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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi hammie, sowie for the delay, u know how busy im these days..chal, derse hi sahi, always there, right?😉 yes right baaby..but then when are you ever wrong?...mz. RIGHT?

Nandi,s words bothering major, doesnt understand women,s fetish for bein praised n pampered by their luved ones, he's too old fashioned major😛, aur naku not amused with his indifferent attitude...oye hint maar rehe hai ke he's a gentleman?

Tutor acting khadoos with his outs, bein naughty in a way, haan, lagta hai hammie bhi yehi karti apne students ke saat .well you could say so ..right cheeky hain... lip gloss aur nail polish lage ke ah jatien hain ye texting during lessonsss! un ke tu main!

Khani must have been a premature baby, har waqt impatient, she,s just waiting for an opportunity to start a convo with him, more to feast her eyes than anythg, aargh! you are such a video nasty!choor khani ka peeche tu , she's hiding behind me in fear of you!

At last naku remembered her parents..she,s called them only out of frustration which she was feeling against major. Wah! Mother babi,s loose tongue, suspecting minds..but naku dear wil not giveup on her man.methinks bart..naku pointed out ke ye apne maa /baap se baat nehi karthe so added...

Once again, crisis manager baaji is in action mode...a saviour for both DN, Bechara overburdened aur underpaid hai? uska romance ka bhi vaat lagi hai, Aur uparse bakwas bhi suno Bhao ka.oyeee is there a cryptic message in this?

Hamare 'Rockstar' chale tayar hone, most fav part of hammie,s writeup .. Badi hi fursat se usko tayar karati hai! Hain? Denim shirt? Kiske ankhe taras gayi thi usse denim me dekhne keliye??? naku bhi nahi pasand karti hai.😃 DS has to be my undying love for the stalwarts of the running Laagi forum..

Rockstar movie dikhadi majorko hammie? Have you spared anyone now ? Hohoohoo..he closes his eyes instead.😆..bechara he must,ve had a culture shock watching the two protogonists breaking all norms of social behaviour.. Achaa, isko bhi woh pouty ladki pasand aagayi, but ofcourse..woh hai he itne gorgeous ke majour bhi went ummmh over her.. [thanks for he song tum ho pas mera ,saath mera..loved it..]

aur yeh naku Rona dona shuru mauka milte hi.,, .theatre mein popcorn khilarahi hai munnoo ko, how romantic? Woh sote sote kha peeraha hai aur yeh dekte dekte rorahi hai, hey bhagwan! Kya jodi hai. 😆😆😆 haaa love your remarks.. better than the UD bart! haaa haa..hooo

Poor Naku has to console herself after knowing that she wont be accompanying him to his trip, luckily not making too much fuss. Huh! What wil happen if he leaves for some long duration frontline duties. Anyway all's wel that ends wel, the two under moonlight, over the hil top on the bonnet havin a whale of a time, hmm..just about it... naku is the real defender of the faith,culture and so on so forth...and he the lion ready to pounce! this dil is it for me or the major? hummh

Hammie pehlI baar its been just the two to compensate us readers for the lambi judai..hai na? Anyway, it was a cute romantic date for the two n enjoyed reading the lovey dovey moments. Chal me signing off with this number from ur fav movie Rockstar. thanks bart...for your lovely and phunny at times comment..always worth the wait... thanku for he gana... see you baaby...missed you on the dance floor... with much love xx yours hammie

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bql1Eq4-IX4[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivy_11


hellloo mate so kind of you to read and comment like always..you never let me down
Thank you for the lovely update Hammie👏.
pleased you enjoyed
Tasha moments were ahem,,ahem..i hope Naku can accompany Dutta.
hope springs eternal in human breast... just as we hope ,that Mishal well return one day...
The DS was hilarious and DSP is becoming a narcissist all over again😆

It's like the song Iam sexy and I know it!..
thanks for taking the time to read and comment... you chillax mate all my love xx hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57


tahera .all I want to say is what you already know we all miss you... dekh because you not here on my thread.. tu UD bhi kerna ko dil ne chata...

