keh ke na keh saku tujhe part8 pg23 updt nov 1 - Page 13

lovely updaty as all i can say

gr8 update dear loved it vry vry much...

Hey dear sana🤗

hi sana loved the update in particular absolutely, loved the action bits ,dutta fight scene was very well written,as was Naku's attempted assualt scene. theTasha revelation section was mixed withaffection,romance and progressing love between the two!

Originally posted by: daya0628

Sana *Hugs*
Mein Aagai ...my god feels like so long since I commented on anything...

omg what a meet yaara...the way he runs there with so much hope and desires and love only to find she has been taken ...and then the way he barges in ...bilkul filmy style mein haaye haaye :P ...and runs in search of his lost love now found heehee...and takes her in his arms just like old times...aww...and she melts there too ...omg i love the way she realizes ...pulls back and runs with him coming after her...and then she rants on about how she can not like him cuz she likes 'someone else' which is him ...but that scene was beautiful...he is not able to believe his ears that she said his name ...just wen he thght his Naku liked someone else...ahh omg lol ...loved the way he responded to her to make her realize he is him .lol ...woh gadha haha ...and running into his open arms ...kya baat hai...loved it sana ...very cute update...loved the little teasing bit at the end...now precap sound good...update soon ...love you lots...loads of hugs...take care...will try to chat with u soon :)

daya yar thanx for this

guys sorry for delay its almost done

Part-6

Naku just blushed and hugged him again.hit him on his chest n said "sach kahu isse hi rehna kabhi mat badlna..tera gussa .bate sab mujhe khushi deti hai"

Dutta tight his griped on her waist n said"ab jaisa bolegi na waisa hi boluga meh bach pan ki tarha"

It was new beginning for that love bird/''

Both looking lost at each other. baji who watching all this form corner of road smiled to both of them. He was really happy for dutta as he got her true love in life. Well at end he was baji who can keep his mouth shut n said "bhao bas karo kya puri kasar aaj hi nikal denge.ki age ke liye bhi kuch rakhenge. Jara mere bare meh toh sochiye meh ye sab dekhne ke liye bhahut chota hu."

After hearing all this naku blushed and while dutta given deadly looked to him. Baji went to them dutta said "ye sab tu janbuj kar karta hai ya bas naturally ho jata hai"

Baji moves his hand through hairs and said "bhao aap meri insult kar rahe ho who bhi vahini ke samne.ye sab chodo vehini meh aap ko bhao ke raaz batata hu'jab aap nahi thi na to bhao'."

Dutta hit him on head n said "wah iss ke rang toh dekho vahini kya ayi in ki toh chal hi badal gayi"

Naku smiled "dutta tum ne matlab ki aap ne inhe kyu mara." Dutta looked at naku who was trying to avoid her embarrassment said "dekho naku tumhe mujhe aap kehne ki jarurat nahi our ha iss baji ko bappa na aisa hi banaya hai .ye hamare bich chalta hai"

Naku and baji smiled at dutta. Naku remembered that she have to reach the home before veer n babi.

"mujhe ghar jana hoga aai our dada aye honge toh ghar ki halat mujhe iss hal meh dekh kar kya karenge" She said in worried voice. Dutta said "hum sab sambhala lenge chalo ghar chalte hai." they departure for her home.

Here veer and babi was worried for naku. veer said"ye sab meri galti hai meh usse akele kyu jane diya'. Agar usse kuch ho gaya toh meh khud ko maff nahi kar sakunga"

Babi "veer aisa nahi kehte beta kuch nahi hoga mere bappa hai na"

Car stop in front of their house with jerk naku get out of car. Babi n veer scanned her form head to toe she ran to babi hug her crying silently. Babi console her n said "naku meri bacchi tu thik toh hai na.ye sab kaise huwa...Kuch toh bol"

Naku started her story controlling tears. Veer saw two guys standing in door. "Par ye dono kon hai" he asked naku pointing towards them. Naku "dad ye toh d'' "Before naku could complete his sentence dutta signed her not to tell them abt his real identity. Naku completely dumbstruck have no how to cover this mess looking at dutta. Baji came forward take charge of situation n said "ye akash mera bhai and meh ranbeer.hum yahi rehte hai patil wadi meh hum yaha se guzar rahi the tab ye hamko mili." naku "dada agar aaj ye na hote toh meh'.."veer wnet dutta patted his shoulder and hugged him said "thanks tumne aaj jo kiya hai who toh koi apna bhi nahi karta tum ne ye sab paraye hote huye kiya." Dutta's eyes cupped with old memories from childhood how the two families love each other. They broke the hugged dutta said "aap ko mera shukriya karne ki jarurat nahi meh Jodi paraya hu'.. just regains situation and cover it by saying "matlab meri jagha koi bhi hota toh yahi karta tha na..aap mujhe apna hi maniye'"

Babi smiled at him walked towards him n said" beta aaj se tum hamare apne'isse apna ghar samazna mujhe tumhari maa." He bends down take blessing form her"khush raho bhagawan kare tumhe tumhare mann ke mutabek jivan sathi mile." He gauzed at naku form corner of his eyes.baji light mood by saying "maji toh mere ko bhi yahi ashriwad dena ki meri vihini jaldi se ajaye." everyone smiled and dutta take leave form them. Veer babi came with them till gate. Baji got the chance and he trough piece of paper to naku. Dutta n baji gets seat in car. Dutta looking at naku who lowered her gauzed.

