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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sana,

Nice ff . Nice charecterisations . I love it . Read all the three parts Intersting . Now to see how mishal and mahi meets . Ambar pe milte hai

song i also like that song picturised on mishal and mahi .

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Waiting for the next update .
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Part 4

Both mahi and mishal reach their respective

Homes '''dev ask mahi about that her mood

As she is in deep thinking

Dadaji's word was made so much effect on her ''..she told whole story to dev how she meet dadaji n his word"you know u are my

Hole family''. kya sach me duniya me koi kisi se itna pyaar kar sakta hai

Ki woh uss ko apni har saas me mehsus kare"

She walk toward balcony form where she can see sea ''..she take sea brize on her face '..

Dev follow her n remember kiya's word about mahi

He put his hand in pocket take that moon bracelet form it gave it to mahi n said "pyaar hai hi ek alag ahsaas jo sab kuch bhulade

Our fikar mat karo u will get ur love jab tumhe pyaar hoga tab toda dil ka ishara hoga thoda god ka''' our tujhe jo pyega na woh duniya me sab se khoob nasibwala hoga

'''.tab tak me hoon na he sang in full filmy

Style mahi started laughing hag him "ye lo ye apne paas rakhna jab confuss ho toh ye tujhe rah dikhyega " he said mahi take bracelet and ware it in her left hand '''..

Dev went for some work in his room

Raheja mansions

Maya came to mishal's room he sat on chair n closed eyes thiking about the the mall girl

Maya called his name and he came back to senses "ha pari maa "He ask

She come close to him and ankle bracelet to

His arm

He look at the bracelet n say "ye kya hai aap janti hai na ki me in chizo me trust nahi karta" "pata hai tu trust nahi karta par mujh par to lakin hai na toh chup chap pehnle isse "she ordered " aap hamesha mujhe blackmail karti ho duniya ke liye sher hu par aap ke samne toh bhigi billi ho jata hoon "He said

"ye teri jindgi me ujala layega tujhe jeena sikhayga mujhe apne bagwan par pura yakin hai" and went out of room controlling her tear '''

He also walk toward balcony take look sea {so coincident na both are standing in balcony looking at sea}

Sun is taking dip in sea both can fill see fell

Wind but they are far away from each other

Ek ke liye jidgi hi pyaar hai toh dusre ki jindgi me pyaar ki jaga nahi hai '''''.."pari

Maa koi bhi ladki meri kissmat nahi ban sakti

Mene apni kissmat barso pehlehi mita di thi"

he says to himself

"pata nahi meri kissmat kis se judi hai par jo bhi me usse apne aap se kabhi dur nahi jane dungi "she to herself

Both get sleept in night with scene of their future in front of their eyes

Vij residence

It is Tuesday mahi is in big hurry as she want to go to sidhivinak {ganpati temple}

"Mahi are u ready "dev ask "aisa kabhi huwa ki me kabhi mandir jane se chuki hoon jo aaj hoga itne salo se toh me magalwar ko waha jati hoon "she said

"Ha ha janta hoon wah a tujhe shanty milti hai

Bhawan tujhe khaas na samjhe iss liye aam logo ki tarha local train se jati ho ''waha ke bachho ko khana khilati ho sab janta hoon"

He said with smile

"toh phir kyu puchte ho ''''.bappa kahi meri train na choot jaye tum bhi na handsome bye bye nashta kar lena '''medicine kha lena "she reply

"ab late nahi ho raha hai kyu"

He ask her

And she ran out of house to catch the train

Raheja mension

Mishal ready with his new presentation it is very important meeting for him

He sat in car driver start the car after some time car suddenly stop and mishal ask driver

He said car is puncture it will take much time mishal get frustrated and look around he saw train '''.he decide something to himself and take laptop ''''rash for train

Finally he caught the train it was to crowdie

Mishal ko in sab chizo ki aadat nahi thi finally

He corner of train which was less crowdie

Mahi is seated in front of him look at irritated face she think poor guy offer him her seat n says "tum yaha betho "

Mishal hate girls girls are cryzy about him he think mahi is same that knid of girl "no thanks "he said angrily

"Betho betho mujhe nahi lagta ki tum jyada der khade rah sako ge"with smile

Mishal think a bit then take the seat and seat beside her

Hope u luv it

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love sana

precap

mishal and mahi spend time with each other

Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am 1st to comment liked it ,update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good update,👏thanks😊

