FF~Fettered Affection.chp20.p144 23.8.13 - Page 107

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Originally posted by: Warda.

hi hammie,🤗 hi warrie.. on time.. surely an improvement in punctuality .. tera.. siggy very interesting..

thanks for an awesome update...though all the time baabi and her *daughter were driving me crazy...no me still not getting baabis logic of saying no to this rishta because its no wgere in her mind hat he is an ex con ...she is just more concerned about malik naukar relation. its her daughter's future warrie.. Dutta ke history is not exactly hidden is it?

i felt very bad for dutta actually...he looked like a person craving for love and attention ...and how much he had suffered in his past life make me wish he gets every happiness and love he deserves.hummh his persona does invoke sympathy,but Naku is grounded too.. they make a good pair.. she's caring and steering as well.. which he what he needs.

when naku refused to serve food and later took it in his room i felt he might reject it now but naahh the man is in love and have been very felexible for naku specially.now wish he had shared with him what is bothering her but then again naku tu naku hai will seal her lips no matter how much she is suffering...i know its difficult for naku too to hold herself...wese why do girls giggle so much even i want to know 😛..ummh ab thuje bhi kuch hogaya hai? why don't you ask google chacha... this question.. you'll get a selection of answers.

and i cant even imagine baabi making sandwiches for him ...the whole family has already started discussing about baabi's refusal to this rishta ...now i hope baaji atleast put some senses in her mind ..awww now no sandwiches for dutta ... no!I mean who eats sandwiches for brekkie.. he should get roti and aachar!😆 haaa hoo.. seedha ho jaye ga!

the best scne has to be dutta going to AS room to ask for something to eat...he looked like an innocent child looking for his mother...im sure it was one of the moments AS will cherish for long...but baabi's interference and again reminder of naku's special sandwiches did turn him off...otherwise his mum was so happy cooking for him...

ummh wish AS made halwa puri and channa for him.. yummy..

ohh baabi must be feeling bad that dutta skipped his meal thats why she compensated it with tea ahmm naku ke haath ki...naku ki tu dil ki baat puri hogae to find a reason to go into his room...dutta is too much as well aik ladki khana nahi day rahi thi and he is asking her to put a button on his shirt 😆 ...now i hope the two sort this whole issue created by duttas to be sasu maa 😆

dekho kya bunta hai. warrie.. read in next UD.. still doing it.. am busy..

precap seems we get to hear duttas favourite word DHOKA 😆 yeah watch out for the space on my thread..

update soon plzz...as always your ud was dhamekedar full on paisa wasool 😊

lots of love ❤️
listen warrie, thanks for commenting, I know the snags you face.. but you usually manage to jump the hurdles... keep reading.. much love to you as well , yours hammie.

Originally posted by: twinkle-star

hi twinks.. wow what a start.. ummh very impressive..

Wah kya zabardast update hai Hammie dear...Totally awesome dear...Really feel pleasure to read this on this special day dear...Thank you so much Hammie.
glad you enjoyed it twinky.

.You did a great job even with your busy schedule...So sweet of you dear...I'm on over the moon now.Loved each & every word of your update dear...

awe...Kya start hai Hammie...Loved Naku's care & concern towards Dutta...She totally ignored her previous mind set...Loved Dutta's inner struggle...You wrote it very well..Awe Naku served food for Dutta...I totally loved their sweet convo dear...You penned it very well..you gave a reason for girl's giggle too😉😉..Enjoyed reading dear...Yeah!!.Our Dutta is a sweet tooth guy..Loved Dutta's teasing...Yeah Dutta!!!...Girls are unpredictable...You can't easily understand them...Hammie You are such a sweetie pie dear...Enjoyed each & every word dear...
yes , have to admit love taking trips back to the original Ltl screen shots are great..
good fun when I am annotating

Loved the way Dutta searching for Naku @ Dining table...Who wants this Babi Now???...Love this Dutta& his angry so much...He wants Naku to serve food for him.no naku then no sandwiches for Dutta..Weldone Dutta!!!...Awe so sweet...
hey great shot of Babi looks like butter wouldn't melt in her mouth.. and Dutta looks such a grouch!

