keh ke na keh saku tujhe part8 pg23 updt nov 1 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sana pardons😳 for being soo laid back was busy generally
yes thanks it was once again a well sequenced update that was pacy and I think is in keeping with the kind of life Dutta and Baji lead ..not relaxed at all but playing the dire and the dirty.
Baji was lovable in all his proDutta talks with this vunerable girl,love his image promoting ..baji should join election campaigning and Dutta should run for PW mayor haaaha!
oh those eve teasers ,well i would call it an attempt to ,or sexual a ssualt...and they are on route to planning more... sound the alarm some one..wolves on rampage!
oye did you write the piece of poetry .if so another poet on the forum wow do some more..
so his pines and search for his love is on and it looks like she may be close by..
the last line what Dutta says to Baji about how to speed the car was a lovely one!
enjoyed it sana👏👏 ..waiting for the next bit..thanks for the pm... xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
updateyaar kya bachhe ki jaan logi😭
Edited by rrs1391 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for wait guys tonight update for sure
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part -5

part-5

he was filled with those expression which he can't express….like bird in gold prism who was abt to fly in blue sky…happy tears came from his eyes …baji watched it and hugged him tightly dutta "baji ab mujhe nayi jindgi mili hai…mujhe uss ke pass jana hai..Chal aaj aisi gadi chala ki tufan bhi kamjoor pad jaye"

Car stops in front of her house dutta almost run as with each step. He was coming close to his

Love. Now no one can stop him. Door was open...he directly enters in house …whole room was smashed... landslides under his feet ..."Nakusha "he screamed ...looking for her in each and every part of house…baji enters with super speed when he heard the screamed... "Bhao"n he saw the situation of the house ...While dutta can't believe that he lost his love again .baji Can relate this situation with incident in morning with that bas**** .BAJI SAID IN LOW VOICE "BHAO YE USS KI HARKAT HAI. "Dutta turn his to baji who can see all question in his eyes …he told him wat happen in morning. Dutta was burning with anger .baji "uss sale ko subh hi khatam karna chahiye tha..tab" dutta "nahi baji naku chukar uss ne apni maut ko dawat di hai …jiss hat se uss ne naku ko chuwa hai na uss haath ke tukde kar kar meh patil wadi ke har kutte ko chilayega pata kar ki kaha chupe bethe hai hai chuhe " baji dialed his gang member while asking for that guys . Dutta looked at some drops of blood on floor...he bend down tears came from his eyes mixed with that... said to himself "bahut intzaar kar liya ham ne naku ab our nahi

Har mushkil se takra jauga meh tere liye par tu himmat rakh "

Baji placed his on dutta's shoulder "bhao unka pata pata chal gaya " ..dutta immediately wipes his tears n said in his tiger like voice "gadi nikal"

Ware house

The men pulled naku out of the car. Naku was fighting them and yelling help. They walked inside with her. They stopped and told their boss "prakash dada hum iss ladki ko leke aye hai"

Naku looked up and with wide eyes saw her worst nightmare. He was same who she meets in morning .guy get up from his chair walked up to her … naku stood frozen becoz she think it's her dream . He stands in front of her smiled evilly n said" dekho toh kon hai yaha …. Pagal ho gaye ho tum log kaha tha tum ko inhe koi taklif nahi honi chalhiye par ..chodo chodo unhe"

They leaved her hand free...Naku who was horrified stated crying said "mujhe Jane do meh ne kya kiya"

Prakash "na na aap toh rone lag gayi …abhi abhi toh ayi hai aap ...apka swagat bhi thik se nahi huga …chaliye bethe hai yaha "

He was abt grabbed her hand but pulled it back…finally he grabbed her hand take her to one of the room .through on bed she gather herself to run form there. But then someone closed the door blocked her way .he said "yaha se bhagna ab thoda mushkil hai "

She begged "dekhiye mujhe jane do mujh se kya chahiye aap ko"

He brought naku closer to him and smelled her duptta. She bites his hand with force. He got frustrated, and yanked her hair. Said "teri waje se mujhe jitni taklif huyi hai na uss se jyada ab tujhe hogi.. Woh kya hai na meh koi bhi kaam adhura nahi chod ta jo subhe reh gaya tha na wahi pure kar raha hu"

Someone knock the door he goes and opens it asked "kya re kyu disturb kar raha mere ko … dekh nahi rah busy hai meh"

Other guy "maff karo bhai per woh kya hai na ki upar se apke bade bhai ka phone "

He said "thik de mere ko … ha boliye bhai"

He walked form there saying "iss par nazar rakh na kahi bhag na jaye. "That guy closed the door

Naku was completely shattered crying really hard.

