keh ke na keh saku tujhe part8 pg23 updt nov 1

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Hi

First thanks for accepting me and my ff '''..

All your good wishes and love inspire me to create one more ''its really different form first one' hope u still support in this also

Love Sana

So about new one yes it is a love story of our Tasha as u say eternal lover '.. DUTTA and NAKUSHA

It's their childhood love story'. both got separated because of their family war '''..

But anyone can't stop them to love each other' their love grows with time and after 10 years they come face to face ''. Both love each other but can't accept the love because of family value '.. But always trust each other blindly, always be supporter ''.. Bin bole ek dusre KO samaz jate hai par duniya ke samne ek dusre KO apna nahi sakte

Therefore name of my ff is going to be

KEH KE NA KEH SAKU TUJHE


Characters'

Patil's

Dutta shreeram patil as bhau*


*a gangster but clean hearted guy... loves naku a lot

Aaisaheb as dutta's mother

Bajirao patil as dutta's best friend

Kalavati shirke as dutta's big sister

Kishor shirke as kala's husband

Nakusha mahale as naku*

*a calm introvert kind of girl''. Loves dutta''

A law student'..

Babi mahale as naku's mom

Veer mahale as naku's elder bother*

*he is a normal guy who goes on regular government job''

Love his mom and sis '. Always protective about them

Vamp and villains

Nana shaheb tawade as dutta's business partner and so called well wisher

Minakshi tawade as Nana shaheb's daughter*

*who always flirt with dutta'.. par usse koi ghas nahi dalta

Digamber tawade as nana shaheb's son*

*before u all kill me for using his name 'I must tell u mujhe koi villain chahiye tha as ye puri family negative hi hai''.. U all know digu se bada koi dushman nahi hamara

Hope u all interest in this one also

part 1 - pg 4

part2 - pg 8

part 3 - pg 12

part 4 - pg 15

part 5 - pg 17

part 6 - pg 19

part 7 - pg 21

part 8 - pg 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
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First let me clear basic concept

10 years ago

Dutta and Naku childhood friend both stay in ratanagiri in these days ''' nana, shree ram aka dada patil, ganpat aka bapu mahale was best friends '' who can do anything for friends

Both Tasha families stay in same house '.. Both families always say that "dutta and naku will get married in future "WHILE Tasha always be together goes to school, take their meal ''

Dutta always be furious while naku was calm'.

Jab bhi ladai hoti thi tab naku use to say sorry it's like unwritten rule

She uses to calm down him '.. Always guide him what to do when he gets in confuse state

Both strongly believes in ganpati bappa (inhe kaise bhool skati hoon inki kripa kise nahi chahiye) both goes to mandir before school

Dada and bapu was hard worker that's why they start work together '''.

Started a cloth (mill) business together which was Going good '' after that nana join them '.but nana doesn't like them at all ... because they both was genuine don't use ill legal ways

So he make plan to rule the business that's why one day he call dada form bapu's mobile and call him to met him in mill in night as there was no one at that time and He tries to convince dada to start for ill legal business but his efforts were vain '' dada told him to stop ill legal business otherwise he will tell police about him'. SO that's why he killed dada'.. Later when family got the news '' nana ne dada patil ki maut ka jimedar ganpat KO theraya'..

So that's why to family got separated'. ye isszam ganpat seh nahi pata our woh bhi chal basta hai ''' iss liye veer and babi hate patil's they think ganpat dies because of them'..babi apne baccho ko lekar Mumbai chali jati hai'..

Badi mehnat se UN dono KO educate karti hai'.. And here patil who le family also moves form ratanagiri '''. Nana takes charge and dutta became a gangster ''' and create patil wadi '' became a king of ill legal business'.

But dutta naku dono ek dusre KO kabhi bhul Na PAYE ''. Par ye woh apne parivar se kabhi keh nahi sakte''. Dushmani ke rishto meh khilti

Chahat ''' kya hoga iss pyaar ka unjam

Next coming soon

Hope u enjoy this one

😃 Love Sana 😃

index

part1 - pg 4

Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start hun ...like the backdrop for the story...

continue soon

and congratz on new ff :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS DI
LUV TO READ SUCH COMMENTS
Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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The prologue feels like we have a blockbuster of an FF. There is hatred between the two families with suspicions against each other, evil Nana conspiring drama nd above all DN love with added spice of seperation😊. So waiting for great DN love story ahead nd hope u update regularly. Thanx Sana!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana141994

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no problem hun...😃

waise wat happened to the other one...i dunno how much i read with that but i havent seen it floating around much

*edit o wait i see it on first page😆
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i update that also
hope u read it
luv sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks brvr
u call it blockbuster
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plz add me to buddy list for regular pm
luv sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start nana ki to band bajani chahiye i really want to kill him

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