OS~A string of pearls. Wedded Bliss p. 146 ~ 16.3.14 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
bharti ...then its done ...shy nakku , shameless dutta ...drenched in water ...perfect ambiance for HONEY MOON ...what more do we innocent readers want ? plus in LTL we were deprived off a perfect SR so here hammie has to fulfill our demands ..if she can stretch a simple party to 4 updates then just imagine what will happen if tasha go out for a week long honey moon ( 7 updates toh bante hain boss)😉

hammie ..i know you don't need inspiration but still giving you a better view of what might trigger off your imagination 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
lol ..bharti ...we think alike 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

bharti ...then its done ...shy nakku , shameless dutta ...drenched in water ...perfect ambiance for HONEY MOON ...what more do we innocent readers want ? plus in LTL we were deprived off a perfect SR so here hammie has to fulfill our demands ..if she can stretch a simple party to 4 updates then just imagine what will happen if tasha go out for a week long honey moon ( 7 updates toh bante hain boss)😉

hammie ..i know you don't need inspiration but still giving you a better view of what might trigger off your imagination 🤣

. i was puzzled with this photo for full 30sec wondering what is so inspiring in this, dat teri ! how can we forget phulwari, dil garden garden hogaya 😆 😆 hammie ur thread is hijacked by two despos, wait ive another phulwari n pani pani 🤣
Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bharti we have put the message across through the pics ...the phulwari is now in hammie's hands ..i guess she will definitely put it to good use ..i shall rest my case now or does she need more ideas from innocent minds 😉


tip tip barsa paani
paani ne aag lagayi
aag lagi dil mein toh
dil ko teri yaad aayi 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

bharti ...then its done ...shy nakku , shameless dutta ...drenched in water ...perfect ambiance for HONEY MOON ...what more do we innocent readers want ? plus in LTL we were deprived off a perfect SR so here hammie has to fulfill our demands ..if she can stretch a simple party to 4 updates then just imagine what will happen if tasha go out for a week long honey moon ( 7 updates toh bante hain boss)😉

hammie ..i know you don't need inspiration but still giving you a better view of what might trigger off your imagination 🤣

very clear view
P.S...a special request plzz exclude the chikni chameli look 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou Hammie for the lovely annots...😊
and thankyou rose for a new OS...😃
this is for you rose not for you hammie😛 new OS humay rose ki wajah se mile ga na 😉

Edited by Warda. - 12 years ago
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Wedded Bliss

part ~ 1

Their marriage by no means was unusual from where they hailed. For it was arranged pre-dominently, therefore a love marriage it could not be termed, in the broad sense of the word.They did not go out of the way to select each other as becoming life partners. Hence sans romancing, none billet-doux notes were exchanged.. no dates took place. For these on the side delights, were quite out of the question. As a stiff sullen gravely awkward chap like Dutta would never have allowed it in the first place.. and as for her , she was bashful to no end. So his gravity and her modesty barred the sweet tinkle of any pre-nuptial ardour.But their families, though chalk and cheese in social status, bowed their heads to their union. One could say it was circumstantial. Happened by way of default. But to cut a long story short ,she landed in his household and one thing lead to the another. Now if one was to weave in romance one could say fate always meant them to be together, they were made for each other and so once married they are now living happily ever after..as can be.

