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Originally posted by: -daya-

where on earth did you land from😆

Hi Missy! Long time no see!

Thank you

Many come to mind reasons to say this to you

for the penned imaginary adaptations of LTL1

Aap ki khatir

Waves of love

Naina thag lainga

to name a few

friends read now ! if unread!

for VMs that added extra dimensions to favored scenes

betwixt the eternal lovers Dutta and Nakusha

for fulfilling my constant demand of siggys and dps

which stay saved by me as works done by you

a labour of love!

for dabbling through my scrawls

for lovingly commenting on them

and making them sound like a good read

you made me happy!

for all the moments of mad hysteria in pms

for giving joy not to me alone but many here

for putting up with my turns

more so bad than the good

for I always know

far, near,

my Baji will forever love me

now if this is not a bond

then what is?

if inspiration goads you again

then do scatter some more gems!

thank you Daya.

Hamlet53.~ 5.5.13

credit ~ dp.. daya ofcourse...

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hey Dayani, dont mind takin your name n dont be too shocked with the color of the font 😉

Hi to you too, Bharathi! FYI you've misspelled my name but its okay😆

Hahaha.. naku n her fears n her reactions.. all very amusing even when the situation they were in was far from being amused .. atleast she accepted what she felt when he appeared out of nowhere. The two have their humour intact for sure. I guess when one is sure of the others feelings then there is no need to put up an act. But both,s life depending on so many ifs n buts was naturally scary.

Daya you have done a fab job with the whole planning n setting up leading to the climax, n the suspense of how it unfurls is intriguing indeed 👏 Thank you bharti...interesting enough I only had a skeleton idea and it only turned suspense thriller halfway through my SS...so really I pulled the story on whim and i made it work with what i already had...I had to go back a read a few things now and then to make it mesh but it unraveled to my liking...i do like this story of mine the best! 😳 Just like naku wondered even the readers are in the dark as to who is holed up where n in what condition, the tension was getting to my nerves n i did what i always do, took a sneak peak into the last part to ensure all was ok with the lead, now i know you are Rofl... at my predicament 😳 You didn't! Haha...oh Bharti you sneeked a peek! that ruins the fun of the story...but alls cool i hope it let you read the chp in more peace then :P You know as the writer i didn't realize just how much you didn't know reading it...in my mind i had both characters and all positions...now that i read your remark i realized just how much you all were in the dark...but glad it turned out so... But knew morey would not go down without a fight a shrewd fox that he was, no he is actually a hyena 😡 😃 A street fighter, hanging on to every last bit. The words he uttered hit at the core of dutta n he was right mostly albeit put it in his typical uncivvy lingo,..

I think Dutta's actions played out well because the man who wouldn't have paused to fight normally did because Naku was caught in the middle and it left him helpless but he figured out a way to talk his way through even then it didn't work too well until Baaji and Ritesh show up...

But it was dissapointing that naku not tryin to even move a finger, she was too overwhelmed by the whole situation n the fear let her down. Baji n Doc cum don Riteish saved the day.. Naku was to stunned to move and then when she figured she should do something she was too late...that's why she's not the don 😆 too much emotional entanglements...Baaji and Ritesh's part was important...i made them save the day because logically Dutta was the one Morey had his eyes on so any move he made would've been watched but Baaji and Ritesh were unknown presences so I thought since Baaji is the right hand man and Ritesh is a good friend the team effort would be a more effective one...lol i have to say i had fun writing that climax scene...

Gosh! Dutta needs a permanent doc at home, now his memory too restored is a huge relief to all mostly to himself, baji n riteish having fun at dutta,s expense was cute. But he,s guilt ridden, his past behaviour with naku is hurting him more than the external wounds. Im sure naku,s love will heal all his wounds internal external.. 😊

Hey they always find a way out of the mess...and together they'll figure it out.

Here is a vm by Kk fan, thought it fits your ending especially n personally too liked the song, hopefully you enjoy it too..

Thank you for posting the VM...its a very nice one and you're right it does fit my ff...i don't actually remember ever seeing this vm so thank you...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g85X0W3beXI&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]

Agree with you, YKB is indeed your best work till date n you have improved by leaps n bounds for sure.. it had all the ingredients of suspense, action, thrill n romance in right measure. You have a natural flair for thrillers n you love dissecting people,s thought process. Overall A JOB WELL DONE !!! 👍🏼

Yes thank you, my writing has come a long way. I can tell looking back at my other ones lol...you know i think you may be right about natural flair for thriller...i love reading such books and maybe because of that i seem to have fun writing them too...and dissecting peoples thoughts is hard work..especially that of characters that have already been built in the show...i think i'd have a easier time of it if the characters were my own...any thank you again for the lovely comments! I appreciate all the support you've given throughout.

But this is the hard part, you bidding adieu to writing for the forum, you should know how much your writing is appreciated n will be missed, feel very sad The LTL forum owes it to the writers for its existence even after so long. Your tag line "phir milenge chalte chalte" is only rubbing salt to the already low feeling, atleast stick to the essence of it, even a slim glimmer of hope would do... would love to see you around in the forum n hopefully wil contribute whenever you can find time, Plzz.. Its a request 😳

I do know how much you've all appreciated and loved my work and i am forever grateful for it and all the support. I don't have enough words to thank you all...if my writing has come this far than its all thanks to the people here...I will be around...don't know about writing as you know well i do have other ventures in the works...but we'll see...Thank you again Bharti!

But have to Thank you for all your efforts n time, wish you the best for your future writing ventures...

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update dutta team trying to trap morey but he outsmart the nakku in morey cluches dutta memory back dutta beating morey morey threatning dutta that he will throw nakku baaji ritesh tarak entry fab finally morey dead and in hell tasha in hospital and two friends teasing dutta dutta meeting nakku and nakku removing his guilt by futue promises