Loved Baaji,Kala,roops,leela & Kishore ki discussion...Baji was right...If Dutta know about Babi's refusal then He he might have a knee jerk reaction..
more great screen caps.. of baji and Kala.

.Awe Poor Dutta...He got hungry now...Loved Dutta-Baaji ka awesome convo dear...You penned it very well...Dutta still didn't forget his past...But Dutta is looking like a small hungry bacha...Hammie loved the whole part dear...

Awe Hammie..Loved Dutta Roop ki sweetest convo dear...Baaji's teasing also cute...This Roop is really a cutie pie...Love her so much...So Cute na...Hammie..Its really interesting to read your update dear..I'm speechless...Totally awesome...You're such a dedicated person writer dear...Loved Dutta 's angry and his convo with Naku...Awe..finally Naku sew his button...Loved their closeness dear...It Reminded old LTL ...Precap also sound like interesting...can't wait now...Please update soon dear...
hey loved the picture of tea and cake rusks...👏 nice pic..

Hammie...Its totally mind blowing update dear...What a lovely day...Thanks a lot for your awesome treat dear...Its truly wonderful..So sweet of you dear...Hammie...My Heartiest Thanks to you dear...Have a great weekend...
thanks so much for a colourful, funfilled, fab! comments packed feed back.. and I LOVED your thread on Rakhsha bandhan.. much appreciated your contributions on the forum..still working on UD .aming to post tomm..thanks again with much love yours hammie

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet
hi dilse ,great to see you mate
awesome ud thanks for thinking so
dutta is trying to figure out change in naku's behaviour feeling sad for dutta...he doesn't know babi rejected him for naku dutta ,baji & roop convo was nice

precap make me feel dutta will know the truth

pls bring happiness in dutta's life

eid mubarak to you too😊

ud soon
thanks for enjoying the key points of the UD.. yes working on UD, lets see if I CAN POST it tomm.. loved the image plus your comments mate.. much love , yours hammie.

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

Awsem update dutta
asking nakku to leave nakku realising what she did and decided to leave her mother thaughts for sometime and leaving to get food for dutta . dutta angry on nakku behaviour and trying to find reasons for his restlessness and why nakku thaughs invading his mind nakku coming with food talking going on dutta understanding that something bothering nakku and trying to cheer her finallynakku giggling babi irritating nakku again nakku leaving for work early dutta waiting for her on breakfast babi serving poha dutta angry leaving family discussing about babi response and decided to leave matter on nakku dutta working on lappy but hunger stopping him baaji irritating dutta dutta baaji coming to aai for food aai sahib dutta scaring babi itroops coming with their food roops irritating baaji dutta hoping that nakku will come on time nakku coming early babi asking her to serve tea to everyone dutta scaring her and stiching button

nakku running restless dutta thinking what is wrong with nakku

tammy👏⭐️ exclusive feedback.. super duper.. how much every one looks forward for your screen shots.. absolutely fantastic.. no amount of praiseworthy words can match your comments.. treats galore of Ltl1 scenes which are alive in our memory.. thanks very much my dearest friend 😃.. you give all much joy.. with loads of love yours hammie..

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hammie hi, 😛
hi bart, good to see you mate.. lovely siggy's just one thing in the first one can't see your name..

Interesting title, but not sure how it fits the context.
its stuff one says but the tongue falters.. lest much is said
Hain? why so much aversion at the brief touch of naku?? is he alright in his head? agar usko pasand karta hai toh he should be feeling otherwise.. 😃 and to make it worse he,s not embarassed for manhandling her, now that is what he shld be doin.. 😕 I suspect its more to do with him going beyond his usual restraint.

Now naku guilt ridden as well for a different reason, yeah, she should be cause she was disrespectful n rude. She couldve politely put across whatever she intended to 😳 Or maybe lov does that to all, leave people crazy in brain.. One looks for constant reassurances.. But it could be too late when the other realises
she too has emotional baggage.. maa ka take on the issue.. so its like she's too is resisting.