Calling her bappa to rescue her form that situation. He really wishing dutta was with him... But just then that creep enter in room .he walked to her she just ran to other corner of room. But he catches her. He lowered down to her level, and got strong grip of her hair and held it back with force, making Naku scream in pain. She some how

Free she pushes him back. He gets back and slapped her .she felt on floor little blood came from mouth. He harshly grabbed her making her stand. He cupped her face with one hand, squeezing her cheeks with his thumb and fingers on either side with excessive pressure. She could not take pained any more. He took off his shirt

Naku could feel disgust intension in his eyes.

"Bang ...boom" both herd sound of something. He immediately open the door got to take look of wat happen. As soon as he enters in that hall …..He saw all his men's was lying on ground .screaming with pain. "Kis ne kiya hai "he roared. "Meh ne kiya hai ye sab par lagta hai tu choot gaya aaj yaha kisi ko nahi chodunga meh "someone said in full aggressive voice. Prakash turned her face to him. It was dutta n baji .he asked "sala tum log kyu aye yaha… lagta hai marne ka bada shauk hai tum ko"

Baji came forward n said "dekh bate band kar jaldi se bata ladki kaha hai warna ... aaj toh tu gaya "

Prakash"uss ke liye aye ho toh laut jao who meri hai samze … ek baar mera dil bhar jaye uss se toh tum rakh lena usse "

Dutta clenched his jaw tight and spoke with anger "tere ko pata nahi kis ke bare meh aisa bol raha hai tu"

He gave gun to baji and signs him to stay out this fight .he charge up punch him in stomach. Grabbed him, by his collar bang his head on drum which was nearby again making his head bloodying. Took one of his hand and said "iss hath se naku ko chuwa tha na ab dekh iss ka injaam " dutta broke his hand from the wrist. He yelped in pain and bent over in agony. He kicked on his legs hard. Baji knows he have stop dutta otherwise he was abt to kill him. Baji stops him but he continue to hit him .baji shouted "bhao Nakusha uss aap ki jarurat hai "

This make realized dutta whole situation and start searching for naku .then he saw a door which was locked .he broke it by one kick. She was laying her head on wall crying too much. Teeth marks in her delicate skin, bruises on her arms and cheek, cuts all over her body, her clothes were disarrayed to a point of shameless torture, blood was oozing from her mouth, her eyes told the pain was too much for her to handle. Dutta also cried seeing her in pained. Just remember his old small naku when she cried… he used hugged her tightly to stop her… without wasting time he ran to her hugged him with same compactions as before …on other side she had no idea wat was going on..

But it's kind of relief she felt in his arm. She hugged him back too. Baji saw them while standing in door

Smiled happily. Some time pass away they didn't know how much time they are hugging each other.

Naku's breath came to normal now she can realize the entire situation. He pushes him back look at him with anger slapped him.

Ran from their while crying baji tries to stop her but don't gets a chance to say something to her.

Dutta looked at baji n said "mujhe rok na hoga uss se pagal hai kuch bhi karegi "

And he ran after him baji followed him.

Naku ran on road without looking where she was going truck came from her back. Driver was horned it many times but she remains unaffected. Dutta watched all this truck was coming close her...he ran as fast as he can catch her hand pull her to himself save her within time. She repels herself from him.

Said "chodo mujhe kyu bachya mujhe marne diya hota.ye sab kar ke kya jatana chahte ho tum "

Dutta tried to say "woh meh ..."but she interrupted him n said"jab se mujhe mile ho meri madat ki jaan bachayi par tum jo chahte nahi ho sakta …meh kisi our se pyaar karti hu …sirf uss se par tum ….. jab se samne aye bhul ne lagi hu sab kuch "

Dutta can't believes that his naku loves someone else so much … brake all his dream in moment..

