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Originally posted by: brvr

Daya didnt realise reaching the milestone, has gone to ur head or what? u pompous lady see there, its not me... everyone's murmuring around😆waitin for the update kabse, dutta ko latkake kaha chaligayi tum...

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem jungle me dutta consoling her coat wala scene
nakku angry on dutta because he stopped her playing in rain but dutta wet form doesn't comfirt you nakku tasha out of jungle
nakku come to know about arjun she think its because of her bad fate thats why she didn't want anyone to come close to her nakku said sachin not to mess with morey dutta want to beat him but nakku stopped him make him remember of his leaving and finally dutta ki tubelight jal gayi love the confession lines but nakku said sorry hope she soon come out this guilt and dutta doesn't misunderstand her do next soon

Originally posted by: brvr

Hi daya,Thanx for the timely update, as u said now i can leave hammie in peace.🤗

So the sprinting queen heads towards the woods n what is it with DN tht at every given opportunity they seem to hit the jungles just like we hop into the malls, hehehe! Some connection indeed with the wilderness😃.

So the two after battling with their emotions now r battling nature. Dutta disappointed with naku's poor self defence even when he had taken pains to get her prepared, all efforts gone in the drain err.. the lake here😉. naku all wet n soggy n the two as per tradition light up some fire to keep themselves warm, hey! i thought the two were so close to each other, me thinking their close moment was sufficient to cause wildfires, hohoho🤣...sorry daya couldnt control, N our sherni as if the bonfire was not sufficient wants to do some raindance, but dutta will have none of it. He is had enuf for the day. Now how far has this lady sprinted that they took so long to get out of it, ha?

So dutta finds out about arjun n sensibly takes naku to the hospital without disclosing the news as he knew it would be devastating for naku. It was heartening to see AS n SP being sympathetic to naku, hmm..raasta saaf ho raha hain naku. Lucky bloke Arjun is recovering but naku is fallin apart n blaming herself for the mess. Naku's insecurities comg to the fore again n blockg all help. God, finally dutta jolted by her reaction blurts out his deep feelings for her n actually proposes indirectly...haaye...kya jagah chuna hai DSP mahashay! but naku in reverse gear backing out, damn! 🤢 yuhi nahi kehte hain ki, "bahoot papad belne padte hain pyar mein" Gosh! how will dutta put sense into this girl?

So daya, do continue as soon as u find in the pink of your health, cant fathom one after another writer falling sick in the forum, is it some new virus or 'writers allergy' 😆 Take care girl!!!

Originally posted by: daya0628

Thank you Rani! for your lovely feedback and making it special with lovely choice of pictures...love the comments...and its always greatly appreciated...so thank you so very much ...and uhmm I guess the good news is I made some progress with the UD ...but bad news I'm not done with it...hopefully it will be something that was worth the wait...hmmm...see you ...take care...

Originally posted by: chithoo

res 😛 once again my bharti ki peeche peeche😳

edited: hey champ🤗 your dazzling star😆 is back in record time😃
Yes ! Definitely back in record time 😆 I was rubbing my eyes...and pinching myself to check if I was seeing things...or in lala land 😆😆

wow what an update❤️ full on tasha special😳

tasha at their most comfortable best😳 because i guess they were "far from the madding crowd" so were letting out each others feelings naturally...and yep u got their interaction perrrfect (Madhuri Dixit style 😳) for the JMM scene😛 much like LTL, until ground reality struck nakku in the end and she developed her withdrawal symptom again Life is not so simple 😆 so there must always be a twist haha ...drama is like that only...you think its all going well and baam! lets take that thought and throw it out the window lol 😛😆

Dutta was perfect in his warmth towards her😳, his seething rage over Morey for what he had done to nakku👍🏼, his care for her while folding the sleeves of his coat to fit her😆, his natural instinct to pull her strand of wet hair and tuck it behind her hair😳 and protecting her from the cold by starting a fire...haa LTL😳 and this time too nakku lit the fire😆😆 then his disapproval of her getting wet in the rain, his concern for her health and wiping her hair dry with her dupatta (champ when she fell into the water😉 i guess she flung her dupatta on the shore🤣 how else can dutta dry her hair with a wet dupatta😕😕 now don't get started on dupatta being light it dried with the speed of the wind when she ran into the jungle... Spark knows yr thoughts only too well😆😆😆)
I know ...bloooper hogaya! 😆😆😆
all good ...went from just dupatta to damp HAAA ...ROFL i should've used ues "its was so windy it dried" line 🤣 just for the heck of it ...

Love the way he reprimanded her for not learning anything from his training😃 ...saab😊 humse poochiye nah 😳 hum nahi bhule😛
yes and just wait soon we will be revisiting that place & training...and she probably won't remember anything then either 😉

oh then the typical D who assumes she would not have secured her dupatta too and the surprise on his face when he notices it is pinned😆😆 nice touches throughout champ👏 the ease with which both were responding to each other was a welcome relief😃 for once they both had no inhibitions, he showed his concern and she allowed him to care of her😳😳. D's naughty side came up when it started raining and she wanted to get wet😉 😆😆😆 Spark doing a Britney😳...my gadha 😛... You're not that innocent😳
exactly he's not all that innocent...naina thag lenge 😉😆

Nakku's feelings of wanting to enjoy the rain were genuine for it would have been impossible for her to have done such a thing ever since her black avtar...champ i love yr reasoning for each feeling 👏 making it sound right rather than filmy😳. he should have allowed her to enjoy the rain anyways she had caught a cold 😆 no wonder madam was mighty annoyed and would not talk much to the amusement of D who had gotten so used to her bashans😆😆😆 but he did manage to reason his decision making nakku blush😆.
seee naughty boy ! what is he thinking 😆😆 or noticing haha

Back in the hospital poor nakku is devastated at arjun being shot and rightly blames herself for the mess and fears for sachin and D's safety. D is in for another shocker when he knows the "missus to be"😳 is also half a doc😆. the conversation between D and N outside the ICU was beautiful⭐️
hmm i keep thinking about when to bring that about...but still have not found the place...

*nakku wanting to fight her own battle bringing out the strong person she actually is within 😛

* realisation dawning on D in a moment towards all that he felt for Nakku 😳

* his clarity of thought and his promise to her to always be there for her...wow beautiful proposal😳

* Nakku's joy welling up as tears in her eyes but then the stark reality hitting her...that of his safety if he got involved with her and her walking away with a "Sorry"😭 leaving both of them shattered simply superb daya⭐️👏 bowing😃
yes she had her reasons...but both in love...but left shattered like u said...

great update and enjoyed every bit of it 😛

i guess u r wondering how spark enjoyed full on tasha 😕 😆😆😆 u forced me to with your writing😳

love u 24x7☺️ take care champ😛
thank you my dazzling star...glad you liked it...and hopefully the next is liked just as much 😳 its still in working progress...and YESSS me was wondering WHAT all this nicey comments about tasha...and ur champ rubs eyes and pinches self aagain 😆 its true omg...i made u comment and enjoy full on tasha 😉😆😳 proud of myself 😛😛
love you 24/7 ...take care sparky! phir milenge chalte chalte