OS~A string of pearls. Wedded Bliss p. 146 ~ 16.3.14

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

awesum updt...loved duttas possessiveness that nakku doesnt give him her time...hated how AS and kala talked to nakku...poor nakku...continue sooon...

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

hi hamieee

kya suprise deya😊naya ud with new story...enjoyed reading it, suds ekdum chinde chor ha😆dutta ke absence bar pe kabza..look at his stupid excuse gas problem😆begining brought smile on face...hammiee aai aur muskurat lai

wht a logic AS hai daughter in staying at home & double std for the bahu,kala neek me neek itne he ho sakte hai😆😆

shouldn't forget thank rose & bharti obviously 😊

as always ur amazinggg hammieee

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

HI Hamlet

Thanks for the lovely annotated. I enjoyed the ud poor Naku she whats to visit her mother and ask AS but kala and AS made her cry by the way they talked to her I hope she does go and ask dutta.

Thanks as always please ud it soon take care now

Edited by FASSBEN - 12 years ago

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Hammmiiieee ...well you know I've stopped reading on IF...but your title made me curious so I thought let me read on my bus ride home...

What can I say I haven't read your work in a while and it was really nice to read one now...of course your an amazing writer so it comes as no surprise that I rather enjoyed this piece of work...really the wording in the beginning lured me...very well written...and as for the story itself...clearly their relationship is actually alive lol...even if Dutta seems a little uhmm bossy haha...gee i wonder who that reminds me of...Naku wanting to go visit her mum and having trouble just seeking permission...its seems like a complicated task with a Kala, AS, and god knows what Dutta will say...I guess we'll have to wait to see that...

Anyway loved it...keep it up...uhmm yes I'll read the next one hehe ... I started so i must finish this story :P UD soon...see ya

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: -bharti-
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hammie, rose win n i lose this UD, you are two steps ahead of us 😆

lol..bharti i don't understand how you lost and i won coz we both wanted her to update but will agree with you hammie is ahead of us not just 2 but 10 steps 😆

hammie ..hey thanks so much for keeping my izzat ...

so suds trying to raid his bar ..idiot should have ENO to get rid of his gas🤢..whoa dutta drinking and that too topless ...seriously bande ko bahut garmi chadi hai and straight away pounced on poor nakku ..can't even wait for a proper honey moon that i was planning for him ..lol..such a despo ..asking her to change in front of her " uff bharti i am dead" this dutta has gone insane 😆😆 at least nakku is trying to control herself by checking if AS needs water ..lol..what an excuse ..chalo finally she is back as poor baby is feeling neglected..so she has finally landed on her marked territory , on his HAIRY CHEST ☺️..see hammie even he is asking for privacy now plz send them on a honey moon 😳..so he manages to get what we all desired ...i can understand what exhausted him *cough cough*

lol ..kishore n his pravachans ...this guy should become a sanyasi ..

wow AS , n her double standards , own daughter is happily sitting at her home after marriage but daughter in law can not visit her mother's house ..wah wah ..AS never fails to disappoint me ..btw i quite liked kala's description ..

once again very nice update

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

lol..bharti i don't understand how you lost and i won coz we both wanted her to update

I meant hammie did full justice to the phulwari as you desired, but the shower scene i was waiting was cut short for now ... Now we know our innocent minds only need to desire n hammie is at it even b4 we convey, telepathy at its best or is it birds of a feather flocking 😆

luvd your comments rose..👍🏼

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Hi hamlet its a awesome UD...logged in to read FA ...here i get OS ud...liked this too dutta & naku are happily married...AS & her double std...its a realistic potrayal & loved reading the os ...thanxs alot 👏

Edited by sona89 - 12 years ago