Today, however was out of the ordinary.They had returned to their stately home after a party.Upon entry, the last thing desired was to be waited upon by family members, especially his mother.Dutta was relieved to discover that all were safely tucked away in their beds.However it seemed, Sudarshan was the only one awake. Disgruntled, Dutta spotted him skulking around his bar,"tu tum sauie nehi Sudarshan? Dutta questioned with one eye brow raised, and indicated that he noted with disapproval ,his brother in law's raid on his bar in his absence, "woh kya haina Bhao, zarre pyas lage hoi the ,aur peith mein gas the tu bar se soda water, lena aya tha"admitted Sudarshan sheepishly. Dutta, nodded, and retorted, "there is lemonade in the fridge you could perhaps have that instead and lay of the Schweppes bottles ,as they are especially for me to mix my drinks, Dutta emphasized coldly.. Naku by Dutta's side, nudged him to let it go , and looked down at her in anger,"maine kya khalat bola hai, maat mujhe toka kar.. "he rumbled and headed up the stairs for their bedroom.Naku shook her head and proceeded off to the kitchen to collect the jug of water for the night, and hoped he would have calmed down by the time she got up stairs.. Dutta barged into his room ,he needed a stiff drink to herald some calm, ummh being married meant keeping one's simple harmless desires like having an odd drink at bay.. why does adaptability come into it. He needed a drink, a small one, why does he need to keep in mind that it was a custom in him that she disapproved off. With, his mind made up that he would go ahead anyway, he headed for his wall unit which held the decanter and a couple of glasses, and quite impishly poured some cognac, downed it in one gulp , wiped his mouth in a hurry with his back hand, and with a smug look progressed towards the bathroom..

Savouring and rolling the dry bitter taste of the spirit in his mouth, as was customary he showered and changed into his white pyjamas, but purposely left his kurta off, and then paced up and down bare foot in his room for her to arrive...ahhh, time with wife, best part of wedlock he mused as he, scratched his indented chin lightly. His pacing made his soft long pink soles hot as he wondered , ab , use aana mein itne daer kyun ho rehe hai?.He very nearly cursed the largeness of his house, now had they lived in a self contained studio flat she would have been by his side in bed, curled up real close in his hairy pit , he smiled wickedly. She came, much to his immense joy, and his eyes followed her sari clad shapely figure as she moved towards the bedside table to place his jug of water. She felt his eyes perforated her whole form from head to toe, "Naku, edhur ah!" he commanded, and she moved slowly towards him and stood before him. Gradually she raised her green doe eyes and willingly submitted to his narrow meaningful gazes.. "hummm, bolo Saab? she, whispered innocently, yet soon after seeing he stood before her bare chested right down to his hairy torso, she remarked,"kurta pahen lo Saab sardi lag jai ge.."before she could finish he grabbed her shoulders and forced her back to the wall near the door, plastered her to the hard surface and pressed his body against hers and landed his lips on hers.Wide eyed she placed her small warm palms flat on his rough hairy chest and wiggled about between the wall and him, "Saab chooru mujhe", she pleaded and he groaned "nehin! I have been watching and desiring you all night in the party Naku .. ab chup kar!, aur don't stop me!".. he warned and she closed her arms around his naked back as his mouth grabbed hold of the supple skin of her soft neck,"ummh, she moaned and slapped his hard bare back, as she felt his mouth nip her.. and he pulled his head back , and looked tenderly into her green eyes narrowly "woh kya haina Naku thuje bola ju nehi maina ke tu bahut hawwt lag rehe the aj sham ko, so thought thujhe apne rough style mein bol doon.."he drawled as his lips parted and aimed for her rosebud mouth yet again.. she pushed him away gently.He moved back his compelled body and she squeezed out and made way towards the bathroom to change and he yelled behind her,"oyee mera samna change kerte hoi thujhe kya takleef hoti hai? bewakoof aurat,biwi hai meri tu!..and on hearing the click of the bathroom door he made way towards his bed and lounged on it with his long muscular legs yanked on one another.. his broad naked back rested against the bed head rest.. and his wide palm caressed the unoccupied space beside him.. he sucked his lower lip briefly as he closed his eyes in deep contemplation of his unmentionable supposed to occur activities.. with her..this was their time..