Naku walked a distance with her back to him continue "mere pyaar par uss ka hak hai … jane kab se intzaar kar rahi uss ka …woh agar nahi aya na tab bhi meh uss ki hi rahugi hamesha…par kisi our ke bare meh sochna bhi paap hai… woh bhi mujhe chahta hai janti hu meh … meri jindgi par sirf uss ka naam likha huwa hai dutta … dutta our sirf dutta "

Dutta not believes his ears in heart… he got all which he wanted in his life. He stands still after those words.

Naku "USS ki liye mera pyaar saccha hai …koi khot nahi hai …plz mere pass uss ki yaado ke alawa kuch nahi …woh mat le na mujh se warna ye duniya hi chod dungi"

Dutta finally breaks silence" tu nahi jiyegi toh meh jike kya karuga bol.. baat baat par rona adat nahi badli teri… itna pyaar karti hai iss ghadhe dutta se

Par ek baar mud ke bhi nahi uss ke taraf...Isse muh phira ke bethi hai." naku turned to him wipes her tears in confuse look. He smiled open his arms n said "barso pehle mehal adhura reh gaya tha na pura nahi karna ..." and her last meeting with dutta flashed in front of his eyes… she old dutta with opened arms calling her …. Naku smiled wildly said "ab kahi Jane dungi tujh ko "runs toward him

Grabs him tightly this time without any hesitation becoz now she knows that he is one whom she waited for many years .he closed his arms around her like now whole don't matters for him.

They both broke hug happy tears came from naku's eyes .he wipes them. Both place their forehead together and smiled.

Naku asked "jor se lagi kya?"

Dutta "kya?" naku "thappad (slap) our kya"

Dutta "ha woh bahut jor se ab abhi Dard ho raha hai." Naku stared Careing his chick "who mujhe maff kar do .itni jor se nahi marna chahiye tha"

Dutta winked n said "maffi milegi par ek shart par"

"wat" naku asked. Dutta "tujhe phir se dusre gaal par chata marna padega ..Woh kya hai na teri haath ki maar bhi meethi hoti hai"

Naku just blushed and hugged him again.hit him on his chest n said "sach kahu isse hi rehna kabhi mat badlna..tera gussa .bate sab mujhe khushi deti hai"

Dutta tight his griped on her waist n said"ab jaisa bolegi na waisa hi boluga meh bach pan ki tarha"

It was new beginning for that love bird/……

Episodes ends -

Background voice –

Mil gaye jo bichade the

Har pal meh ab ishq

Lamhe bhi tam jaye

Iss khmoshiyan bhi keh ne lage

(this lines for hammie who told me to wrote poems)

Percap-

Ab sad sad bas ho gaya now time for romance

Cute naghty tasha scene

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Posted: 14 years ago
hope u all are happy with it
i am so busy not have much time
but still
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Posted: 14 years ago

gr8 update...didnt expect dutta 2 tell naku he is her dutta so soon bt kinda glad he did...suppose it was the ryt time...btw prakash didnt manage 2 rape her did he? kinda gt confused with the way her clothes wer ripped n she was wounded...was it all via hitting??

awww so we wil gt tasha romance next...cnt w8... they been in pain for so many yrs abt time they lived sum happy moments 2geva b4 der families gt involved 2 separate thm😕
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
no yuvika prakash didn't rape her
its was just by hitting
hope i cleared it
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sana you took so long to update please make the next part soon,so finally our tasha united and now the romance and bad times of nana n family begins waiting eagerly for next one.thanx for pm.please update soon.i part i loved the most when dutta was beating prakash for touching naku and when he promise to himself that he will not let anything happen to her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it finally they both met & u brought the meeting in a very dramatic way loved it dear ,plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
aaahhh am sooo happy
tasha finaly 2gether!!!



tasha romance abh shuru btw loved the slap convo...dat was ubber cute...thnx 4 pmpls cont soon.x

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