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Originally posted by: dilse14

hi daya

awesome ud..FF was too good..its last for forum😭..pls continue writing...plsss..dutta & naku had a happy ending ...but we are unhappy write a epilogue pls change your mind

missing you

Originally posted by: uwith

hi daya thanxs for amazing FF & this again was awesome wirting from you👏 ..dutta got back his memory & naku ..morey is dead ..great ending ...you won't write for forum is disheartining.😭..i wish you have a change of heart ...pls write a epilogue i sincerely wish you start something new after a gap if you want ...regards uvi going to miss you

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

you know daya while reading through this amazing update i reached a point where dutta got shot twice ..this is something that i often do in my stories and aish cringes every time , wondering how can i be so cruel with him and i laugh it off but today for the first time i panicked ..it was hard to imagine him like that ..

Hiya Rose, yeah its hard to picture a shot piercing through someone especially someone we're all very fond of...but hey its a story the good guys always win😆 no need to panic😛

i have no words to abuse morey, what on earth made him think and say that he could have taken better care of nakku? did he forget he was planning to sell her off later on ? jerk !

that's what makes him psycho...they have a twisted way of thinking...but indeed he is a jerk and one that got what he deserved 😉

okay the scene where he is about to drop her off the roof had my heart in my mouth , i knew nothing would happen to her as our hero was around but still you managed to give me a mini heart attack

Yes, so you know what Dutta was going through...standing there but not being able to help...because even his heart was on the line there...

the last scene was BEAUTIFUL ...their emotions , their feelings and their habit of not blaming each other for any crisis , all were superbly penned ..the closing lines just gives us hope that you might continue writing on this forum ..something that we all want

Thank you, I am happy with the way the end turned out actually. And nah that end was just to tell you all the happiness in their lives was just beginning...I am officially done here...If i write i want to create my own characters and stories...completely from scratch.

it was indeed pleasure reading this story , wished that LTL was written and shot like this and i shall agree with you , this is your BEST work ..though extremely difficult but i feel all the hard work has paid off.

Thank you Rose for reading and commenting. I appreciate all the encouragement and support you have given. Yep, this is my most proud work out of them all...and was damn difficult to write in first person...but it turned out fine. Thank you again rose...hum phir milenge chalte chalte ... fyi that'll probably be in ur FF thread...I'll have to catch up there but soon i will :)

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Thank you

Well Well Well, look who we have here😆

ah, you're very welcome Ghajini..afterall this FF came about because of you so am glad to see you here :)

Many come to mind reasons to say this to you

for the penned imaginary adaptations of LTL1

Aap ki khatir

Waves of love

Naina thag lainga

to name a few

Yes, but AKK and WOL

are no longer available on or off the forum

friends read now ! if unread!

for VMs that added extra dimensions to favored scenes

betwixt the eternal lovers Dutta and Nakusha

for fulfilling my constant demand of siggys and dps

which stay saved by me as works done by you

a labour of love!

You're welcome, again. I watched a few of my VMs yesterday

Have to say my best works are the ones you've requested

I need to reupload them on YT...

but i need to buy an external hard drive first

my laptop needs to be cleared...too much on it

for dabbling through my scrawls

for lovingly commenting on them

and making them sound like a good read

you made me happy!

Really? 😆 Okay I'll take this because I swear its rare you say things like this haha...glad to hear it ...

for all the moments of mad hysteria in pms

for giving joy not to me alone but many here

for putting up with my turns

more so bad than the good

for I always know

far, near,

my Baji will forever love me

now if this is not a bond

then what is?

True say!

if inspiration goads you again

then do scatter some more gems!

thank you Daya.

Lol we'll see, i doubt it'll be on the forum though.

Thank you hammie, for the lovely uhmm confession😆😆

See ya around ! Ciao

Hamlet53.~ 5.5.13

credit ~ dp.. daya ofcourse...