Sidhhivinayaka- please correct😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear Sana thanks for pm. Its a lovely update from u .😍

Mishal and mahi charcters are beautifully portrayed . Mahi believs nuch in love where as mishal don't . So pari tied bracelet to mishal and dev tied to mahi . Let's see how this bracelet works out . 😉

Mishal and mahi are so sweet . Unknowingly at the same time behaving in same manner and doing same things . Really they made for each other .❤️
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Dev is so sweet to naku loved dev - naku relation . Mishal and mahi in local train and mahi given him seat and her saying that he can't stand for so long time mmm so understanding mahi .😉

Mishal thinking that she is like all other girls drool over him no mishal she is the special girl which makes u drool over her ,. She does n't drool over u understand . 😊

Its so lovely update sana and interesting to see how love developes between this lovely couple Mishal and mahi.😍

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lovely update thanks for pm .waiting for next update please do it soon.😊
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lovely update dear
so both together in train
precap is really good
waiting for next
thanks for pm

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part 5

so here we go

mishal take her seat and open his laptop start work …..mahi see him with confuss face

and say "toh local me pahli bar aye hoo shayad iss liye toh itne karaab mood me hoo" but he don't even look at her ……….

mahi get irritated n says " hey man gugge ho kya mene tumahari madat kar kar galti ki"

he look at her with deadly eyes n says "meh tumahre pas khud nahi aya tha tum ne meri madat ki thi our ab ehaan jata rahi ho ……..

all girl are same "

"wah ulta chor kotwal ko daate "she replied

Suddenly chaiwala who was passing beside mishal slips and sab chai uss par our laptop par gir gayi

He woke up and saw his suit which was literally looking like he swim in tea

He pick up collar of chai wala and said angrily

"how dare u do this? u know how much this suit cost ? itne paise kamane me tumhe puri jindgi lag jayegi "

Just then mahi cam between them and say "chodo usse uss par gussa nikal ne se kuch nahi hoga iss se accha toh tumhe problem ko solve karne ki koshish karni chahiye "

He leave the guy and look at damage have done even his laptop stop working made him more irritated ……………………..

Mahi think a bit and she an idea (she is kind girl jo har kisi ki madat karne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai) "woh mere pass kuch solution hai iss problem ke liye "she said with small smile

"chup just leave me alone jab se me tumse mila hoon our ye sab "he said

Mahi also got angry now "jo karna hai karo me ab meh toh sirf …………….. jane do tum se baat kar ke koi fayda nahi"she said and she went toward the ladies who was in next row

Mishal try to cover whole thing par woh kya kare usse kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha

Then he have no option to take help form that girl

He try to be normal to her went toward her

And say "look I am sorry "

She get a shock after hearing those word from him "wait wait wait what did u say ……..

Mere toh bhag hi kul gaye ye words sunn kar " she said in playful voice

He become more more angry but he control himself and said "now can u help me"

"For sure" she said with big smile ……………

Train stop and she look through the window

Remembered tht she have to go to ganpati temple and says "I have to go "

"What about me" he immediately reply

"I have to go tum bhi meri sath chalo "she requested

"But where " he ask

"Areee baba khabroho mat meh tumhare sath kuch aisa waisa nahi karugi ………

Waha hum tumhara huliya bhi thik karenge

Ab chalo" she take his hand get out of train and finally they are out station mishal take his hand out of her n says "kaha le ja rahi ho mujhe I have meeting at afternoon our ye mera haal .what can I do?????????????"

Mahi look at him lovingly and says "I know u are disturb but u know it is life ………..our iss meh toh problem aati hai par solution ke sath

Hame toh sirf usse dhudna padta hai …. Meh

Hoon na tumhari madat ke liye .me tumhara

Sath nahi chodugi ………..just trust me "

Mishal can feel the intensity of those word and first time his heart trust someone

Nodded his head and mahi called name "ali bhai " mishal look in that direction he see a

40-45 year old black but well build man

Who started walking toward them and smile at mahi and say "salam valegum beta aaj der hogyi kab se tumhari rah dekh raha hoon "

Look at mishal who was standing next to him and ask "our aap hai kon hai janab "

Mahi says "ye mera dost hai musibat me hai iss liye mere sath aya hai "

Mishal look at her in shock how easily she called him FRIEND

"Thik hai beta"he smile to mishal

Both get in ali bhai ki taxi mahi don't tell ali bhai anything and ali take taxi to a root

Mishal get confuss and said mahi tht "tell him na where we want to go "