Patil nivas

Kala was sitting with Minakshi in her bed room. Kala" Minakshi tum chinta mat karna aaj dutta tumhari taraf apna pehla kadam badhayega.tum bas uss ka sath nibhana hamesha chahe kuch ho jaye."Minakshi extend her hand place on her hand n said" meh apni har jimedari nibhungi. Unke liye meh har mushkil se takara jaungi." Kala hugged her but she was having fishy smile on lips.

Dutta and baji reached on patilnivas. Both were entering in dutta's bed room. Baji was dancing "ae dhinka chika dinka chika bhao aaj toh bhao mere toh salman ki tarha nachunga bole toh ek dum

Chal chaiya chaiya." Dutta hit him on headed "bakwas band kar hamesha bak bak chlu rahti hai."

Buji felled bad abt this make his face down.dutta smiled at his innocent face n said "waise ye salman ka nahi shahrukh ka gana hai." Baji and dutta both laughed dutta "waise sach kahu toh ha yeh mere liye khaas din hai mujhe apni mazil dekhyi de gayi.ab meh bhi wahi jindgi jiyuga jo har insaan apne liye sochta hai'." He sat on his chair fidgeting with his cell phone. Close her eyes for her single look. Baji also lies on couch just smiling. Kala heard the conversation form doorway. She thought dutta was agreed with her marrying Minakshi. Dutta" uss ka chehara samne ata hai na toh muskurahat apne aap aa jati hai baji"

"Bhao meh bahut khush hu tune ye rasta chuna'ab sab thik hoga'"she said to herself'walked form there with face full of happiness.

Dutta opens his eyes scratching his forehead. "Kya huwa bhao ab toh khush the toh?"

Dutta replied "meh ab bhi khush hu baji par uss se baat karne mere mann kar raha tha ji kar raha ki uss se itni baatein karu ki ' mere dil meh koi baat aisi na ki who na jann sake"

Baji" bhao toh iss meh tension kaisa meh hu na. mere ko pata tha ki aap aisa hi kuch karenge.aap toh thehre prabhu ram khud toh sharmate rahenge.toh ab in ram sita ko mila ne ke mujhe kuch toh karna padega na 'toh aap ye lo"

Dutta asked with confused faced"ye kya hai'tera phone iska kya karu meh? achar dalu?" baji said with mischief smiled on lips "soch lo bhao iss phone vahini ka number hai 'thik hai aap ko nahi chahiye toh meh delete karta hu"

Dutta captured phone instantly said "par ye tune kaise kiya.."

Baji"who ek lambi kahani hai mein our vahini ki baad meh batayunga'ab aap phone karo vahini intzaar kar rahi hogi..."

Dutta dialed the number but hesitated to call looked towards baji begging some privacy. Baji smiled "bhao meh jata hai par ye mera phone hai vahini nahi '"

Dutta got irritated n said"du kya tereko" but baji was already ran form danger. Naku was waiting for his call with phone in hand plying with it. Finally phone rang. She picked it immediately n but can't speak a single word here dutta also stay quite. They stay like this for some time.he breked the silence said "naku ye khamoshi bahut batein kar rahi hai na." naku takes sharper breathe hearing his voice n said "haa aaj ki raat hi kuch alag hai khas hai.keh ne toh bahut kuch hai par shabd toh." Dutta "kam hai..itne salo ke baad mile who bhi aise bappa ke khel who hi jane..kash tum yaha hoti mer pass mere samne toh dekh pati ki meh tumhe kitna yaad karta hu"

Naku "meh wahi toh hu tum meh ek hi hai ' sab janti hu meh tumhari her dhadkan mere dil meh hoti hai"

Dutta moves his hand form his hairs smiled said"ye sab keh ne ki batein hai ab meh pehle jaisa nahi raha ki tu meri har chori pakad le"

Naku "buddhu pehle jaise hi ho ab tum. Ab balo se hath nikalo ye kya hamesha balo se khelte rehte ho"

Dutta shocked as she described it exactly. Staged playing with fingers"ab ungliyo khel rahe ho na' uff kab chutegi tumhari ye adat "naku said

Dutta stops it immediately n said "tum kya koi jasus ho ya mere kamre meh chup kar mujhe dekh rahi ho bolo'"

Nakusha "na meh nahi meh sirf Nakusha hu apne dutta ki Nakusha jo usse bahut pyaar karti hai"

Dutta "meh bhi tum se untna hi pyaar karta hu naku.. jitna ki tum." she walked to widow saw the sky full of stars and bright moon. She twinkled her eyes after seeing that sight. "Tum jara khidki ke pass ana '. "She said. "Par kyu" he asked. He came near the window n saw the same view. "kitna sudar nazara hai na bolo..itne sare sitare sab jaise mere achal meh aa gaye hai.. chand bhi aaj kuch iss tarha dikh rah ke meh uss se hatho meh le sakti hu"

Dutta" ha sundar toh hai par ye sitaro ki chamak itni nahi jitni tumhari muskurahat meh hai..Ye chand toh khud khushnaseeb hoga jab tum isse se apne hatho meh logi'.duniya ki har chiz tumhare kadmo meh lake rakhna chahta hu meh Nakusha.

Naku"meri tarif who bhi itni 'dutta meri ek baat manoge'." Dutta"hmm'bolo" naku tum wahi gaana gaoge jo bachpan meh bajaya karte the'"

Dutta turned on the speaker phone. Take his mouth organ in hand said "meri our sirf meri Nakusha ke liye"

He started the song'. She cover self with her duptta warped it around herself. He was singing with full passion and his voice was describing his love.

Epi ends

This was quick one next part will continue the remains which more tasha moments. And Tasha first date to come.

Tomorrow part B

sorry for any mistake

sana 😊

i will continue only all of u will comment.