Yes, dutta has every right to feel slighted by naku, she all along encouraged him n just when he began to be comfortable she had to rebuke.

Luvd this bit hammie, beautifully written. .. Dutta looking inwards n reflecting what naku meant to him. Always enjoy the brooding more than the brash dutta. Men seldom take kindly to rejection, especially from the opposite sex n even moreso if she is his muse. But here dutta was musing not in some drunken stupor or in rage but in a quiet calm manner. It did remind me of dutta of LTL in solitude in his room introspecting just when naku comes to return the MS. Brilliant work hammie. He,s best when he ponders. ❤️ 🤗 thanks yes for sure its the deposits of self convos that Dutta had ,that are responsible for such bits.. glad you enjoyed it..

Now what is wrong with kali gori, why cant she make up her mind, she,s only pushing him to the brink by blowing hot n cold 😡 But the bitter sweet exchange of words that follows is too good, had goosebumps reading it. Hahahaaa.. he didnt even offer her to sit down, what a shame, naku deftly instead of giving in to his depressing words jests, dash of humour with the remark, "opposites attract", luvd it, lightened the mood a lot. "Yes naku, there is this constant flow of energy with opposites but only within reasonable limits, nahi toh fuse udd jayega" 😛😆 I know by experience.
yes I can see bart where this is coming for.. but really logically life is all about action/reaction.. static.. still.. surely would spell death. lifeless..so movement is important..

Aaw, but the convo veered from disappointment to solace especially when naku reminds him of the positive attitude to look to the future instead of harping over the nagatives of the past. But poor girl almost breaks down in the end overwhelmed by her own past unpleasant experiences. Uff! Yeh dono ek doosre ko rulake chodenge Wah re dutta! khud purani baaton se ghav khuredtha hai, lekin naku ki purani baton se dard hota hai, nautanki salla!! 😃
empathy draws people .. they feel they gel.. so positive sign for a relationship to work.

Now she is barred from expressing her gratitude, phir bole toh kya bole, dat teri, he is back to being the most difficult man on earth. Jab kuch matlab ki baat poocha toh uska jawab bhi mang, nahi, how can you just let her off the hook, ediut! Instead he,s gulping rasgollas uff, im so irritated... 😆

he can't possibly tell her he's sweet on her.. not him at all..

Hmm yaar ab giggling ki phd kisko karni hai yaha pata nahi, Hohohooo wapis agaya apne aukad pe, "mein cheez hi aisi hu"... Naku quick to make the escape fearing his further probing. Uff, how can he miss this, "its you who came i didnt call", EGO, NARCISSISM, NAUTANKI throughout.. Naku deftly giggles her way out. UMM, naku this time gives babi back by invoking bappa. Lol.. Again, a new side to her.
well its true she came herself.. he made her guilty mission accomplished

Naku ki nashte ke liye banda need ko bhi tukradiya, ishakzaadeee 😃 "Isharo mein ishare", not tasha but duji lol.. sachi mein soulmates hai dono, agar naku nahi milti inn dono ka shadi toh done tha.😆 Ooh sic., babi at it again, packs off naku to work n the don leaves huffing n puffing 😉

hilarious...😆 comment

Wow, the entire PN clan in a huddle to address the current crisis. Its heartening to see their concern for bhao n kishore for once instead of a mandir visit spoke his mind n rightly so.
well its what families do .. crisis management

Desperate n hungry sher almost went to momma, 😛 hunger seems to have finally done what baji,s many sermons couldnt do. He almost approached her but still naku,s words stinging n ringing in his head, now wants by some miracle baji to do the honours.. Brilliant words baji, "i cannot replace the soft touch of naku" 😃 Kya baji meine tere shadi bhao,s karne ki baat abhi abhi kiya aur tumko ek sandwich nahi banana ata, you disappoint me man.

yeah.. largely the two bonding, dutta testing the waters ,with baji..

