OS~A string of pearls. Wedded Bliss p. 146 ~ 16.3.14 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

HI Hamlet

šŸ‘šŸ¼Another part of beautifully written by you. Naku taking long to get ready and Dutta did not like that.
Dutta recalls what happened the last party when he slapped her in front of every one and still has not forgotten It, He worried how she will fit at the party knowing what she's like.

Thanks as always ud soon, Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
hi hammie ummhhh
Thankyou for annots and new part ... loved it a lot .. the whole scene was so cute ...tasha getting ready for the party ...😳
just a thought if a man like dutta who loves to linger in front of mirror then how less time wife will get to check herself out in mirror...aisi rooms main two dresser honay chaiye ..lol guess he knows he is a drool worthy thingšŸ˜‰...this ones for dutta,...for his killer looks 😳
Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale
Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale

and oyeee hoyee naku too in full form giving takar with her preparation...and what a sight dutta watching her from behind ...this sounded so romantic😳 ...now this one has to be for naku ...ofcourse from dutta ...meri taraf se bas dutta ke liye tha šŸ˜†
Dekh kar tujhko yakeen hota hai. Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai
Dekh paate hain kahan ham tumko dil kahin hosh kahin hota hai

that is surprising dutta being so patient when naku was getting ready ...hahah key to success to make a wife happy. lol...and so typical even after so much prepration naku goes bas sandal pehan lou lol ...it is said a woman saying she'll be ready in five minutes is just like a man telling he'll reach home in five minutes .šŸ˜†

Dutta is so possessive even at baaji's compliment to naku he started glaring wonder party par kiya hoga im sure many will praise her or give her a second look ...so be cool Dutta Patil šŸ˜†
Intersting univerity students will be there too...is it a hint something coming up in next part ...cant wait for that...btw if baaji and dutta are going in same clothes that means baaji is in his colorful floral prints *cough*šŸ˜†

Looking forward to the next part...its first experience for naku outside any patil niwas function ...im sure she'll feel comfortable when you know who is standing behind you to protect you all the time it certainely increases your confidence.😳
Hope it turns out to be a rocking experience for tasha and baaji too ..uski setting kisi ladki ke sath karwa daina so that he dont do his favourite job becoming kabab main haadi.šŸ˜†
Update soon plzz aur pm bhi kar daina ticket nahi lagta uska šŸ˜›
lots of love šŸ¤—
ummhhh
Edited by Warda. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Hi hamlet OS is a a different take of dutta & naku relation...😊..the way they have accepted each other with their shortcoming...the comfort level the getting ready part was cute...hope they will enjoy the party
next chapter soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
loved this scene of the OS dutta and nakku enjoying being in love and complete happiness,after marriage problems all sorted, his good mood is marred by the flash of that last party incidence. baji is looking forward to hope looking out for a future partner for himself.waisay uni girls might be a bit too much for baji, uski band baja daingi. thanks for a lovely romanttic ud.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
wow dutta dressing up and admiring himself in the mirror ..he looks like a killer in that black pathani suit ..and later on focuses on his shy wife and examines her from top to bottom..guy can never get enough of her ..on second thoughts how will he if she keeps stopping him in the middle ...now hammie don't give me the excuse that u will thrown out of the forum ..rest assured we will not let that happen so next time don't allow that nakku to interrupt him in between ..trust me nakku " koi nahin aayega"šŸ˜‰ ..he is so sweet he chooses earrings for her and then gets worried how will she manage in those high heels ..but the part where he opens the car door and keeps his hand so that she doesn't bump her head was the best ...hai such a caring hubby
beautiful update as always
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
hi hamlet dutta & naku getting ready for party very nicely written😊regards uvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
hi Hammie,
nice to c both Dutta and Naku dressing up.😊hmm,Dutta regrets his past...
waiting for an awesome party😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi hammie very nice part dutta naku getting ready for party and naku taking long to get ready
whole scene was so cute loved it
looking forward to the next part
ud soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
hi hamlet fab ud😊dutta & naku are awesome couple...never got to see them happy in LTL like in your OS😊its party time ..hope soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hi hamlet
superb UD 😊for me its a new story...i hadn't read before...party with dutta & naku & i 'm readyšŸ˜†
Edited by jedy25 - 12 years ago

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