Mahi smile at mishal's question

On this topic Ali said "usse bata ne ki koi jarurat nahi meh janta hoon ki usse kaha jana

Hai…..jab woh choti thi na tab se usske papa sath yaha ati hai…. she just my beti…… woh mere liye khaas hai ……har manglewar ko meh usska intzaar yaha inzaar karta hoon "

Mishal found it weird that someone share such close bond without any relation

Taxi stop In front of sdhivinayak teple

Mishal was in shock that why she got him here "yaha kyu aye hai hum "

"bahut sawal puchate ho tum I came here every Tuesday par I kept promiss

I will help u par pehle meri puja "

She enter in temple but mishal stood there

Ali put hand on his shoulder "woh wada pura karegi aap chinta mat karna bhahut acchi bacchi hai ………chalo"

"Meh in sab meh viswas nahi karta "mishal said

"waise toh meh muslim hoon par jane kitne saalo se yaha ata hoon ……bhagwan toh dil meh baste hai ….shayad tumhe kisi ne bite huye kal meh dukh diye honge …..

Par ek yaad rakh na jab wo dard deta hai na

Toh dawa bhi wahi dega ………."

Mishal ko pata bhi nahi chala ki ali baat sunte sunte wo mandir meh agya ………….

Ali continues "wo tumhare aas paas hi hoga …..

Tumhe ishara dega par hum usse dekh nahi pate ……..jise ye bhagwan milla wo duniya me khush nasib hai ………."

They stop in front of murti (statue ) ganpati bappa

Ali close his eyes and mishal went ahead

He close his eyes and think meh in sab nahi manta

He open his eyes in second and he saw mahi coming towards him suddenly the world stop ((just imagine yash raj movie so filmy na ))))

Hawa chalne lagi ……..mahi's hairs and duppta start flowing with it ………..she look so good in that white dress .first time he notice mahi in this way ….how beautifulhe look …just breathtaking ……with no makeup …not anything artificial she is like just pure nature

…..he stared at her .just then she stop in fornt of him ..put hand on his shoulder

N say "kaha kho gaye " just then he came back to sences n said "kuch nahi meh toh tumhara inzaar kar raha tha hogiyi puja now it's time to solve my problem "he said in large voice to cover his uneasiness

He turn start walking out of temple ……mahi get cofuss and say to herself that ye mujhe pagal kar dega ……..and follow him

Mishal stop n ask mahi that what in their way

Mahi take him to choti gali and two three turn "yaha thik hoga mera huliya "he ask

"chalo batati hoon" she said

Then after that they saw a big entrance

Place name is 'happy homes '

They get in through the entrance and mahi have big smile on lips

Mishal saw place like he was scaning the place

There was old mens and ladies ….playing like kid

Some are plying chess,criket,while ladies are doing gardening ,cooking, singing ,dancing

………the is full of joy and happiness …….as it name happy ………….

Mishal also smile looking at those elders who are living their life in such way

"accha laga"mahi ask him

"It is beautiful"he says

"Par hum kaha hai"

Mahi told him that it she orphanage for elder whose kids don't want them or for them who don't have family……..

"mujhe yaha sukoon milta hai …………jab bhi meh yaha ati hoon na inhe pyaar deti hoon our dhersara pyaar leti bhi hoon "n she smile

"its nice but what about me "he ask again

"ab dekhna pal meh hi tum bander se phir se insaan ban jaoge "n she giggled

She take him to a old man who was do something on cloth……

And said so "how is my star"

Man turn to her both hug and then said "kaisi ho meri bacchi "

"Aap ka pyaar hai toh bus khush hoon…………mujhe aapse ek madat chahiye thi

Ek jaanver ko insaan banana tha "she said

And turn aside then the man sees mishal

Mishal ask confusing voice "ye meri madat kaise karenge "

"Arrre ye apne jamane ke best dress artist ……….inki collection dekhoge na toh bas" she said

"Bas karo ab tariff .chalo bete" man take mishal to a door he open a door mishal

Take look at the room …….

