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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum updt...baaji, a true frnd...dutta so frustated with the probs in his life neverending...and more abt people caring fr him...he is damn pissed off...loved tasha convo...nakku is so patient listener and ofcourse help him sort out his probs...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Hammieee🤗

Nice UDHammiee👏👏👏.Dutta-Baji friendship is awesome😊.When I read ur UD I remembered some LTL 's Golden days with their friendship.Baji Knew the meaning of Dutta silence too.Awe cho chweet😳.Err I hate that stupid Seema😡😡😡.Truely Dutta is a lucky guy😊 bcos he didn't marry that witch woman.Awe Dutta repulsed.Twinkle stops her blah! blah!😆 ...overall its a great update Hammieee👍🏼.Can't resist myself from reading this wonderful UD.THANK YOU SO MUCH for ur lovely UD Hammiee😊😊..







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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Hammie ⭐️

You have hit the sweet spot with this UD, the rythm n the free flow just makes it such a pleasure to read. Luvd every bit 👏

It was a super "cute na" moment when he carried roops to the room, the small chat with roops was long due n she did the right thing by blurting out what pained her the most, umm im sure it would have hurt him equally.
Wow! the best part was how dutta almost subconciously reached his mom,s room n then something stops him from taking the plunge as you described from the cliff, simply Beautiful how you put it... hmm i experience this block myself so many times the difficulty in expresing matters of love n care with anyone. "Years gone by n still, Words dont come easily, like i love you, like i love you" - tracy chapman 😳

So its his guilt thats troubling bad n poor fella cant find a way to offload it. Only baji can sense his dilemma. Its so true the burden a person experiences when so many are on their back constantly be it out of love n concern, it scares them, the expectations..
Baji is right, dutta ke nazar mein 'chori bhi hai aur maal bhi', i stil have my reservations with naku dutta luv story or is it
"Jawaani jaan-e-man haseen dilruba, Milein do dil jawaan nisaar ho gaya
Shikaar khud yahaan shikaar ho gaya, Yeh kya ghazab huwa Yeh kaise kab huwa
Na jaanoon main na jaane woh, ahaa" 😆

But whats the devil got into this lady seema hohohoo.. all out trying to woo him... its kinda funny, dunno what to make of it. Seth tho teekh hi hai, paisa hai, aur teen teen bache bhi diya hai, pyar bhi karta hai, phirbhi ?? she,s crossing all lines of decency, maybe she thought dutta still has feelings for her n was only holding it back for her being a married woman. Wah! what a ploy she tried to get upclose with him, too good.. except that it rebounded badly, try karne mein kya hai? Oye oye munno ko bachon se pyar hai, naku sun rahe ho ?? bahut mehnat karna hai baadme rofl Dutta minces no words of his disgust with seema, kuch zyada hi hyper hogaya gadha, yeh nahi sochta kaun ek bina kamkaaj bin paise excon ke saat ishq ladane ayega 😆... except for that yedi kali gori. And i was kind of surprised when baji refused to help him in the first place. Baji tryin to be naughty, liked it for a change, nahi toh he,s everready to help his friend from such sticky situations. Maybe he wants his friend to experiment or even learn to have fun rofl...

Here they go once again to drown themselves in khatti meeti daru desi lol.. i hear its one of the most intoxicating thing that one can have n one wil be knocked off their senses completely, gosh! no wonder we see men commit such heinous crimes under its influence.
Dat teri ! this guy has decided to call it quits with the job, gaya kaamse.. aur shadi ke khilaf bhi hogaya all in one go, ediut ! ek taraf badi badi baatein karta hai aur doosri taraf kisi bhi keemat par paise kamana hai woh bhi der sara ???
So the net has been cast for the big catch, "lambu machli" n the bait will be too alluring to ignore, this jeera blade (what a name hammie) doesnt realise how difficult it is to handle this style sher loaded with attitude.

