'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude - Page 45

Thank you very much guys for all the love you have given my ff, here is individual feedback to your comments. Hopefully I will be back soon with something else you will enjoy reading. Until then please all keep in touch.

@yuvi love, lagta hai god ne sunli alright. Beat Daya didn't you at least and sorry for springing the end on you like that just felt like it was time to end and so I went ahead with it. don't worry I will be back. At the start of the ff I was intending to maybe bring kala back but yes she was out of the house prior to naku's entry.

Actually yes originally I planned it so dutta would return home, give them both the cold shoulder for a while and then the likes of dutta and nakusha were both going to meet with some sort of accident where both are hurt. in the process of all that dutta was going to start warming back to madu and baaji. I thought about it and really felt like I didn't want to prolong this ff any longer and closed it.

Aayi sahib the hero for this last chapter actually made a stand!! I would say your right dutta did begin to blame himself, he just feels responsible for them I guess, wants to keep them happy so apart of him just feels as if he has let them down by not having noticed it earlier.

The dining table scene actually I actually think that was one of my frav moments of this last chapter. Dutta was the only one to notice that his sister wasn't eating. No matter how angry or upset he is, he still cares. Yes you noticed the change in Madhus words and that was deliberate, the words were changed to sound more respectable I guess and that was madhu making a point of the fact that she was serious about there relationship and the fact that she was speaking about baaji in that way..acting in that way all made dutta realise that madu was now married to baaji. Finally dutta ringing baaji hes such an adorable brother, just cant help himself! O yes another one of your wishes granted and none other than dutta shri ram patil himself teasing his Mrs.! I know you didn't want the end..but I will be back with another ff soon so please think of it as an opportunity to read something even better.

@aamirkhanfan Thank you very much for reading my ff and its really good to know you enjoyed it till the end. I don't usually write epilogues just because i prefer the idea of an open ending to any storyline..the reader is left to imagine what becomes of the characters but for you guys I will think about it.

thank you very much like I said I will hopefully be back with something else soon.

@ Daya Partner your such an hero! four whole chapters all at once! Medal now its my turn to respond.

Chapter 18: Very true Dutta and Naku are practically a couple who love each other just Dutta who has to really formalise things with an expression of love. The whole confession of duttas love was framed inside a scenario if you can call it that. Like you say even though Dutta had forgotten all about that incident in the rain Nakusha was still very much living the aftermath of that. Still scared of facing dutta after it. Dutta had spent two days or so just thinking about nakusha so for him she was always around and the moment he tells her that she should have told him about the kangan that very moment was kind of a two way thing for nakusha. She must have been thinking either her husband didn't notice she was gone or he really cares about enough to overlook the physical divide.

I really liked your mention of taking advice from somebody else but in the end you go through it in your own way anyhow. Very true and it totally applied t Mr P here. Moving on to the staring contest, I think all of us much of played this as kids! This was a real eye opener moment for dutta. it did make him think, pretty awkward for nakusha though bless her.

Aw I'm glad you liked the confession, like you say it really was a mix of dutta reacting to seeing nakusha so upset and then that led on to him spilling his feelings out for her. That for me was something that was so required, dutta needed to see how guilty and hurt nakusha felt and it was the perfect moment not only to console her but tell her that he loved her.

From a general point of view when your upset all you look for is somebody to share your grief with, somebody who will understand. Nakusha was very isolated she couldn't share her feelings with him he had to approach her and for me that I think really mirrors human behavior. Followed by the rain..and the kangans and the embrace whist trying to get to sleep. I guess all this was for my readers who love the stubble moments between the two.

Chapter 19: Moving along with you nakusha and her kangans, I would say its all ways the little things. for nakusha. She doesn't ask for much, actually she doesn't ask for anything so the smallest of moments with Dutta really mean the world to her. Aw yes ladoo tasting, all in the name of romance hey! And of course holi. I think you just might be right dutta totally listens to nakusha, just trying to get in the good books I guess! The one thing I always try to retain is duttas nature, keep it consistent. Lets face it dutta shri ram patil isn't one to go play holi so therefore his rules at they were had to be in there somewhere. When it comes to nakusha he makes the acceptation but Yuvi made a good point saying that baaji wouldn't be happy if he found at nakusha was aloud to face-paint. Madu and baaji with there tiff, dutta not getting involved with baajis matter I think it was more to do with nakusha really. he had just realised his feelings for nakusha so she I guess occupied his mind. Even a the end of this chapter he is looking for her.

Chapter 20: So Next chapter 20 and we are following dutta into his room and yes the sweet nothings are back. I think I said it earlier to somebody but what can I do habit bangayi hai jaaldi jaane wali nahin hai. I guess these moments in my ff are going to be things nobody is ever going to really no about. I do remember us talking about the way dutta can read nakushas eyes and this is totally something nakusha knows. Dutta leaves the very moment where he knows nakusha is pretending that his going away will not upset her I guess you can say is a good example of how well dutta can read nakusha, understand her without words. Coming to baaji and madhu I just wanted to be a bit drastic I guess and I kind of wanted them to be a little bit childish and so they did just that. I agree I would be angry too its not really an amazing justification for getting married. In someway you could say baaji and madhu should have plucked up some courage and faced dutta instead of playing runaway bride. Dutta is back and that brings with it chapter 22, rushing off with you partner.

