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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi daya awesome UD ...simply loved it...dutta & naku together always gets my vote 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I,Me &Myself...was here.. will return .. oyee Baji high five yaar!love you ,oyeee don't fly away... without me.. hum aur tum.. always!

Well looks like I have returned.. thanks for a brilliantly written chapter 4.
Seemed to be teeming with activity. Notable interactions from Baji and AS. Baji continued in his advisory role and so did AS, as they both chivvied Naku to claim back what was hers .. namely Dutta.
The simple ,yet lovable tea service was an interesting inclusion, an excuse not to be missed to approach the odd Dutta..for Naku it was almost who would bell the cat.. and by the sounds of it ,she certainly did not want to be the one.
His unexpected arrival in the kitchen, and the silent actions and conversation that ensued between them unspoken,were a delight to read.Her scald was appropriate as it manged to bring them closer,as was his wound. Her nursing it brought back memories of LTL1.
So all in all a very well written chapter Daya ..please continue. with thanks as ever yours xx hammie..

Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi daya, very nice and ltl jmmi resembling scene which we can't get enough of. dutta can't remain untouched by her discomfortt big or small😊 loved the whole episode of baji and AS. nakku being cautious incase dutta isn't up to taking more stress. him wanting to talk to her would be she doesn't haveo hide in his presence ...😔
but how nice if he says lets go to somewhere that reminds me of our past and she takes him to JMM1 JUNGLE thanks daya great read as usual.take care cu here soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ushankitvc: Hiya, long time no see! Thanks for commenting, glad you liked it. Yup Baaji's words will come back to haunt them so to speak lol..and D and N caring for each other is only the first step up from where they'd been. Oh yes how can we have a tasha and no stubborness lol..that was a highlight in the show for me...I always found it cute. Anyway thank you again :)

@stranger2rose:
ROSE! thank you for the lovely feedback and thoughts. I am glad you're liking the way I write. Lol I think I'm getting the hang of first person though I still have my moments lol...I'm very happy to hear that the characters are ringing true to the show I though I think I am beginning to lose them at times...and thanks also glad you liked the UD too..wen I read ur comment I was thinking oh my it was more eventful that I thought it was LOL. I felt I just dragged it too much. Oh i thought about him applying the ointment...but I thought it wouldn't make much sense with his confused little mind but you know what it worked out in my favour as I just decided after posting this UD that the story is going in a direction I haven't thought of ever before nor have I really written anything like it before..so I hope its entertaining enough :) Thanks rose again for reading and commenting...take care :)

@tamanna1391: Hey Rani. Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you loved the UD. Baaji i think is generally a loveable person but I too love him to bits when he intervenes...

@uwith: Thanks for reading and commenting Uvi. Yup I'd certainly say the closeness melts the heat :P In regards to what is in Dutta's mind well my initial idea did a turnabout and now is heading in another direction...so hopefully the direction it's headed is something you'll enjoy.

@Nakusha: Hey hey. Glad you love the UD and it was what you wanted. Yes you're right it reflected a lot of LTL1 lol..I hadn't even noticed. Ah you and me both, I too love them when their stubborn I find it very adorable and he always gives in which makes it cuter. Humm Dutta's decision has taken a different turn..and I have no idea why this idea popped up but I was even more surprised when it fit into the entire story thus far. I think I'm going to have fun with the future UDs and hopefully this will be just as fun and interesting for you...Thank you for your lovely comments...always love reading them

@FASSBEN: Hey! Thanks for liking, reading and commenting much appreciated. Glad you liked the UD and i think all are curious what he'll talk about but I think it will be a interesting UD. Take care and will UD soon for sure :)

@emilymine32: Thanks for reading and commenting emily. Yup Baaji is like cupid in all my FFs lol...and D and N will get around to the love part eventually ...anyway his talk is much awaited I see...and you too will be able to read it soon :)

@afzal7861: Thanks for reading and commenting Afzal. Glad you liked it. Yup Baaji is going to work to push the two together but the two have to be willing to go beyond just being pushed lol...so let's see how it goes...

@dilse14: Hey, thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it. Glad you liked the UD. TaSha scenes i think are always a pleasure to have...and I'd love to write them if the make sense...so count on it ...whenever i can you'll have em

@sona89: Thanks Sona. Glad you liked the UD. Lol I think TaSha together will get all my reader's votes :P It 'll even have my vote 😉

@Hamlet53
: I am reserving for us to fly together!😆😆

@tahera57: Hey! Thanks for reading and commenting Tahera. Baaji's my favorite cupid LOL...I love placing him in such roles i'm sure you've seen the pattern in all my FF's he's always an important one when it comes to tasha. Now you'll have to wait and see where his 'talk' takes them both...it was supposed to be different when I wrote this UD but before I started the next I had another idea and this FF just found another direction all together..something I haven't tried much of before...so i thought i'll go with it...surprisingly whatever I've written so far is very easily incorporated into it so hopefully i'll be able to do this properly :)
Edited by -daya- - 12 years ago
meriyaar thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
BRAVO👏
Amazing chapter! Loved the TaSha scene was just too good. and the BaaJi AS scenes with Naku. 😊
But why oh why leave it at that you've left me intrigued please update soon.
tc
xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi daya fab ud 😊pls ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi daya Terrific ud😊
next psrt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar

BRAVO👏

Amazing chapter! Loved the TaSha scene was just too good. and the BaaJi AS scenes with Naku. 😊
But why oh why leave it at that you've left me intrigued please update soon.
tc
xoxo



Meri yaarr! hiya! Thank you thank you...glad you thought so. I thought it dragged a bit, the scene I mean but then I needed to cover their silence and their thoughts.and then the minimal words 😆 good to know you liked...and leaving it there...i believe you would know I have a certain reputation that i think I've been slacking with lately haha thought it'd be a perfect end mostly because i need to switch POV there that's all 😆 but it added to suspense..and it worked in my favor as my original plan completely foiled and now the FF will turn a bit in another direction ...anyway i do have the next UD done so soon i guess

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi daya fab ud 😊pls ud soon



Hi mirage123...glad you liked the UD.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Appreciate it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

Hi daya Terrific ud😊

next psrt soon



Hello there, haven't seen you in the forum before...welcome...glad you're liking the story...and UD...thank you for reading and commenting...it's always greatly appreciated. take care...

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