Hi all can't come here yet to masti .

hammie take ur time i'm not able tospend much time here , bharti maafi no time to masti' phir bhi
. jaldi wapis ah.. bahut drama kar leya..
"I'LL BE BACK" whenever. see u when i se u . ab bhagna hai warna ghar se dandey padaain ge
WHEN? ROARRR! MAZZAK BANYA HAI. ud kro you never read them! this really the P.take!
iam not amused ... hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: noreen


oyeyyy noneee!tu back! missed you lardki...so exams over... hope they went very well!

great UD !!!! thnks!!!!
thanks and i hope for your sake ke you reasd all the back dated ones...hummmh...


the best line by baji Naku tell me something that's new! Bhao tu aisa aadmi hai jo dil kere tu din ko raat bolega or raat ko din!😆 yeah baji knows his dost very well.. but han baji bhi when ever he gets the chance ..gets back at his Bhao!

and the song he mentions mai to larki goma oops i'll ud later...
kya hoya hai?oops kyon .. theekh hai tuna comment de diya hai , bata diya hai ke you are back on the scene .. sooo thanks baaby and keep in touch.. much love yours xxx hammie...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tahera57

kiya baat hai hammie bohat accha laga what agem . i also like their roxanne and message in a bottle. but long since heard them. thanks for kind words i also me , miss each and everyoneof my forum buddies .t hinking of u. bharti and nakusha kp hammie entertained, and she wll keep u e ntertained . bharti i think hammie is finding it hard to seperate the lovebirds,t hats why no udt , mera toh stuck hai until i read baji wali ud .it won't matter when the nex ud comes.😃 don't get annoyed at me nakusha, just hammi k doosray writing talents se dil behlaao.

TAheraaa kya hai itne late lateef kaise ho gai bhi tak pechele ud nahin padi .isliye hammieee delay kar rahein ,jaise mein aur bharti toh hammiee ke liye hum aapke koun ho gai 😆mere chahere ke muskurat pe na jao mein bahut ...der apne tahera se kaise kafa ho sakte ho
aree tahera aaj kal kitne bujhe bujse se baatein kyo are mera koi thread nahin hai thode bahut koshis to keep forum going
waise bharti kis cheez mein busy hai .😆
hammiee have a nice weekend .lekin hume bhol na jana hum bhi pade hai raho mein 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -daya-



baji!you are late! papppy oooh so its you out of your sulks then😉 chal chal my thread is one big family ... we share... and i usually give ROARRRSSS

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Baaaby I miss your lappie!😡 this typing on phone business I can't cope with visually! oyeee get it fixed!

...E D I T E D...

Yes, It's me ! Figure it's time I made my entrance...
Nope am not sorry for being late ! the delay is well deserved !
Hmmm...lets get to your fantabulous cute update...

Painful Rapture ~ Chapter 53 -- Short Shrift

An UD dedicated entirely to Dutta and Naku.
D A T E time and me all smiles...
LOL @ Baaji he was well Baaji...
perfect timing...with perfect dialogues...
of course Baaji is a very loved person...HAINA BHAO!? :P cant live if living is without you.. baji rao!

