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HI Daya

👏Once again you did a lovely ud I just loved the whole ud best part was Dutta and Nakku convo. So Nakku life is in danger and she will be staying with Dutta in his room I think this is were and he will fall in love with her again.

Thanks again as always can't wait for the next to see what will happen to them ud it soon

helloo,Daya,thanks for the great UD.
Chapter 5
Dutta taken for a ride by unknown foe;Naku's life in danger,a fact confirmed by a missed bullet; well written bits of action. Finally all his battle within himself,regarding how to move her into his room, transpires so easily by just one missed shot at her. Clever justification, extremely practical.Liked the approach,short sharp!
Dutta this way also gets an opportunity to show his me man , me protective of my woman element. Well written.
thanks ,and please continue, as ever yours x hammie.The song below reminds of Dutta's predicament..
...PAPPY..heard this song and thought of you.. its set in your part of the world.Its sung by Jagit Singh a ghazal singer.. he was from India but was settled in Canada of recent.. he returned to India recently ,and died there in his mother land..

hello daya... Sorry for commenting late... Again busy in college... My sessional exams are near... So, the torture has been started n i m concentrating on my studies bcoz if i'll score less then my mom will surely Kill me...
So i really sorry n ya I LOVED THE PART BETWEEN TASHA IT WAS ACTUALLY SUPERBBB
How nakku was giving answers to duttas questions...n my humble request is that plzzz CREATE MORE N MORE TASHA'S ROMNTIC CUTE N LUVING SCENES...
Anyways thnxx for the PM sweetheart !!!!

hi daya

hi daya fabulous ud, jo dutta khud nahin kar paya woh uskay dushman ne karva diya , sending her to his room without him giving the 1st reason. V,cleaver kill two birds with one stone , she has started to bother him, i liked the long ud, i hope u got lots more to come. baji was good pehlay barges in thn ays main phir aajaon ga,😆 , and henthe scn without his shirt😆D dragging his wife to his room paints a funny pic. thanku please ud soon. c u take care

Hi daya

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

enemy progressing plans dutta saving nakku and telling her she will be safe awsem and dutta bajji in action

Hi Rani. Thank you for reading and commenting. Always appreciate it. Glad you've likes the story. Yup the story's turning towards a action line..lol can't promise there will be a lot of that as the focus is still D and N but it'll play its part wen it has to :)

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

superb...superb... superb...loved tasha convo to the core...baaji is so sweet...continue sooon...

Hi Usha. Thank you for reading and comment, greatly appreciate it. Love hearing what you thought. Glad you're liking the plot turn. I'm hoping the future convo's will be as lovable as this one...it'll get more to be like banter really...and baaji what can i say about him ...he is very useful and such a sweetheart 😆😳 Thanks again...!

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik

Wow! Felt as though i just finished watching a james bond movie :D :D Awesome! The protectiveness, the understand, the invisible bond! Just too beautiful :* :) :) Daya, you're the best!

Hiya Varsh! Ithu unnakke konjam over-a illaiya? This is far from a James Bond movie😆 but I'm flattered you thought James Bond while reading it..haha...I'm glad you enjoyed how it came together ...thank you for reading and commenting ...you know I love it 😳

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

mindblowing update ..dutta's thoughts ..his confusion were very well written ..he is badly getting attracted towards her and the best part is that he can't control himself ..for a moment i thought he would shift her to a safer place i.e out of the house but he proved me wrong ..he took her to his room ! lovely ...i am sure he can protect her there better *winks*

Hi Rose! :) Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you thought it was 'mind blowing' lol...yeah you know I feel bad for his confused state of mind but then i think he has a lot of practice with it I'm sure he'll survive 😆 He is getting pulled to her and u'll see more of that...it'll come naturally even though he'll want to put a stop to it or give another reason for it...yeah i considered the lets get you out of the house but I decided against it for now...a room has some other benefits 😉 of course he can protect her in there let's just hope he can remember that part 😆😆

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

superb update

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naku's life is in danger

who is it targeting naku?...

Hiya! Thank you for liking and commenting. Glad you're enjoying it.
Yeah Naku's life is in danger and you will know why and who eventually...
till the enjoy the benefits of the situation 😉

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi daya

love the ud

nakus life in danger the protective dutta is back

naku will be staying with dutta in his room reminded me of ltl

seems like dutta falling for naku

waiting to know what he will do now that she will be staying with him

Hi Emily. Thank you for reading and leaving your precious comments :)
Glad you are loving the UDs
Yes. Naku in danger and Dutta ready to play knight in shining armor
Now the question is will he be able to keep focused on that alone 😉
Even I am waiting to see what I can come up with in this room of theirs 😆

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

👏Once again you did a lovely ud I just loved the whole ud best part was Dutta and Nakku convo. So Nakku life is in danger and she will be staying with Dutta in his room I think this is were and he will fall in love with her again.

Thanks again as always can't wait for the next to see what will happen to them ud it soon

Hiya ! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave your lovely comments. I am glad you enjoyed their convo hope you'll enjoy the future one's too...let's see what this situation brings for them :)