FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 - Page 68

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

@ tamanna ...glad u found the update nice

@ dilse ...yes he is married to sups and that makes her secure that he would never leave her and would eventually come back to her but you never know what the future hold for her. thanks for the comments

@..sorry for the relate update but i am happy you found the wait was worth it , sups is getting her way till date thus she is super confident that in the future also she will be able to mould the situation to her benefit ..lets wait n nakusha watch what happens in the coming months. oh you wanted to include the pic where mishu is holding me * blush* plz next time try to post it ..rose looks lonely without him ..lol..

hi rose will try to post the pic...mish looks incomplete without you rather😊

@ mirage ...thanks for the roses and for finding the update fab , hope u like the next one too

@ hammie ..once again you are on time and i am loving this ..glad u liked the scene where he gifts her the mobile so that she keeps in touch with him and not just plays with her new gift , yes indeed this will lead to sups losing control over tasha but this much she has to bear if she wishes to stay away from PV ..thanks again for appreciating the dining scene as well as the terrace one ..aww u missed LTL ..me too miss it a lot

@ sona ..subbu has an outsider who is not fully aware of the situation will definitely find it baffling all the 3 of them are leading their lives ..the next one is coming up , hope u like it

@ fassben ..thanks for another beautiful rose , i am happy you liked the terrace and departure scene , thanks for leaving a comment behind

@ uwith ..tasha definitely care for each other n now they are showing it openly which is confusing subbu who is not aware of the deal and the relationship that share ..with time she will know . thanks for reading n commenting

@ jedy ..its sad that tasha always meet to part later on but hope things change in the future . thanks for finding the ud superb

@ twinkle twinkle little star ..i am so happy that you loved the update so much ..your comment is full of wows and i am pleased a lot ..as always i look forward to the pics that u include in your comment and really liked the one where dutta is smiling , tasha are on the terrace and he is looking in his rear view mirror while driving back to PV ..the expressions were bang on right ..thanks so much

Originally posted by: aishwish

You must be super amazed by my timing till now.absolutely..let me tell you I was about to follow my usual schedule but as you asked me comment asap...how sweet 🤗..see I'm here,..see even i am here and this time you are the first one to get a reply on her comment ..hopefully i have taken your complaint into account someone too is getting too much importance.because someone deserves it 😆..huh!!😛

Hmmm...so this is one you were so nervous about.not nervous but unhappy..lets see what there that's making you so unsure!!!😈 BTW, since you have re written it, I wonder how the first draft looked like..don't even ask about the first one. Anyways moving to this one, so you are not quite pleased with this one...why???? may be because it is a little short..it was already a drag and didn't want to bore u all with this one ..more than the length , the quality of the update matters to me. and it has just a glimpse of dutta but rosie dear consider this too na...it also has an ill supriya to compensate😆...i am glad someone is so happy Well on a serious note...I guess it's the execution you are having issues with. I'm not sure, I'm guessing..you are right , the tasha convo could have been scribbled in a better way . As far as my opinion as a reader is concerned, yes may be I have a little (actually only one) complain with this one ...but I've a lot of praises for you as well..someone is being too nice to me 😆.

So, starting from the firsts sequence...kaafi hara bhara ff hai ye, I must say.😛 No you chose a perfect place for their debate...somehow, I didn't wanted to take place it in the kitchen. Now my only complain is I felt that there were not enough verbal confrontation shown..i have already told you that you will get what you want in the next update and the reasons also i have mentioned , so now there shouldn't be any problem, somehow I feel a little more exchange of dialogues should have been taken place between these two. The sequence ended a little early, perhaps you yourself don't realize that what a brilliant job you have done while characterizing subbu...I understand a sidey character like subbu cannot be trusted enough to be assigned to hog majority of the space but it's a wonderful character that you have created..just like sups i am quite happy and content with the way subbu's character has shaped up ..she is playing a very interesting n important role in this story .trust her rose and moreover trust you abilities...trust my abilities *sigh*

Now time for praises, I know they make you so proudy..ha ha ha , still, you leave me with no other option. So, I just loved how your take on subbu's take...She is being judgemental...bingo, very good, If she would have shown trying to understand everyone's point of view, in just one go, that would sounded a li'l inappropriate to me.right , similarly a full fledged confrontation would have also looked inappropriate at this point of time..I liked how she passed the verdict against dutta that too so hastily...quiet realistic yeah she has no clue as to what he has gone through and assumes that cheating on his wife or taking advantage of nakku is coming very easily to him ..its the general mindset that we have towards men ...it was so human of her to do this...she had spent time with supriya and nakusha, it's only dutta she is foreign to...so quiet justified that she found it easy to accuse him, and also what I loved was how as a woman she sided these two ladies.i am so happy that you could understand her pov so well..and most striking, nakusha still occupies the same place for subbu as she used to before, and her being a prostitute has nothing to do with it...may be because she herself comes from a lower strata...may be poor in monetary matters but they are far rich than these so called society people when it comes to sensitivity. But still like most of the people she failed to see dutta's pov, his pain and agony and I like it.thanks a lot..fair enough,it should take place like this only...motherly instincts do make you biase.so applauds to you. You were brave enough to write it..not brave enough to write this whole ff ?? lol.take the oiling scene for instance...she's playing a KMH...readers's wrath are sure to shower her, still you made her react the way it should be. Brilliant...thanks again

OMG...he brought mangoes for her...this should be the highlight❤️..lol... Now my hubby must get me mangoes as well when I'm pregnant😳..rofl rofl ..how do u come up with such ideas???. Anyways...this time I liked that you kept this scene as apart of narrative instead of showing it happen...dutta would have have sounded too cheeky.😆 But her possesivness was very cute.

And wowho...Dutta scene❤️.aah! a sweaty dutta is equal to a sexy dutta..uff some people will never change ☺️. But this scene took my heart away. Do give us some more tasha scenes..plz plz plz..surely tasha scenes are on their way just wait for some time .I'm sick of this sick sups!😛😆! Nah! I like aspects other than tasha as well...but you knw, na then I don't get anything to imagine😳for a change i am glad that u r not imagining something weird . I just loved how it took a while to him to realize she was talking about the baby...fatherhood is still in the process for him. And it also because he doesn't spend much time with her or speaks a lot about the baby. Awww,,,,do I need to say how much I loved this scene. Yes? Okay so I absolutely loved it...esp. when he dismissed the contracter or whoever lol...coz he was busy with the mood swings...and how he knows it, coz he reads parental books..awww...can somebody be more cute!!..NOPE❤️ But why was the shopkeeper so shocked when he asked for the book...is wasn't like he said I need a book coz I'm pregnant😆. Nah ! I know what you ment, I was just kidding.

I quite liked the feet symbolism..subbu is quite right!!! Being an aged person she can see what thses three can't or wish to dn't see.exactly ..now that I know she has nothing to do with her on screen husband I found her more right,😆 questions that bugs her, bugs me as well and knowing that even the writer doesn't know the answer ..the scribller knows it very well but will not tell u or if she knows doesn't tell me...they bug me more

Kisi aur ladki ko ma bana deta hai...well she is right at her own place but why does it cracks me...as if dutta nahin hai koi virus hai🤣..very funny ..huh ..and i am damn sure that you are dying to get infected by this virus and have raw mangoes later on 😈