She emerged out of the bath, her hair open fell in loose long kinky tresses down her shoulders.. white fitted kurta pyjama sure suited her. His eyes roved delighted on her shirt that hugged her small curvy bow waist, he mused besotted, it fitted perfectly against her flat belly.. boasting further up her full bosom. He smiled at her, with the devil in mind and slowly raised his right palm and beckoned her towards him with his long slender fingers. She stood still and shook her head slowly and he inclined forward on the bed towards her, "oyee come here now! teaser.. before I get up and make you!.She bit her lower lip and moved both her arms behind her back challengingly, goading him on. But he relaxed and moved his back against the bed board, slanted his head, and with a brisk beckon of contracted eyes, indicated to her the empty space beside him.."Naku, chal ah bhi ja ab kitna wait karie ge.."he remarked irritated by her delayed tactics. But she turned and made way towards the door, with reason,"woh Saab, will be back, just want to look in on AS, ke pani hai unke pas.."and she scuttled off as he watched her leave. His eyes blinked once, this was unbelievable, kamra mein ah ke bhi , yeh lardki, phir chale gaye.. he certainly felt side lined... why was she concerned about all the other occupants of his family. His forefinger tweaked the poker spikes of his stubble cheek, he was not quite sure if he as a man quite approved of not having top priority in her life. She returned and sat on the edge of the bed where he reclined.. he stretched his long sinewy arms and by her shoulders, pulled her head towards his hairy chest..the move made her hair fall upon his hairy chest and his tummy wobbled as he chuckled.. "na kar.. gudgudi hote hai!"he drawled, as she placed her palms on his warm chest and played with the shiny dark curls.Aroused by her tender touch, he covered her hand on his chest under his wide palm, as his full bow shaped lips pressed on the side of her head.With free flowing intensity in this eventual near moment with her, he sighed,"Naku thujhe pata haina jab tu is kamra mein mere saath hoti hai , tu it's our marked terrority.. ummh and as such ,I expect you to focus on me and not the rest of Patil Nivas.. ummh surely you know that humm? he asked as he moved both his arms around her inclined back over his upper torse and caressed her back.."bol, pata hai thujhe ya nehi? she raised her head only inched away from his stubble indented chin.."pata hai Saab , maagar shayed ap ko nehin pata ke mere aur bhi responsibilities hain us ghar mein ap ke sawa" she clarified. He squeezed his arms around her back till she moaned,"ooh ho, dard hota hai,"he folded his chin and muttered on the top of her silky haired head,"shuddup! ghalat time pe ghalat baat bolte hai tu!",he growled. She pressed her hands against his tough firmed up muscular chest and sat up, and established eye contact with him.."dekho Saab, Naku ka lagaan ek joint pariwar mein hoya hai, .. which Naku likes"..she hastened to add, but he moved his hand and moved the wavy strand of hair near her peaches and cream complexioned cheek,"maagar mujhe nehin pasand ye arrangement, kya hai koi privacy nehi! jab dekho tu kabhi kitchen mein ghussi hoti hai ,kabhi ,AS ke diwale, mera number kab aye ga? main din bhar ye he soochte hoon".. he whined like an unfairly treated school boy..in affection she leaned forward and felt his stubble face in palms and fondled his rosy cheeks meaning fully.With eyes closed in ecstasy he received her handy work as she continued her reason .."Saab ab tu pas he hoon main ap ke" she whispered.. He grabbed her invite and pulled her over his body and hurled gently her tiny body to his side.Leaned on his elbow he watched her lying there at last, and succumbed by his want, he half covered her with his bare torso. She sighed as his mouth groped for the nape of her neck hungrily, and her hands frantically covered his taut body with the counterpane. Prompted under the secure coverage of the sheet and supremacy over her, he shoved his muscular arms under her shoulders and peered narrowly into her green eyes, "kya hai hummh? "he asked wickedly, and she stayed captured by his lion like eyes and whispered,"kuch nehi".Bemused he looked down at her slightly opened kurta neck, which partly revealed her smooth skin and she turned red in the face at his intention.. but without further wastage of precious time, he sank his big square head lower down her neck.. slowly and gradually his large and heavy frame weighed her down and she closed her eyes tightly..