Chapter 21: I guess this was dedicated to baaji and madhu, I agree logic would say you tell him instead of running away and getting married however like I say I wanted to bring out a very childish or naive element here so they go to the drastic measure of getting married. Can you imagine the awkward silence that must of filled the room when dutta comes face with them both. This potion of the ff I would say was all about the misconception that begins to build in the human mind. There was this worry within baaji which began to only see dutta having an negative reaction to there relationship. They almost overlooked the fact that he is still loves them enough to see things there way.

Leaving them to behind, back to nakusha and dutta the mandir moment is a peak into there life together. I guess this was the closing element of the ff that leaves you thinking about what the life that awaits them. The rest of it I guess is for you to imagine. Thank you very much daya for your kind words, your feedback on my ff has always put a smile on my face. Hopefully I will be back soon with something more for you to read. Until then pm toe hai naa! Look forward to our chats.

@tahera57 Thank you very much for following this ff through till its end. Really enjoyed your company and you know what it is hard to let go but I got to a point where I also felt it was time. I will surely be back with something more until then please keep in touch. See you around the forum and eternal story..lots of love

Jag

@Nakusha Thank you very much for being with this ff and im going to miss this ff too but im not going to let myself miss any of you because I'm always going to be around. I will try to write something as soon as I can. Matter in fact I already have an concept in my mind just not put it together yet. To be honest I might begin writing it in my spare time during all my work and stuff and post it if I make progress. Don't worry I will be back for sure. Until then keep the conversations going.

@maria_awan Thank you very much for reading, its been lovely to have you with this ff and I will be back writing something soon, until then please keep in touch.

@dilse14Its my pleasure, I cant thank you guys enough for taking the time out to read my writing and putting up with all my delays and stuff. Thank you, like I say I will be back soon.

@tamanna1391 Hey, thank you very much for reading and being with the ff till its end. Im just pleased to have written something you all liked. i think I said this earlier, I don't usually do epilogues just because I like the storyline to have an open ending where by the reader can imagine and personalize there own ending. But I will consider it and if not I will be back soon with something new. Promise.

@sona89You know what I'm missing the ff and you guys too! Actually soon as I posted that last chapter I began missing it. funny I know but I will surely be back with something. I kind of want to write something right now but will do soon. Thank you very much for being with this ff throughout. Do keep in touch through this thread or p.m Thanks.

@UwithThank you very much for being with this ff through its due course, its always been lovely to read you're feedback and I will be back soon with something new

@mIsHeZ.x Yep sorry kind of did put and end to it but like I have said to everybody else I will be back soon with something else. Thank you very much for being with this ff all the way. Love your feedback and chitchat always..keep your bickering with daya going its good entertainment!

Originally posted by: jagrutid

@yuvi love, lagta hai god ne sunli alright. Beat Daya didn't you at least and sorry for springing the end on you like that just felt like it was time to end and so I went ahead with it. don't worry I will be back. At the start of the ff I was intending to maybe bring kala back but yes she was out of the house prior to naku's entry.

Actually yes originally I planned it so dutta would return home, give them both the cold shoulder for a while and then the likes of dutta and nakusha were both going to meet with some sort of accident where both are hurt. in the process of all that dutta was going to start warming back to madu and baaji. I thought about it and really felt like I didn't want to prolong this ff any longer and closed it. 😲 tasha accident...hmm i guess mayb u wud hav had baji sumhw save thm... yh i didnt think dutta wud warm back 2 thm so easily bt guess u wer gna conclude it so myt as well giv thm the happy ending...

Aayi sahib the hero for this last chapter actually made a stand!! I would say your right dutta did begin to blame himself, he just feels responsible for them I guess, wants to keep them happy so apart of him just feels as if he has let them down by not having noticed it earlier. hmm mayb yh... bt i guess in tht moment he doesnt stop 2 think tht mayb he isn't 2 blame n mayb der is a reason y they didnt approach him 1st...

The dining table scene actually I actually think that was one of my frav moments of this last chapter. mine 2...😳Dutta was the only one to notice that his sister wasn't eating. innit tho..m surprised no1 else did...jus goes 2 shw tht his attention is mre on madhu n baji than he makes it out 2 b No matter how angry or upset he is, he still cares. Yes you noticed the change in Madhus words and that was deliberate, the words were changed to sound more respectable I guess and that was madhu making a point of the fact that she was serious about there relationship and the fact that she was speaking about baaji in that way..acting in that way all made dutta realise that madu was now married to baaji.mus hav been weird 4 him tho... til yday baji was jus his best m8 and she was jus his youngest sis...bt nw his sis was married 2 his best m8, and baji was his bro-in-law... Finally dutta ringing baaji hes such an adorable brother, just cant help himself!..wish madhu had heard it 2😳 O yes another one of your wishes granted and none other than dutta shri ram patil himself teasing his Mrs.! haha mre than wt i wished 4..i didnt think tht dutta himself wud do it..i thrt mayb baji or AS wud do the teasing jus as they did in DN thread... I know you didn't want the end..but I will be back with another ff soon so please think of it as an opportunity to read something even better. wil b w8in Jagz🤗

Originally posted by: jagrutid

yey i've even written the first chapter but i'm struggling for a title.