FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13

First Previous

Page

115

Next Last

Frequent Posters

twinkle-star

@twinkle-star

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

HI Hammieee🤗
Wow... Its an amazing update Hammie👏👏👏.Totally loving it❤️.Its like reading an interesting novel with lot of joy.Enjoyed each & every word.You did an Excellent job Hammie.Hats Off To U my dear friend/writer ji👏👏👏.Today onwards eagerly waiting for your next Update😉.Totally addicted to it😳.Thank U So Much Hammie for your marvelous Update.Twinkle tries to say one sentence in Hindi(don't know it is correct or wrong😆).app ka Update Bahot Accha Hai Hammie😃.

THANK YOU

Edited by twinkle-star - 12 years ago

Quote

tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

i know all are waiting for me but my area broadband line got burned so no net and using datacard but can't all the time so please pray that mtnl will soon make it ok because they are not responding to me

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

twinkle-star

@twinkle-star

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
i know all are waiting for me but my area broadband line got burned so no net and using datacard but can't all the time so please pray that mtnl will soon make it ok because they are not responding to me

Oh Tamanna😲. Don't worry dear.Please don't cry.We pray for you.Your net connection will come soon.Every thing will be alright.Take Care dear.

Quote

uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

hi hamlet nice ud😊dutta & naku spending time together ...at the bus was very nice ...dutta did open up to her ...dutta shouldn't fall in wrong company ...hoping for best ..waiting for next part ..regards uvi

Quote

Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

hi hammiee

i came to the forum to see if u have ud ..there was article on MR & you did ud 😊

loved the ud ..will be back with comments

Dutta gave the poor doc sups taste of his medicine😆.still she found him interesting as patient .he is a difficult case .naku ke khyal mein toh aajkal saab hai 😊

Isliye she called to know his progress..

Dutta standing at bus stop cursing his instinct to going with kaali gori advise to meet doc

Think of the angel & angel is there that's wht is in duttas case .naku showed at bus stop & he captured all of her .naku wisely didn't made the frist move .the scene where he pushed in bus was superb

Finally he had to sit beside her .i feel srif acting kar raha tha baitne ko toh maan tha .he appreciated her quality of honesty ..the conversation was quite entertaining he did gave her a smile too.

Park mein dono saat ,I think dutta is trusting her 😃

You brought the loneliness & his past very well .father was cunning & selfish .he had tough time seeing his father given up on them for other woman

Hammieee why us nahoos ka naam 😡,I know you got abt whom I 'm talking ,plsss uska naam nahin mein kya humsaab use nahin bardhast kar sakte

Who is eyeing dutta ? hammiee has something in her mind ..plz hammiee naku kuch patpadai aur dutta doesn't take wrong route to earn quick money

Hammiee ff is making exceptionally good progress ,big hug & enjoy the weekend.plzzz os ke bare mein bhi sochna

As always ur amazinggg hammiee😊

Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago

Quote

Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

hey hammie i wished we both had updated on the same day but what to do i am very slow ...coming to the update as always it was superb ..like the way the story is progressing ...the bust stop scene was great ..dutta pulling her wrist ..haaye my dil goes hmm hmm but what he left marks on her delicate wrist ..this was not expected , i always felt that in the show he held her wrist firmly yet carefully ..good he clarified that he did not intend to manhandle her ..i like it when he calls her kaali gori ..lol..now when he doesn't sit next to her initially that was totally in character , i was hoping that nakku would say sahab come sit but she too didn't invite him ..the conversation was nice especially the part where he tells what he thinks about her and madam ends up blushing

so we get to know a little more about dutta's past , his father had an extra marital affair with a prostitute ( sorry hammie but why do i feel that history is repeating itself in my ff ..lol) because she is rich , oh god he wanted to live on the earnings of a pros ? how gross and don't tell you are planning to give screen space to deegu too in your story ..now i understand why dutta is so desperate to make money ..

duji scene was really cute and the song tu kal bhi aas pass tha ..cracked me up

although i want him not to get into this crime world but i think you will go ahead with this thing ..no problem we shall wait n read how you deal with this issue

Quote

mirage123

@mirage123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

hi hamlet fab ud 😊the bus scene & their interection seems something is cooking 😆pls don't make dutta take up wrong way...its a fab story 👏pls ud soon

Quote

FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

HI Hamlet

👍🏼 Awesome ud enjoyed it very much. The whole bus scene and the conversation between Dutta and Naku was great. Dutta still desperate to make money but please I hope you don't make him go on the wrong path which I think he will as the story goes on.

Thank you once again take care

Quote

emilymine32

@emilymine32

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

hi ham love the ud enjoyed tasha convo dutta holding nakus wrist remibded of ltl i dont mind even if dutta chose the wrong path love don dutta better than mechanic dutta precap seems interesting thanks for ud n pm