Exhausted and breathing heavy he shifted himself and flopped on his back with a thud on the bed, folded his bare arms over his forehead,"subah wake me up before 9.00 am Naku, Baji ke saath we have to see a client".. he instructed .. and then rolled over to his side on the left portion of the huge king size bed. She turned her head and saw rolled on his side his long taut sided back body and then turned her head back to her own side of the bed and wondered how on earth was she supposed to seek his permission that she needed to visit her parents.. her Aye was unwell and needed her help for a short while ..

The new day dawned, on the dot he was as instructed, stirred by his wife with his cup of morning tea.After breakfast, that which Naku, obviously made as the dutiful Bahu, and served to each person according to their required taste.Sandwiches for Saab, fresh fruit salad for his sisters and poha for all else.

Dutta with narrow eyes observed her from his head of the table seat in silence.. this was his wife's joy.. being the administrator of his whole family.. they literally ate out of her hand.. he almost chuckled, thek hai, lagan hai chlene do!, and then looked across to Baji, "chal let's go", he ordered and both friends walked across the hallway, towards the black jeep, geared up for work.

For some reason, Naku thought it best she involve her mother in law, with regards to her visiting home.. AS, wanted her knees to be pressed lightly as she sat in her lounge chair after breakfast.Saab's bored older sister Kala who held clout within the household, and whom Naku was aware never to ever get to her wrong side, sat on the settee, her painted nails flicked through a magazine.Her husband on the other hand dressed in kurta , pyjama stopped briefly only as he announced to every one,"main zarra parwachien sune ja raha hoon , khane ke time laut aon ga".Naku sat on her folded thighs as her she applied gentle pressure on AS's knees.She decided this was perhaps the moment, where she could make her request known.,"woh AS, maine ap se ijazzat leni tha ghar jane ke liya.. Holi bhi ah rehe hai , aur meri Aye ke tabeiyaat bhi thek nehi". Naku, shortly realized that AS maintained a silence, but she looked across to her older daughter seated on the settee opposite her.Kala crossed her leg and fixed the falls of her sari demurely,"ap phir se apne ghar jana ke baat ker rehe hain vahini?, mujhe yaad parta hai ke ye ap ka teesara chakar hoga, apne ghar ka lagaan ke bad.."and she looked purposefully across to her mother, who sat and received the pressure therapy at the hands of her daughter in law.Still AS, responded to her older daughter's persay "dekh, Naku, Kala thek kethe hai ,zayed waqat thujhe humare saath guzarna chaiye, yeh baat tu Babi bhi kahe ge thujhe, ke ab tumhara lagan ho gaya hai ,aur pati ka ghar he ab tera asli ghar hai"..reminded AS. Naku, felt she needed to correct AS, "pun AS, meri Aye na he mujhe buliya hai, Bappa shapat ,main ne kuch nehi bola"..defended Naku.Kala gave her mother, a sly smile, and AS, responded,"waise humne tu soocha the, ke tum tu baache ho Naku, maagar tumhari Aye se ye umeed nehi hai ke tumhe bar bar ghar buliye.. aise he phir lardkiyoon ke ghar nehi baste" she warned. Naku slowly removed her palms from her mother in law's knees, hurt, deeply inside and slow tears began to gather in her eyes..Kala saw and put in her timely addition,"Naku, AS ke batioon ka bura nehin mana , kuch ghalat nehi bola unhoon ne, waise vahini, ap ne Bhao se baat ke is bare mein?",she queried. Naku teary eyed shook her head, and AS chipped in , "dekh Naku ,aagar Dutta thujhe ijazzat deta hai, tu humein koi aitaraz nehi" she consoled.Naku smiled sheepishly, and stood hrr ground,"haan phoochoon ge Saab se, jab woh khar lautien ge, pun maine socha ke phele ap se baat kar loon,"Kal narrowed her eyes and gave Naku a big lipstick smeared cheek to cheek smile,"kyun Naku , kya tu soochte hain ke AS, teri safarish karien ge Bhao se?, tu ye bhi sun le ke , Bhao ka thujhe pata hai woh karta hai ,ju us ke maan mein hota hai, tu ye kam tu thuijhe khud he kerna pare ga,"she said snidely, and before Naku recovered from the eldest sister in law's jibe , Naku's mother in law joined in,"bhai mujhe tu tum dono is baat se dor he rekhna Naku! pati patni ka problem hai, waise bhi bete ke lagaan ke baad aagar bete ke maa kuch bole to, tu log bol deti hain ke saas bahu ke saath aacha bartao nehi kerti"... to be continued.Hamlet53~ 21.3.13

