't come out!
Dutta reaches out for his gun under his pillow, holds it up with a scowl on his face!
Naku calls out, Tai open the door! Dutta with gun held up in his hand comes out of his room.
Kala comes around the corner to check out if the coast is clear.. her other sisters too peep over her surreptitiously ..
Naku shouts out, anybody there! ..Kala and sisters run to their rooms. Supriya coughs in her room , full of carbon monoxide fumes... She struggles to reach the foot of her bed but finally collapses on the floor...
The sisters enter their room in a rush! Dutta poised with his gun , dressed in white kurta pyjama leaves his room and rushes past the balcony area and comes gliding down the stairs, aiming his gun left and right .. his sisters watch him hidden behind a wooden pillar as Dutta moves forward angrily points his gun in all directions!
The sisters run to see what's happening with Supriya..
Naku keeps up with yelling ...Tai open the door! ... but Supriya moans, and is knocked out of her senses on the floor..
Dutta ,gun pointed scales the winding stair case swiftly , as Naku continues with cries of Tai open the door! She turns her back to the door !
Dutta reaches the first floor corridor and points his gun right then left as he slowly moves his body forward carefully ..he lowers his arms and pushes his shoulder to check other rooms that run off the top corridor..
Finally Naku sees him come across down the corridor ,he too sees Naku outside the guest room and she reports, ohh Supriya Tai , he moves her aside and tries to open the door.. and realizes its clearly bolted from the inside. He pushes his sided body against the door , and it joggles but remains shut..
Down stairs in the man hall Baji , shoving his gun behind his back yells at the BG's.. hurry up!
Dutta meanwhile folds his leg and thrusts his foot forcefully against the door! once! twice, his lips pulled down to the sides..
Baji , followed by BG's, scales up the winding stair case. Runs down the corridor , and finds Dutta and Naku near the guest room, Naku shouts, open the door Supriya Tai!. Baji offers to open the door and Dutta moves him aside and continues to ram his foot into the door. Finally with one final thrust of his foot the door opens!
Dutta enters the fume filled room his eyes shifting carefully ,his gun pointed for any movement..he enters the room completely followed by Baji , Naku and the BG's ..
Supriya coughs! and Dutta points his gun down to a figure on the floor amongst the smoke and he slants his head as his eyes flash!
Naku, Baji look horrified at the figure on the floor. Dutta is shocked to see Supriya in this state , as are Baji and Naku. He turns to Baji , Baji take the gun! and he kneels beside Supriya , calling out , Supriya! he looks up and around and waves off the smoke with his hand and asks, what's happening here?.. Supriya! Supriya! he tries to revive her , as Naku too coughs, Baji says , Bhau! vahini is unconscious!.. Dutta lifts her head up and scoops her up in his arms.. leaves the room and carries her down the corridor in his arms wearing a dazed scowl.. Baji , Naku and the BG's follow Dutta carrying Supriya down the main staircase..
Ganpat and Babi , too enter the hall. Aye Sahib , turns up at the railing on the main stair case. Kala and Kishore come running too, followed by Roops and Leela in a dressing gown. All assemble in the lounge area. Aye Sahib comes down the stairs and calls out , what's happening Dutta ?. Baji gets the one arm red reclining settee ready and Dutta quickly lays Supriya down... Aye Sahib says, put her down gently , hey how did this happen to her?. Dutta pulls an angry face and, shouts, doctor! Baji! check the guestroom!. Kishore offers , shall I phone the doctor?. Kala in panic says no! Dutta stares down at Supriya, and Kala continues, no I mean I'll call him... and Dutta glares at her as she gets up to phone the doctor. Supriya continues to cough , and as others watch, Kala much to her dismay has to phone the doctor... hello doctor , I am calling from Dutta Bhau's house , yes he is fine! its Supriya.. yes come quickly please.. Naku rubs the soles of Supriya's feet to give heat to her body.
Baji goes to check the guest room, and coughs as soon as he enters and covers his mouth and nose with his hanky. He looks around the room , at the bed, at the units , the walls , the lamp shade, all immersed in smoke and fumes... checks the curtains pulls them apart and opens the windows.. and coughs as a fresh bellow of fumes and smoke covers him then suddenly his eye falls on the AC vent...and he looks carefully , removes his hankie from his mouth and veers towards the vent.. and says , there's some problem with the AC.. and he manually turns the knob off... he gives off a chesty cough and looks around.. and says looks like this has been pre- planned... Bhau! Bhau! he shouts as he swiftly makes his way down stairs... comes to Dutta and whispers, Bhau someone has put something in the AC vent.. Dutta ponders, Supriya moves her head worried on the settee and looks at Kala.. Kala seems calm, Kishore looks at her accusingly, Roops and Leela have shifty eyes, Ganpat , Babi look concerned, Naku wonders.. and Aye Sahib looks perplexed, Baji seems angry.. Supriya with a tear down her cheek turns to look up at Dutta who wears a deep pensive scowl on his face... episode ends..
Hamlet53 , 13.10.13
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The episode marks the beginning of many implementations to come, where Kala's secret , intrigue, conspiracy takes shape. It also shows in the main , the start of the battle between good and evil. There will be from now on fighting on both fronts.. vice and virtue. There are characters in the battle who command and those who obey those commands. There are also those characters whose actions speak louder than words ,and those whose words speak louder than their actions... There are characters who fight the battles as a means to an end. Then there are those characters who fight the battle for what they believe in.. serve the other ,without expectation of reward..
Precap: Baji says ,Bhau , I think .. and Dutta says, that this is an insider job?.. Roops says.. Nakusha.. I saw her outside the room.. Dutta questions her, what were you doing there?..
n.b~ many thanks for comments on previous wu.. ivy backlogs , bart back logs too! , warda, dilse, tammy, twinky.. loved your comments..
Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago