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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

hi dear, ur tormentor ur worst critique is back!😛 only krazzy for you baaaby! jungli jawani!...sahi ghund maachia hai tune aaj! hammie gutted..baaby! hummmh..but still happy fraaandship day ,week ,hour ,whatever!
While naku's career graph looks bright major's lookg shaky... YES!! luvd naku's stroppy thoughts towards her man who seems not to understand that constant attitude will snap the best of relations.. its easy for baji to say that bhao's nature is well known but he too knows best that its time for some clarity n hence his initiative.
true say.mate..its like "above all be true to thine own self..",in this case i would say to each other Hammie uve described naku's dressup so wel mera bhi dil agaya us par😆, aur pata hain mujhe why she left her neck free of jewelery,🤣 gosh! ill be kicked out now..hummmh ,yes of course,only human desires ,smart aurat hai, she knows it will irriate her man,well she is perchance thinking of things to come ahead. Arey wah! naku itni bindas kab se, she invited a total stranger for the eveng, this is so excitg now..my heart skipped several beats, i see some potential for a dhamakedar eveng n days to come.. "Tera rona bhi sunneko tayar hai major naku", kamal hogaya wow! this is music to my ears major's misery fantastic n beautifully written hammie, thanks baaby ,cannot match Shakespeare's soliloquies..but do try to show characters in a dialouge with themselves,when ever I can agar tu mere paas hoti choomleti ofcourse gaal pe😉😆..but of course he never wastes time ,straight into the up to no good business! aur baji baji 🤗mein kya karoon is bande ko, kya muft ka mazaa loot raha hai bechare dono ko tadapte dekhke, im ever so frequently falling off my chair now hammie, i remember it was the oppostite not so long ago how can I forget my butt was forever dented by the larfs you gave me, now it's more a straight bum pe laat for me brvr style... hohoohoo! ab naku ko mentaly sick banadiya baji teri khair nahi😃. Gadha baji ko gadha bularaha hai, 😆 haaa ha yep central point eatery, tab bhi flash nahi hua...this is getting hilarious. oh wait! "sangakkara frm srilanka"yesss the one ,use pagal daya ko damak main rekha tha ,soocha kurrie kush ho jaye gi ,mind you i love him myself par exellence cricketer hain??? dimag ki batti abhi jali, nahi bhuji😆 yeh sab nautanki kaha se araha hai, n why wil he show tamil movies being a sinhalese, hahaaa! this is madness.yeah..this is daya hindi ati nehi learnt it all from LTL1,bolly wood gana and filmien...haaa ha bless her my mooti billy choo! aur yeh major shuru with his bhashans[bore karta hai banda] kabhi bhi enjoy karega good co;? woh bhi international banda mila hain... 😉 its like from the sublime to the ridiculous with him baaaby,just when you think gods in heaven , and all's right with the world gadha gets stubborn ,asking for a laat up his hind! poor naku she has petite legs ..which wont even crease his bloody trousers , let alone a dent up his#!😆 Atleast he made up for his gadhapan with his romancing, chalo kuch toh ataa hai😉 total paisa vasool bole toh🤣..im in stitches now hammie i seriously doubt this is u who has done this update, its so comical outsourcing toh nahi kiya na?😆 baaby you have guessed it right mera jaisa kill joy itna humour tu nehi de sakta ,its was actually ,daya ,warda, tahera ,tamanna , naku and above all your self that did it .so baaby take a bow!
But the anticlimax of all tht just happened has dampened the mood Hmm! once again khani is the culprit..major ko bhi hiladiya. cant fathom what he is feelg, as he is yet to come clean n the precap too doesnt help with naku n major havg major diferences between them..🤢 blanked out.i knew it abhi tak is chorri ne khani ka name nehi leya and woh dekh! le liya...haan cheez hai itne mast ke major ko hila diya us ne...yess baaby koi massla tu hai betwen Dutta and Naku..I guess he will have to sort it out...watch out for the next UD...on the forum..listen ,thanks a lot baaby ,tera feed back ka hamesha intezaar hote hai mujhe , but you should know that baaby ..oh and can I call you brvv ..still.. with much love and magic touch! xxx hammie
Me had a blast hammie with this update n i realise what i wouldve lost if id gone ahead with my plans, chal bahot hogaya teri wah wahai! will wait for the suspense to unravel n it better match upto the stir it has created, thanx a ton! n u take care!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi my sona...good to see you are on my thread!
Hi hamlet
Awesome UD... liked most part ...naku needs to be more smart ...inviting a stranger for fly dinner ...even after harshad episode ...baji & roops are sweet heart 😊
dutta ...seemed depressed khan ...episode & naku ...amateurish away didn't help either ...naku helps major come out of his dilimma ...its expecting too much fr her ...she lacks wisdom ...definately as would be wife needs to know abt it ...dutta needs to be sher ...naku ...can follow some of code of conduct ...not been friendly with his student ...next ud soon tc
sona tune aache points raise ke hain...correct .pasand aye mujhe ...but we'll see in next UD kya hota hai...till ten thank you friend for reading the UD and commenting. much love xx yours hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago


hi hamlet
thanks for pm & liked the ud .regards uvi

hi uvi, thank you once again for reading and commenting on my UD will contiune to pm when ever ready..the next one...lots of love .xx yours hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

hey hammie😊
hellooo ranju ...good to see you baaby..

beautiful update dear👏
thank you..
so nakku gets promotion great😃
not yet ,she has to apply for the job, first..
to share her happiness she call up major but he's in bad mood and cut the phone and even this time nakku decided not to call him 😡
yes ,and his cold behaviour has now made her falter as well!
finally her phone ring and she say whatever she want but to baaji while thinking of her saab and baaji like always superb in teasing tasha 😆
will try ,when ever I can to include Baji in the UD
on other side dutta too want to talk to her and blaming her for not calling up him and when phone ring he just started without checking caller name and again baaji on other side and what a actor he is major trapped in his plan and decided to see ill nakku.😆
keeping Baji ke nautanki alive...in every possible way!
finally tasha meeting at restaurant but with someone else major full of jealous but later fine and baaji make a way for both to have some quality time with each other😳 yes tasha together..itna tu mujhe samje ah raha hai ke readers want to see them together...😆

major wanna leave military and decided to talk to her mum but without nakku's view... yesss ,that's what is plaguing him at the moment...dekho kiya kerta hai..watch out for he next UD which is far from finished ..

wonderful update thanks a lot ranju for making the time to read it and then comment...appreciate it ..hope studies theekh ja rehe hain...xx all my love hammie

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update👏 Just a Q. are they allowed to leave Army before compeleting a certain time period? After 20 years of serving in Army they can retire in India. Am not aware of what happens in other countries.😊 Waiting for the next update, Datta should change his decision.

helllooo,heyyy,great to see you mate...doing a super job with your OS on DKDM...so proud of you ,tera latest wala thanks for the pm... will read it soon and comment... baki I tried to look for the answer to your very pertinent question... pass .haven't found it yet..but may be can be tweaked into the UD... ab Dutta ka pata nehi ke drama baazi kr aha hai ye saach main us ka kiya plan hai...with him you never know...may be he wants to be a Don in PW...? dekho.in next UD.which is not even half way finished...will pm you jab hi pura hoya... listen good to see you on my thread again ...lots of love xx as ever yours hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited by -bharti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee
naku...oye looks like i missed you of all the people ane naku ko...pagal ho gaya hai tera saab!😆 chaal sorry...pata kiya...i took tahra ka comment and soocha tu hai...haaa had to edit it ...now if she read it before i edited it to use mein maine ne remark diya tha...
naku tu ahgaye hai ,ja ab mera aur baji ke liya ache se chai le ker ah...hummmh

had a feeling ke you 'll ud 😊dekho mein aa gai .as for ud loved it .naku getting offer from tendulkar & baji ne pehli he treat dedi😆 .baji sense of humor is amazing .from where did you picked up bambiya accent .sach bole toh i can't belive u aren't fr mumbai .take a bow mem it sounds so authentic 👏
sangara ke intoduction was bit scare hope he isn't harshad part 2 cricket ka bahut assar ho raha hai .srilanka aur kya kya 😊 haaa nehi yaar ..mumbai accent tu bolly wood films mein hai , even in the dramas.so i catch on to it...good fun...its just writing hindi in english that gets me down ,spellings dont make sense at all... cricket ka influence hamesha se tha ,aaj kal warda ne bhar diya hai...use bahut shahaaq hai...
.thankfully guy sounds safe as far as feeling towards naku is concered .rest the background check our major is there
yeh khan ne kitna majboor kar diya hamaari major ko he is ready to leave army .😆 haaa this coment split me up haaa... i didn't expect him to be so weak ,khan kya dhusman ke toop se bhi zayad dangerous hai .i want him to come out strong .khan is n't impt enough ,he can't take the blame for one in efficient student rest of them are doing well .hope naku give him some gyan
😆😆 brilliant lines .me rocking now and rolling ...chaal next UD mein dekh lena kaya hoga.. listen teri naughty harketien mera thread e make me laugh chorri .keep it up ,keep the thread rolling lots of love...naku .your saab loves you because you always stand by me...xxx hammie
as always hammiee u r amazing .enjoy the weekend tc

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Posted: 13 years ago
ahmm ... palpitations ..biting nails**symptoms** after landing late ... sorryyy for coming so late...😳

Hammie 🤗
what a brilliant update... rocking one i must say...dil garden garden ho gya after reading...
got your pm of annotations...and i read it the day it was posted but could not de-res the spot


what a way to start...naku paid for her hard work... A wel deserved promotion for naku...must be a proud moment for her...when at one place she is heading so close to achieve her target in the form of nandi's progress ...andplus because of her sincerity towards her work... and ofcourse the news had to be shared with the most important person of her life...her saab... 😳
oh poor girl expecting her saabs call and here comes haar problem ka solution baaji... i must say
like a true friend at right time...and even guessed so both were troubled ...and smart enough to arrange something together for them...

The intro of a new PT ...nice firstly i thought some rival for dutta yet again to enter...but ahhh nice character sangakara...it was reminding me of Srilankan player ...you know i am a cricket addict 😳. It was nice reading abou him..his convo with baaji in the car was fun to read...baaji is always a fun filled treat to read...teaching him hindi...loocha lol nice word to start with ...hehe...and naku is so kind to bring him along 😊

okh the brief convo between dutta and khan gives little insight what is bothering duttas o much...
ohh he too expecting nakus call...khud kyn nahi baat ker laita😛 both of them reminding of the
line dono taraf hai aag barabar laagi hui... but of course major will show attitude first...why isnt she coming herself 😛
baaji LOl once again full on nautanki...i loved him immitating nakus style but the epic one was major saying teri awaz ko kiya hua hai naku ...aww **pulling his cheeks**
oyeee baaji lying about nakus health...and poor dutta at verge of crying**glares at baaji** ...koi
aur bahana nahi mila...guess pressing his weak nerve ...reaction was immediate ...

Now i loved his first reaction after seeing naku is completly fine...relived her ...and that saved baaji too ...jhoota :P ...

Sangakara being interogatted by dutta ...he was sounding a typical officer there ..keen to know
abiut his wareabouts ...btw i loved his reason for choosing a job at some other country...lucky dudecan travel freely...must be a nice and learning experience for him to explore new places

Dutta and NAku ...do i need to say always love their moments together... both deserved it ...after
long time ..me keeping record of it 😆. here we were asking for a fone call...and thanks to your generosity unko milwa hi diya ...nothing could be better than this...😳

Dutta must be a proud man hearing about nakus promotion and wanted to be the first one to know...teewar theek kab thy...if the poor girl had called the answer would have been Why did you called me at working hours jahil aurat 😛 ...haiii my naku ... ** me giving a hug**

AS alraedy getting intutions something wrong with his cub...i must say a child can never hide anythingfrom this one creature after God... now im not getting what is bothering him so much about khan...what is his fault in all this...im sure more of this will be revealed in next part...so cant wait ...
and the precap ...ahmm ...all is well ...all is well
Sorry once again for being super late**holding my ears** ...waiting eagerly for next update and for your annotations on my comment as well 😳...they are much awaited as well as much is the update...
and Happy friendship's week to you and all the readers here ...Thank you everyone for being such lovely friends 🤗

and this ones specially for you hammie 🤗

Edited by Warda. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment😳 to this wonderful chapter, Hammie 👏.

Naku is rewarded for all her hard work with a promotion and shares it with Dutta before taking a decision...well that should make our Major Saab happy.

Dutta is disturbed with Khan issue .. great understanding between AS and DSP ...and Baccha kitna bhi bada ho jaye he will still be a child to his mother...D wants to be consult and be comforted by AS..so cute na ?

Tasha was smoldering hot with undercurrents. DSP jealous of Naku..thank God the bomb was diffused in time 😆


Edited by ivy_11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ivy 🤗
both of us sailing in same boat today...late latif 😆

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