Originally posted by: Hamlet53
Hiya pappy! me again! oye!thank your lucky stars it's me for once,being prompt..I did vouch to myself last night ,that saturday morning,whilst I sip my english breakfast tea,I would be relaxing with your FF..after all baaby ,the fantastic reveiws I 'eve read about it , maine bola yeah film tu dekhne hai parethe gi!..and have to say lardki ,ek dum paisa vasool! so taliyaaan! 👏 you did it once again..kya sixer mara hai! kala bundar kush hoya! you sure know to give the readers what they want😉😉,tashaaahh! okkk..no more prattling...aim and fire!
Yes you did ! and it seems we did a role reversal 😆 you all on time and me all lost time...haaayee!!! wohoo paisa vasool...now what better comment can I ask for really?😆
oww good good ...you enjoyed it ...great! am happy shappy syrupy 😳😆
NTL..eyes that dupe chapter 20:
The opening is a pure piece of LTL1, D&N magic!;the body language,gestures and reactions, complete with the the coat scene.Now that is synonmous with the Elizabethan tradition of the lord spreading his cloak over a puddlefor the lady to step on ,to avoid soiling her flowing gown..such is the enchantment of that scene for me,Daya. Also in some cultures when a man throws his cloak around a woman's shoulders,it's offering her a shield of protection, which Dutta further confirms to her by uttering also the words "mein tera saath hoon" ..so well done,fantastically penned scene.
It ws notice able how you married the jmm scene of LTL1 to your present story line where he admonishes her of being lax in her use of MA tactics of self-defence which he has taught her.
thank you ! i quite enjoyed writing this jmm bit... and yeah i had to mold the UD to fit my plot line to make sense...but it was well liked so me am glad :)
The drying of her hair is endearing and much needed two ways ,firstly to ward of illness and secondly to break ice between them! And yet again the scene when a man covers a woman's head with her veil, its smybolicaly considered a mark of respect from the man's side for her virtue ! so good thinking Daya.. tiny chunks that gave me joy! good use of symbolic acts.
yes yes ! lots of symbolic acts in this and who better than my hammie to pick all those up and throw it up on the surface for everyone 😃 glad you liked all of it...
The fire scene apart from invoking memories ..is a symbol of a warmth brewing up between them. Great use of the elments effects ,heat of fire and the cooling of water ..reminds of her warm love and his distant off-handed coolness ! The rain scene is again symbolic of a washing away, an ablution of the old order in her life ,giving place to the change..of what she really is!
yes ...brilliant...my thoughts did not go so deep but great what you have taken from them...just great!
Ingenious and very interesting Daya how you completely underplay Naku's FR in comparison with LTL1 ..by making a paralell with Arjun's situation in hospital! good one!
yes ! and his getting shot was for another reason really...but also because of this fact...to underplay..what is not important...the FR...
Great scene! Sachin shows Naku Arjun's medical details!Hey! she knows doctree parehe hai us ne! soo now this is new question that can be queried...perhaps answered?
she has a lot on her plate... Morey ,injured brother ,so her breakdown is expected! but she decides koi kuch nehi kare ga !the shaadi has to happen! good good!
yup another point i need to tackle this education of hers...i have thought about it several times yet did not fit in...will see hopefully soon...
The higlight is the outside the elevator scene! her attitude to fight her own battles! but smart way to get him to spill the beans! and viola! he utters the famous lines of Dutta from LTL1 wah !wah! now I need to watch the episode where he says the lines in the serial... errrhhh ..na man...me not doing it! can't do it! why should I drink ...blood!! mine!
yes now she is looking out for others and ready to emotional shatter herself for that if she needs to..and yes me stole LTL wala dialogues ...and yes me also know love these scenes but will not watch them 😛
So! she's sorry..well understandable in the situation...
Listen pappy! thanks for this lovely UD .for me it was special because of the symbols you used! well done enjoyed it ...keep up the good work! with much love xx hammie
thank you for being prompt my friend...and thank you for the LOVELY comment...you know me love to read them :) hmmm see you in pms...love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte
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