FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Warda.

Hi hammie 🤗 oyee warrie, tune blue mein feed back kyon de huumm? I know so I can say..hellooo rocking lardki in red!.. waise its highly unlikely..you rocking..😆..bhudi rooh hai tu🤣.. haaa hoo..

it was a great great update ...loved the flow at which story is moving and you always end each update on a note which makes one wait eagerly for the nest part ...the update was short though but respect your commitment that irrespective of personal work you still mage to give us our friday update.

thanks ,warrie, you know my life stops when it comes to ummh commitment.. I try

Supriya discussing her not so pleasent experience and chances are very remote if she is going to have any pleasent sessions..but pledealased like a proffesional she is calling him an interesting patient not a rude one lol...oki so both as related to the same case named "Dutta Patil" can discuss the sessions with each other noteworty the thing isnt approved by Dutta. well he needs to understand that the treatment is meant to help him to with life.

oki so mystery solved that how come they have gone so far that dutta is holding naku's hand yeh sab bus stop ka scene hai lol thanks to our local bus services where you literally have to jump to grab the bus.haha...but good one for tasha as they helped each other ahmmm and yeh kiya both lost so much in each other that conducter has to remind them to sit lol ...now another issue whether to share the seat or not dutta is too much why does'nt he takes the intiative himself...and looking at nakus confidence level i assume she has the gut to propose him too when ever time comes lol...tu baat shadi ki topic tak aa gaye hai and what i like more was how he turned off thinking abouit her getting married ofcourse if with someone else 😆 glad you liked the scene warrie.. here noone dared to hung off bus door ,in fact here the bus drives past with a sign full!😆

So finally dutta himself has to speak about his meeting with supriya naku bhi buhat ziddi hai ...and the amusing thing was how he was sulking that he had to break his ego to speak ...and a positive signal too given by dutta that he would prefer speaking to her now i hope naku avails this oppurtunity so that we too get to know the real reason which lead him to take such a big step.

warrie.. lets see ,both professionals are doing their jobs.. let see who he discloses to naku, or supriya.

I loved all the flashbacks mentioned specially the one with duji and the little sis wiping away the tears were very very moving...the whole portion is so beautifully described hammie that one can feel those voices echo actually .it was a chore to write without actually clearly indicating flash back.. its easier on screen to potray..

I hated his dad specially looking at the cruel side of him towards his kids how can one ignore his crying child...Dutta's childhood seems lost in the fuss created by his father and it does have a negative effect on a child its really sad to read how his childhood was spent...oyeee was it a revenge of LTL dutta beating diggu hahah not that im complaing hahah maaza aa gaya...aik aur hand to hand meeting ho jae 😆and kala seems a real protecting sisiter in the flashback ..

yeah beating pare use when they were kids.. abhi age kiya hote hai dekho..

This was extremly unexpected turn and have to say bery interesting one...ummh seems you are making path for him to enter underworld...if it happens iska matlab hai we can see him in pathanis and wearing ear studs haiii *faints* ...the name is actually funny jeera blade hahah but the man wants to rule ratanagirir woh tu apne dutta ka area hai well if he is trying to use dutta im sure usko ulta hi hoga and dutta himself will rule ratnagiri that is if he accepts this job which i feel he will considering the past updates how he wanted to get rid of this ordinary lifestyle...fingers crossed now.ummhhh warrie.. now you know full well that a bevy of Dutta dewanes are dying to see him in his real get up.. difficult to blot out that image..

i hope he doesnt get in any serious offence like murder as he already has a past record and still under observation too...baaji ofcourse will sing the song tu jahan main wahan lol..we'll see what his job description is going to be.. hummh Baji tu rahe ga uska Dutta ka dil aur jigar hamesha

Precap kaun hai yeh beesharam aurat 😆 waiting to check who is the lady getting this mahaan title from dutta ofcourse😆wait and find out...

Loved the update to the core the twist it takes with the entry of a new don it is making me wait even more eagerly to read the next part ...as always you did full justice with the story...Waiting for annots and fridays matineee 😊

lots of love :)thanks warrie.. you done me proud becoming a rocker... ohhh btw warda... loving Humsafer... but get home sick.. bahut bahut warrie..Mahira /Fawad great... ok baaby thanks for a great comment, much love ,as ever yours hammie.

Originally posted by: -bharti-

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will be back, in a week err mth maybe ?😉 ofcourse joking hammie,

Hi hammie 😊 hellooo, bart.. great to see you , you never let me down..

Sorry for the delay (its tue early morng) no excuses thou...

ummh almost thought , you stood me up.. but you didn't😃

Why do i warm up to sups more than naku.. She comes across as a thorough professional n above all is not mixing work with pleasure unlike kali gori n yeah the name fits her perfect. She promptly reports the result of the first meeting n is thinking of him as a challenge to treat.glad you feel that way about sups.. both women have their own strenghts.. they have to work in collaboration though.

There is no doubt Naku has fallen for this exconvict, yeh to hona hi tha.. her blushing at the drop of his name is sufficient proof, maybe she,s one of those who believe in luv at 1st sight... but then dutta,s growing comfort with kali gori ka kya kehna ? he who couldnt stand anyone interfering in his affairs is almost dancing to her tunes. I doubt if sups is even necessary as naku is all in one for dutta, "tumhi ho bandu. sakha tumhi ho, tumhi din chade tumhi din dhale" 😃 Supriya just has to surrender her case to naku. haaa haa, noooman let her do her job..