Aah! he,s here afterall to get his brainwashed 😃.. the runaway train back on track for the sessions. Supriya does a fantastic job n what brilliant writing here i must say hammie, you are too good to be true with the research work, mindblowing... i miss tahera a lot, she would have luvd this, after motor mechanics its lessons of psychotherapy..👍🏼 umm sups,s bang on when she points out how his face lights up with the mention of baji.. i too know someone,s voice come alive with the name of vahniji rofl... yeah, he has to draw smileys but surely he will be drawing sad n rude faces

hohoohoo.. naku must be singing, "jahan Teri Yeh Nazar Hai, Meri jaan mujhe khabar hai" aur khabri baji football bangaya in dono ke beech mein.
Jhoota! dutta didnt expect to see her, roz roz ka milan bus stop mein, like a ritual "do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke haan" .. im singing with baji now😃 Bee in her bonnet for sure, kali gori is relentless with her bhashans n he loves it too.

YES! the whole damn world is at your back cause you are such a pig dutta, koi bhi baat jaldi seede tareeke se samaj nahi ata tujhe. HAAIINN? he heard what she wanted to say ??? 😲 waow ! pyar mein log kya kya banjate hai? sher se choohaa bhi... haan, sher ab officially chooohaaa vahniji ke peeche.. haan, gas cylinder delivery man bhiii 😉

Hammie, you will know by now how much i enjoyed this UD, me goin gaga... wil only say
Thank you dilse, Take care !! 🤗

Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet thanxs for timely ud inspite of health issue dutta is unemployed coz of seema
hope naku helps him out
awesome ud 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammiee
you kept ur friday date with us😊thanks alot
i hope you are feeling better as for me feeling amazing after reading a amazing ud 😃

Roops is such a caring sis, the chapter brought dutta reason for showing detachment towards her mom.he had a guilt feeling..the reason for killing his dad is still a screat .dutta peeping in AS room was very well written

Seema is actual spicemen😆 ..trying to feed gajar to dutta & her behavior is hilarious,she should know dutta pe uska jadoo nahin jalega who seth ko hi Mubarak ho ,dutta apne kismet par khush hai.agree with his point of view

The pond scene brought back the memory of LTL..finally dutta ne seema ka kheema bana deya😆 .seth ke naukri chodhkar

Session with sups is going fine & kaali gori se meeting is always interesting ,he left the job & on interogation naku gets the answer woman problem ,kab ,kiyo aur kaha

LTL ka koi na koi namoona cameo karta he hai.😡.hammiee I guess u know who is my target.ab yeh one part wonder rahe toh its better hammiee

Cylinder scene was too good, dutta wants to earn quick buck not wrong if done in right way ,would luv to know ur version LTL1 ended abruptly ,I would had luv to know wht option FF ka dutta choose

Precap its seems naku is trying to find a job for him ,hammiee ur actually amazing luv u for ur dedication .may u be bless with good health always .take good care of yourself

Nahin toh next ud ka kya hoga😆

Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet superb ud...hope u r feeling well dutta & seema part was awesome😆good he left the job my exams are on ..pls pray for me &gang visit to unwind stress 😃 next ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Hamlet

First of all I hope you are feeling better. Very nice ud I am happy that Dutta left his job now I hope he will be far away from that seema. Dutta and Baji convo is always good they friendship is the best. It good to read that Dutta went back to therapy and this time it went well. The last part be between Dutta and Naku was nice I hope she will help him find a new job.

Thanks Once again Please ud It soon take care now
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi ham thanks for the ud seema apni haarkato se baaz nahin aayegi for gods sake she is a married women
beechara dutta seema ke karan mechanic se driver ban gaya 😡
the talab scene reminded of ltl minus chudail
good to know duttas sessions went well
baaji KMH se khabri ban gaya
im happy dutta left the jab
love the last part
enjoyed the ud n thanks for pm
get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet
fab ud..dutta left his job ..good seema is extremely stupid ..yes he should thanxs his stars...😆how is this guy shabir ..is he trying to take our duttas place😕...
dutta & naku are too cute😊 ..thanxs for ud ..get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet very nice ud😊baji & dutta are such good friends..roops is a caring sis..good dutta left the job...dutta always find his kaali gori ..😆on way..she must help him to get job..shabir plsss no.. take good care ..regards uvi

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