Aaww, it was such a cute scene AS leadin her pride to feed, cant recollect if AS had ever done this act of feeding in LTL... Dat teri, phirse drama, baat baat pe nakhre, he,s the king of nautanki if babi n her foolish words can affect him. Babi doesnt seem to have any strong reason for refusing the liasion, she looks indesicive n utterly silly now 😡

its like when every thing goes well then twist tu hota hai..😆

Kya bhao, sasu maa ke liye bade adhar aur concern hai already. Yeh toh naku ki pallu pakadke ke peeche peeche ghoomega shadi ke baad. It was time for bhao,s tongue to trippingly lyric the song 'Bin tere bin tere'... 😆 Dunno if his hunger was for food or for naku. Ab yeh naku is worse than her mom, first thing she does is run to his room only to display her indifferent attitude?? 😲 Have to feel for him, even thou he,s outraged its almost like he,s begging for some clarity.. True, guilty minds n hearts are prickly like needles.. Cant understand Naku anymore n gadha is bein extremely patient with her.

basically does not want to lose him either.. hence lukewarm

She has a lot to answer but looks like bhao gets to know about the thorny issue as the precap suggests... Heartbreak,

bart still working on the UD.. more in the next one..

Thank you hammie for the wonderful update, n more importantly the pm cause i was under the impression you didnt want me to read your UDs... N i took the liberty of commenting as well... Once again Thanking you for everything, take care.
ummh this one I best ignore.. have to say thanks once again, for reading my work and giving a wonderful comment.. like always... my love to you and angel both.. edit siggy.. much love yours hammie.

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet
HI uvi great to see you mate
awesome ud! dutta & his hunger pang...babi ke pohe 😡naku's working hour & dutta is missing her...babi has n't change her mind...liked roops & baji's covo...precap seem dutta's will get to know the truth...pls ud soon...regards uvi😊 EID MUBARAK TO YOU
thanks for reading and enjoying the key parts, love the image and wishes.. will UD when finished.. much love hammie

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi hammieee hi naku tu ah gaye..

Mein AA gai'.vm ke liye aur shamrock ke liye shukriya😊'how was eid? Me having sherkorma while reading Ur spicy ud'

loved sherkorma... want to have some now.. most of my friends were away on holiday but yes exchanged greetings on phone.. caught up with some afterwards..

Dutta's mind work over time empty stomach'naku ne khana kya nahin diya'bechare dutta thought ke hum aapke hai kaun'he gave a thought why naku's reaction have such effect on him'he is n't ready to acknowledge but he has fallen in luv with her'it isn't the adolescent luv'its more he somewhere found a soul mate in her..Which one desire in life.. well that is what we would all like to believe. all of us..

Naku finally served him..Naku ke giggle to hide her nervousness..Dutta does that to ppl'

yes nervous reaction.

Babi has turned into night watchman..Ya phir bat woman..Raat KO bhi naku pe nazar😡 'she want naku to avoid him'they stay in same house it's difficult '

day by day naku your comments are becoming lightly humorous😆

Dutta bechare ready to have breakfast & kali gori is n't there'no sandwich..babi ka poha hopefully jitna pullu se muh poochte hai us hisaab se dutta did the right thing 'avoided her sweaty poha'

ohhh my gawwaddd..😆! hilarious..

After ages he made an attempt to ask his mom to do something for him'babi ne uspar bhi paani fer deya'babi u r on my hit list

and my to... no wonder ganapat suck of chick chick!

This kala is an awesome sis..Just like PR (unforgettable)..She doesn't want her bro to be hurt'plan with baji & roops 'don't know will work

haan she loves her bro...

Babi needs opinion of baba 'why can't she be honest? Caste & other issue'.naku needs to take an independent decision'she is grown up & educated..

next UD mein more of this..

Precap se lagta hai kaihe dutta ke dil ke thukde Na ho jaye'hammiee rescue our sher from rejection & depression'need naku on combat'

ok will keep that in mind...

Hammiee as always Ur amazinggg 'plz ud soon
thanks for your amusing feedback naku, will post UD when finished.. many thanks and much love, yours hammie.