FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 32

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee

i came to the forum to see if u have ud ..there was article on MR & you did ud 😊

loved the ud ..will be back with comments

Nakushaaa tu ah gaye hummm.. aacha hai

Dutta gave the poor doc sups taste of his medicine😆.still she found him interesting as patient .he is a difficult case .naku ke khyal mein toh aajkal saab hai 😊 haan aise koi baat nehi.. patient hai uska..

Isliye she called to know his progress..

yes the two women have a working relationship..

Dutta standing at bus stop cursing his instinct to going with kaali gori advise to meet doc...ummh kuch zayeeda he soochta hai us ke bare mein..

Think of the angel & angel is there that's wht is in duttas case .naku showed at bus stop & he captured all of her ..nice one naku.naku wisely didn't made the frist move .the scene where he pushed in bus was superb..thanks😛 that you enjoyed the scene.. it was very by the way type.. any hing else is a bit too early.. haina?

Finally he had to sit beside her .i feel srif acting kar raha tha baitne ko toh maan tha .he appreciated her quality of honesty ..the conversation was quite entertaining he did gave her a smile too.

oh come on naku, had he willingly sat next to her ,tu we would say , or she would say line mar raha hai

Park mein dono saat ,I think dutta is trusting her 😃
me too think so... kitna ? ye tu waqat batiye ga..

You brought the loneliness & his past very well .father was cunning & selfish .he had tough time seeing his father given up on them for other woman...yes so as he stands today ,Dutta is product of a broken family.

Hammieee why us nahoos ka naam 😡,I know you got abt whom I 'm talking ,plsss uska naam nahin mein kya humsaab use nahin bardhast kar sakte

I know Naku.. bas maan mein hai us ke nand bajie dutta.. warda too wants that..😡

Who is eyeing dutta ? hammiee has something in her mind ..plz hammiee naku kuch patpadai aur dutta doesn't take wrong route to earn quick money

umhhh ,we'll see if the brave ,brawny man has a brain that functions..

Hammiee ff is making exceptionally good progress ,big hug & enjoy the weekend.plzzz os ke bare mein bhi sochna... naku thankyou for thinking so, that it is pacy.. its not like PR..ahhh the story of a hero.. ye FF kis ke bare mein hai.. you are the best judges..

As always ur amazinggg hammiee😊

you make me amazing.. naku.. all my readers.. hammie is zilch without you all. Much love as,ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Hi Rosie.. great to see you mate...
hey hammie i wished we both had updated on the same day but what to do i am very slow
rosie you can see abhi how slow Iam , abhi tak , have not read IWL.. will do.. soon, s soon as my UD is finished.. ju abhi nehi finish hoya.. busy with other bits in the house.
...coming to the update as always it was superb ..like the way the story is progressing ...the bust stop scene was great ..dutta pulling her wrist ..haaye my dil goes hmm hmm but what he left marks on her delicate wrist ..this was not expected , i always felt that in the show he held her wrist firmly yet carefully ..look he hd to pull her up on the bus isliye.. woh ju shy why bune hoi the..😆
..good he clarified that he did not intend to manhandle her ..i like it when he calls her kaali gori ..lol..now when he doesn't sit next to her initially that was totally in character , i was hoping that nakku would say sahab come sit but she too didn't invite him ..the conversation was nice especially the part where he tells what he thinks about her and madam ends up blushing ..hummh and some things don't change with Naku.. we warm to them..

so we get to know a little more about dutta's past , his father had an extra marital affair with a prostitute ( sorry hammie but why do i feel that history is repeating itself in my ff ..lol) because she is rich , oh god he wanted to live on the earnings of a pros ? how gross and don't tell you are planning to give screen space to deegu too in your story ..now i understand why dutta is so desperate to make money ..haaan woh baat yeh hai my rosie ke great minds think alike....us deegu.. ko tu mera maan tha lena ko.... so please bear with me..

duji scene was really cute and the song tu kal bhi aas pass tha ..cracked me up

haaa haa.. haan no UD is complete without the duji scene..now is it?

although i want him not to get into this crime world but i think you will go ahead with this thing ..no problem we shall wait n read how you deal with this issue

oyeee use black pathiani mein dekhna hai thujhe ya nehi..? humm? bol?..ROSE ,thanks for your great comment.. lifts my spirits up..😃.. much love, as ever,yours hammie.

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet
hi mirage ,great to see you mate,
fab ud 😊the bus scene & their interection seems something is cooking 😆pls don't make dutta take up wrong way...its a fab story 👏pls ud soon

thanks for liking the UD , Dutta going the wrong way.. ummh lets see what happens.. thanks with much love,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Hamlet
hi,Fassben ,great to see you mate..

👍🏼 Awesome ud enjoyed it very much. The whole bus scene and the conversation between Dutta and Naku was great. Dutta still desperate to make money but please I hope you don't make him go on the wrong path which I think he will as the story goes on.
Iam glad you are warming to the story, so far.. lets see if he makes the right choices..
Thank you once again take care , thank you mate, for reading and commenting, with much love ,as ever yours hammie..

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Thanks for the wonderful update, Hammie 😊
ivyyy my sweet friend.. great to see you ..😃.. It gives me joy to know that you are liking this FF..please continue to check it.. with loads of love Ivy , as ever yours forever ,hammie..

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
hi dilse ,great as always to see you mate
awesome ud...glad you thought so
dutta & nakus bus ride & park scene was awesome..ok nice you liked it

its a begining of long term relationship hopefully😊..ummh yes that's the general idea.

no digggu plsss i hate him..oyeee chillax... sab thek hoga..

dutta wants to earn money nothing wrong but should be right means..woh tu will have to be seen..

next post soon..still working on it.. listen many thanks for our lovely comment, with much love,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Hey hammie heyyy ranju..missed you loads .. at last i hear from you..😃

How are you? ..me fine bas was missing you..

Lovely FF dear ..thanks ranju.. if you think so ,means a lot to me..😛

Beautiful updates ..you are great to have read them all..me happy..

Hmm both seema nad supriya are present itna damaka ..yesss dekho , kiya hota hai..

once again dutta is ready to talk to her rather than supriya ahm that's the turning point of their relatioship if all this happens. well ,that is expected.. even I would not have it another way..😆

looking forward ...haan ,and me looking forward to hearing from you in future too.. ranju.. many thanks for your comment, much love , hammie.

Originally posted by: ovi26

hi ovi!😛 lovely to hear from you mate

Hi Hamlet, Thanks for the awesome update. always love your writing thanks take care
ovi , iam humbled by your comment, thanks for liking my work, and commenting about it, keep in touch ,with much love, as ever yours, hammie.

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet
hi sonaaa, good to see you mate

Loved the ud...dutta past to a extent in open...had a horrible father...living on money of other woman...no diggu pls😲...he can never share space with our dutta...chill mate..cool hai , ana de usko.. bit of masala!
...i loved dutta & nakus interaction in bus & park...😊...i don't want him to take crime...it depends what you have planned ...looking towards your choice...next ud soon

wait and see, sona.. what happens.. presently working on next UD.. will post when ready. Thanks very much for the great comment, with much love, as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet
hi jedy.. was looking around for you.. yeshhh till you came, now me happy.

superb ud! naku is turning soulmate for dutta...he shared more than he does with fly...no dengue ..i hate him ..dutta & crime ..wht does he choose? waiting to know😊
haaa hooo😆 loved your name for you now who... thanks for liking the UD, and many thanks for commenting.. with much love, as ever yours hammie