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Edited by Hamlet53 - 11 years ago
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hi hammmie😊
thankyou so much for such an amazing update...these OS are indeed pearls from your pen...i wish it just goes on and on...and love the way you are carrying this thread with diffrent themes...
from shopping to kitchen to party and landing in wedding bliss
i loved this OS a lot for three special reason aik tu its coming from you tu i love it second one you should know😳 and third one is way the issues of a joint family are highlighted ..i personally feel that both joint nad nuclear families
have ceratin plus and negative points.though in a joint family your attention is diverted from a specific person and you have to live with few compromises mostly... the good side is you are togther in thick and thin and become a helping hand for each other..in asia as you know how much emphasis is given to a joint family and dutta and naku perfectly fit in that picture ..where they get less time to spent together as equal importance has to be given to rest of the family too and ofcourse dutta had to control his beintehaa pyaar for naku jo kabhi bhi usya uss par aa jata hai 😆...but its important to spend quality time together rather tahn other way round :)
and last but not the least it badly reminded me of PR..duttas advances towards naku made me miss major so much😭...and ohh not to forget naku still not changing clothes in front of him haha😆

Lovely start to the OS summing up the whole long journey in few lines ...and we can imagine how their pre-nuptial period can be haha hard to imagine them going on a date ..han the way dutta is now after marriage if he was the same before then we can speculate way too many things to happen😉. ...
hammie you have something against sudarshan😆😈 you never leave a chance to band bajao him haha kabhi its dutta and kabhi baaji...gosh dutta is so possessive about his bar makes me feel how special baaji is that he easily share his favourite place with his pal only ...

ohh what a simple harmless desire to have a stiff drink seriously this man no doubt naku rolls her eyes over this..dutta is all ready to attack naku lol and my god he is so impatient cant even wait for some time...nakusha on the other hand is seriously too innocent "kurta pehan lou saab sardi laag jaegi" haha man he has purposefully left it out.😆
hammie aik din dutta ka shook pura kar hi dou that naku doesnt move to washroom to change...this one thing always makes him sulk naku is too stuborn too😆 a woman of principles we call 😆
now it is indeed unthinkable that at that time too she skipped to check AS what a star plus kind of bahu who is always ready to please rest of the family...
lovee this sulking dutta a lot who is too fond of special attention itni si ignorance bhi hi cannot tolerate...but thats how things are shaped when you have to look after each and eevery member of family you have to wait for your turn 😉

for the rest of the "unmentionable personal activities" between dutta and naku i want to thank rose who was demanding a honeymoon lol yehh bhi mini honeymoon hogaya inka 😉 ...rest of the things we can keep to our imagination and in that case i think rose and bharti are too creative who have already posted his apt pics😆
ohh she wants to visit her aaye baba i hope he reacts sensibly i do expect this from him that if her aaye needs her help he will never say no...