anyway getting on with the story
first and foremost..Oh that denim shirt...you gotta love that shirt for the man oh affirmative!even if he is in a towel it'll go down as a collectors item!
and so I went 'hain what was Dutta thinking wearing that shirt
I said the same to Naku when she suggested a movie that too Rockstar
of course am not shocked with the choice of the film...ur favo ...
of course it has to be that film me love it.. but you liked it too jhotti
but I mean come on when her action man is there she wants to watch Ranbir?
yeah but her action himself is big time slyly eying Nargis... itna angel nehi hai Dutta..
Well, she did give him a chance to check out the girl in the film...
haiya haiye he finds her hawwt that he wouldn't mind having an affair with her
married or not..girl is to be lusted for...haa loved his teasing...loves to poke at her
like someone else I know ...who loves poking at ppl *ahem ahem looks at hammie*
and i lower my eyes look the other way and quietly walk away from such flippant talk!
you know I would be all for spending the little time I had., with just him ...
yeah we know that you have unworthy thoughts about him😆
but the girl wanted to see a movie...i hardly feel thats much of a date location
but of course Dutta, now he has better sense...and of course would not lose an opportunity be alone somewhere with his lady love ..so said now my turn I chose you go ...move along...and wow to the place he took her
a place as if on the top of the world...how sweet...
more like the dirty man always up to no good...
sounds nice...i would like to go there :P
why to be KBMH ...waise you have covered some lovely scenes in your previous FF's pappy ,i remember praised you for your descriptive language...
The hopping on the bonnet of jeep ..and chat was nice ...
Liked the conversation there where he make her come up with her own answers
what it would be like for the wife of a soldier...
well for starters there is an underlying fear that ..he can be called any time...
Enjoyed the UD. Thank you
daya baaby thanks for your lovely comment.. yes your thoughts about it are exactly like mine..
hmm typed all this with two fingers on a small little keypad thank you to your two fingers😆
I miss my lappie ! hummm so do I papsi so do I 😡
anyway take care...phir milenge chalte chalte
NOW THIS IS A THANKYOU FOR YOU for typing with two fingers ...loved this song mast mast!
love trancends all barriers even lingo! XXhammie
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGGi2DJMLtE[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ red , hey hammie kaisa mazak main sedhi sadhi shareef ladki bata ke gayee thi tumhari tarha AWL nahin.
and aisa kab hua meray dost kay ud nahin padha . han abhi pending hai lekin jaisy hi proper baith kar padh sakoon gi no one's going to keep me away😆
wo bhi agar laapie ne saath na chora tohOuch.
chal main ek ma]eharbani karti hoon tujhae koi gana nahin post karti.😆
aur haan kuch din tum bhi na post kar th accha hoga ,meray laptop ka gala band hai soundless😡😡😡.total gup!!
u know trrouble comes in 3's. haaa.😡
see u properly in about 3 weeks😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

TAheraaa kya hai itne late lateef kaise ho gai bhi tak pechele ud nahin padi .isliye hammieee delay kar rahein ,jaise mein aur bharti toh hammiee ke liye hum aapke koun ho gai 😆mere chahere ke muskurat pe na jao mein bahut ...der apne tahera se kaise kafa ho sakte ho
aree tahera aaj kal kitne bujhe bujse se baatein kyo are mera koi thread nahin hai thode bahut koshis to keep forum going
waise bharti kis cheez mein busy hai .😆
hammiee have a nice weekend .lekin hume bhol na jana hum bhi pade hai raho mein 😆

bas abhi samajh lo naku se naraz hon idhar tum koshish karti ho ke dutta aur naku ko nazar na lagay udhar woh kudh usko cinema leja ke hot herroine ki darshan karati hai takay major ko behaknay ka maka milay film bhi dikhai janay se phelay toh affair wali.
so me no like rockstar. ganda aadmi bacchi se ishq ladaaya prm ke naam pe.
hammie ne dil na chahtay huwy bhi kal pos karnay
ko ke diya u all enjoy me leave it till mayebe another 2-3 weeks. wh bhi agar lappie dhoka na de toh😡😡😡
@ bharti dekho hammie ko umhari aur naku ki kitni fikar hai tunharay complain ko dekhkar jaldi se annotationas pos kar diyay. so man toh ye kahoon gi roob dalna toh koi tum s seekhay. lve all tc.Tahera
Edited by tahera57 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -daya-

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Enjoyed the UD. Thank you
hmm typed all this with two fingers on a small little keypad
I miss my lappie ! hummm

anyway take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

awww daya now you too using phone...i tell you one needs such a patience to use IF on phone ...add to that no special treatement given by the writer 😛😆...not even a song dedication *sniff*
ohh and enjoyed your feedback a lot ...and hammies replies too .😛😊


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