Now this is one too many coincidences hammie them meeting at the bus stop or is naku stalking him ? for sure. yeh lo, a man telling a woman to wait till the crowd clears, Then ma'm has to be reminded to climb the bus, she,s so lost in his thoughts...or maybe she was waitin for him to hold her wrists n pull. The way he calls her, "naku edhur aa" ? mama ki beti hai kya lol. But it was funny to see ultimately dutta struggling to catch the bus n naku helping him, kuch toh bahana chahiye ek doosre ke kareeb ane ki .oyeee it was the need of the hour, the haat lagana... na kerte tu bus miss ho jate.. or shall we say , they would have missed the ting! moment..

Dutta n drama goes hand in hand, wants to sit next to her but she has to take the initiative, EGO lol, naku doesnt need lessons to start a convo, she is born to chat, uff! pata hai naku bahut fair hai hammie, toh baar baar fair neck fair wrist ?? 😃..haaa hooo.. me know wot you thinkin' bartee... chaal because her rang was a hot topic in LTL1 ,me thought .. to harp on her milky hue..😉
hmm he feels comfortable in her co., no secret dutta, look where this chat is leading, to her shadi wants to make sure if he has any chance to dance lol ab achanak kya hua? iska fuse kyun udgaya ? anyway i thought gori ladkiyan will have little less trouble finding suitable groom, haan dahej ki chakkar tab bhi hai, n i blame the girls n girl,s families for promoting it 😡 what If they refused accepting such offers even if it meant a delay or no marriage at all, would do a favour to themselves from bein burdened or tortured, woh zamana gaya jab shadi was 'be all n end all'...true.. girls family to be blamed, and then they say humne apne beti ko diya hai..

Both waiting for the other to broach the topic, hey bhagwan! chalo kuch toh jijak bachi hai 😛 when they can chat on everything else why not this? The way he,s complaining to her shows the trust n bond he,s developed for her... "Pata hai nakuu" ??? kafi tarakki hogayi hai lol.. ooh bunny baaaby, batana aise kya kiya supriya ne tere saat... tera comments crack every one who reds your comments bart.. now when she suggest they sit n chat in the park he is at it again.. kuch toh gadbad hai, yedhe ko pagal doctor ko hi dikhana padega, blowing hot n cold always... totally mixed up, first he didnt approve sups discussing his past, now when he himself willingly raked up the topic, he,s upset sups revealed the details to naku, arrggh! Naku too not sure what she wants with him, when he is aloof she,s blushing endlessly n wanting him to share his thoughts, but when he reveals that he trusts none but her she hesitates, uff mera dimag ka dahi bangaya hai 😛 buttt buttt barttt.. i sold it to you didn't I? YOU LIKE IT😉... this senseless liaison between Dutta and Naku..😆

Young duji,s flashback was cute n beautifully penned. So we have the dreaded digu as well, hmm..the young dutta scarred for life by the wayward ways of a total misfit father. Its a sad sad childhood but baji was present even then as his chum to comfort n a strong positive kalatai to defend n protect. Nevertheless the damage has been done n he wants to get back at them in some ways which is the backdrop for his desire to make a quick fortune. It has to be seen if baji wil guide him the right way. Actually its never desirable that one turn an outlaw but compelling circunstances push weak minds... Hoping naku,s clout to prevent him as she,s the only one right now he,s listening to. Gosh! he,s been stalked by the vultures of the trade already 😲...ummhhh yes he has stirred up interest..

Dat teri ! the precap, looks like seema is at it again or is it some other? have to wait n watch...ummh, read in the next UD bart..

Thank you hammie for the brilliant UD, cant wait to see what choice dutta makes or what circumstances justify his choice down the road if he indeed becomes a don...Im sure you will have strong reasoning for any of his actions.

Take care 🤗 bart thanks a lot for your historically fantastic comment.. much loved by many.. look ummh missing you.. erhhh ok .. much love ,as ever yours hammie..

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

HI Hammieee🤗
hi twinkle what a lovely cuddly comment. good to see you mate..😃
Wow... Its an amazing update Hammie👏👏👏.Totally loving it❤️.Its like reading an interesting novel with lot of joy.Enjoyed each & every word.You did an Excellent job Hammie.Hats Off To U my dear friend/writer ji👏👏👏.Today onwards eagerly waiting for your next Update😉.Totally addicted to it😳.Thank U So Much Hammie for your marvelous Update.Twinkle tries to say one sentence in Hindi(don't know it is correct or wrong😆).app ka Update Bahot Accha Hai Hammie😃. heyyy twinkle! you have done very well.. correct message.. salute to your teacher.. thanks for liking the FF.. yes i am still working on the UD.. will pm you when ready to be posted... many thanks for your super comment, much love,es ever yours hammie..

THANK YOU

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

i know all are waiting for me but my area broadband line got burned so no net and using datacard but can't all the time so please pray that mtnl will soon make it ok because they are not responding to me

hi tammy..😆 😃.. sorry lardki.. tera roona ka yehe jawab hai mera pas, haaa haa. chaal you have written a couple of lines... ok tammy , we love you unconditionally , and wait for you.. waise he jaise we love and wait for mishu.. so come back to us whenever feasible... with much love,. as ever yours ,hammie.

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet
hi uvi, great to see you mate
nice ud😊dutta & naku spending time together ...at the bus was very nice ...dutta did open up to her ...dutta shouldn't fall in wrong company ...hoping for best ..waiting for next part ..regards uvi
I am glad, you enjoyed the UD, as we speak working on the next one.. with much love, as ever yours hammie.