Now coming to the shocking part of the story yeh AS haillaa aik dum saas type cheez kesay ban gaye😲...hammie very interesting twist ..we have always seen her doing jagdame jagdame and being so kind always ohh han she faints too at times ummh most of the times 😆
but here she looked like kals mom ...i felt really bad for naku when her eyes were filled with tears specially when she is doing so much for them and this is the return she is getting...AS i felt is like a puppet in kalas hands the way they were exchanging looks towards each other poor naku i found her alone and helpless unless she is in secure arms of dutta.
seroiusly AS was giving her a lecture that after marrige pati ka ghar is sab kuch then how come she never asked her own daughter to move to her husbands place...i hate the double standards the most in anyone.what you disapprove for others you are yourself happily following that...specially it is a saddest fact of a joint family that daughter and bahu are treated in different manner...by the end of all the parts i am looking forward to have a happy ending where AS treats naku like a daughter too...now im just keeping my fingers crossed what dutta will say...hope he doesnt become a gadha ...

hammie i cant wait to read the next part plzzz jaldi post karo naaa ...and plzz do add baaji to in next update :)
loved every bit of the story its so fun filled and it is highlighting one of the issues of our society too...im sure its going to be a great blend of emotions...post soon plzz...lots of love
ohhh i forgot to add there were sandwichess too 😃
Edited by Warda. - 12 years ago
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res..
hammie, rose win n i lose this UD, you are two steps ahead of us 😆

Hi Hammiee 😊
Rosiee rules, what a telepathy between like minds? you come up with a rosy UD just when we were wishing n just what the doctor ordered, wink wink..
Agree that dutta naku alliance was not the stuff of a fairy tale but it was better than all love stories put together. So the hungry agitated lion miffed for being neglected by his lioness in his own abode. To add to his irritation yeh bandar sudarshan raat ke andere mein ullu ki tarah idhar udhar haat maar raha hai baap ka maal samaj ke, always at the wrong place at the wrong time,
Waise dutta is even more desperate than all of us(we for the update ofcourse)😉 to lay his hands on naku. If he had his way he wouldnt have wasted much time, highway par hi kaam tamaam kardeta comin from the party.
Sher kamre mein hamla karne keliye puri tayaari mein... 😳 firstly gulps some spirit, then the much anticipated shower (rubbing hands in anticipation)... arey? yeh kya hammie.. u dissappoint me, itni jaldi shower bhi hogaya?? didnt let us take a glimpse even. Jab tak naku pani lekhe ati hum log phulwari mein pani ki bochar dekhe pani pani hosakte the rofl... oh hoho ! he,s not wasting time n energy wearing his kurta.. good way to attract his sherni,s attention
Ab kya bahana hoga, kaun bachayega 'bali ki err billo rani' ko.. she enters, notices his piercing looks but has her own rituals to take care as well .. will change behind closed doors typically, thought she will come in just a kurta to compliment his urgency... but much to dutta,s irritation she has other plans, uff! AS ko pani pilayegi yeh jal pari, BRILLIANT!! 😛 Now i understand the reason for their frequent jungle trips n highway rendezvous.
And when she is back he is back to busines to his unfinished job quickly, but not b4 some tutoring of the meaning of "I me n myself" gadha, didnt think he would deal love making as if it were some mandovli.. sit, stare n signature, finished 🤣
UFF ho ! yeh kya? is naku even present? as ever engrossed with some nagging matter, yeh hai aurat ka kudrat.. worry, thy name is woman
AS ki toh aadat hai girgit tarah rang badalna and kala adding spice.. Atleast AS has left it to dutta,s decision much to the relief of a shaken nakku. Poor naku, pitiable state of a daughter in law who by the looks of it is just a little more privileged than a paid domestic help. Detest how she,s beeen treated by the family Im sure Dutta wil be more understanding
Thank you hammie for the khatti meeti UD, n im sure you have more in your kitty to take this forward as our sher is insatiable just like our hunger for tasha,s eternal luv story, waiting eagerly
Take care kala bandar hey, look who's come to compliment you 😆

Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet thanks for writing ...its new & interesting😊...have to wait & watch how dutta reacts to naku demand ..pls ud ..regards uvi

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