It is full of designer cloth just like branded show room

"Jo chiye who lelo" he said to mishal lovingly

Mishal get in room chose one outfit form it change ….. and came out of room

Mahi and dadaji is doing regular gap shap

Then mahi saw mishal who was looking so

Handsome in that outfit ……"ab ban gaye na games bond kyu"and she pass smile to him

"thanks"he said to dadaji

"it's ok beta meri collection toh asehi padi thi

Kisi ke toh kam ayi "he said

"lelo dadu waise bhi ye assani se thanks nahi bolte"and she ran out of there mishal follow

him………………

mishal try to catch her but she run fast …..mahi chhaut par jati hai……. mishal also follow her

mishal catch her hand but she push him

mishal drop his laptop and his face turn red

due to anger

when open the bag and "ab toh kabhi shuru nahi hoga "look at mahi

but when he try to start it……. It starts immediately

mishal look mahi as she is jaduger jo laptop itni der start nahi ho raha tha woh ab thik hogya woh bhi girnese

mahi start laughing and said "mante ho na ki meh lucky hoon panvati nahi"

"haan meri maa" he said

Mahi take blessing form elder and get return to road with mishal

"u know woh bujurg bhut khush the ye dekhkar accha laga "he said

" unka dard bhulakar phir ek baar jindgi jineki koshish kar rahe the ………..unka sharir kamjor hai par ……..man nahi yahi sacchi takad hai"she said

"Haan sach kaha"he reply and all the his child memory come in front of his eyes

"kaha kho jate hoo mere angry young man …….

Itni badi problem kya hai tumhari bata bhi do ,…..

Kher chodo tum bataoge nahi…….mujhe bahut bhuk lagi hai "she said

"kya" he ask in shock

"kya kya normal inssan hoon subhe nashta nahi kiya toh bas bhuk lagi hai …..iss meh ne kya galt keh diya" mahi says

"Thik hai ………yaha kahi restaurant hai "he ask

"itni der nahi rukh sakti abhi kuch khana hai"

She saw wada pav n say " wada pav chalo khate hai"

"what disgusting meh road ka khana nahi kahuga ………pav wada mehne kabhi nahi khaya "he says

"wah itni madat ki our mere liye wada pav nahi kha sakte ….ehsaanfaramoshhh

Ek baar khao phir iss ki taste samaj ayegi ….

Phir mujhe thank you bologe "she take to stall

N say to shopkeeper that "dada pav wada

Dena two plate "

"par meri baat toh suno "mishal try to stop her

((((((((((Mahi toh mahi hai na ek baar jo usne commitment

Kardi toh phir who apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti))))))))))

Finally the wada pav came

Mahi take a plate and offer to mishal

"But where is the spoon" mishal ask

"pagal ho gaye ho kya spoon se kha kar meh tumhe wada pav ……. Ka apman nahi karne dougi"

And before mishal could react he take wada pav and put it in mishal's mouth

Says "accha hai na"

Mishal try to say something but his mouth block with wada pav and then mahi says "khata huye bolna nahi chahiye "

Mishal eat it to open his mouth "and say

"pata hai tumhe tum original piece ho issa dusara bana hi nahi"

"na hi kabhi banega "cut his sentence

She gave paise to dada and say shukariya

"ab kahi chain pada varna toh meh bhook ke mare gir hi padti "

Mishal says "accha huwa tum giri nahi varna .meh tumhe kaise sambhalta "

"mere sath rah kar bahut huch sikha gaye ho " she teased

" time sab kuch sikha deta hai …….koi pehale se toh accha ya bura nahi hota na .duniya asse aisa banati hai ……our phir khud hi usse

Bhura bolti hai .iss liye dar lagata mujhse logo se jindgi se .khushi mera sath bararsoh pahehlehi choot gaya .ab sirf dard hi mera sathi hai our koi nahi mera hath tham kar kahe ki …….. mujh ko samje .dil mera dil toh shayad dhadakta bhi nahi "and tears came out of his eyes

Mahi can understand the pain in his voice as

She suffer such pain at her young age

He take his hand in her and says "meh janti hoon kuch bahut bura huwa hai tumhare sath par iss ka matlab ye nahi ki tum jina hi band kar do jara khud dukh bhulakar dukh dekho toh pawoge ki ye duniya khush rahe bahot choti hai hume sirf khush rehna chiye taki marte huye ye afsos na ho ki ye jindgi humne boj ki tarha jee"

Mishal mesmerize by her innocence and apporch toward life

Just mahi's phone rang it was who telling her

To get back home immediately

Mishal also notice that it is time for his meeting

Mahi cut phone and both says "I have to go"

Then " sorry" together says again

Mahi n mishal both smile ((((imagine mishal smile after all Mahi ka magic chal gaya wah maja aya …………. kyu hai na))))))))))))

"u know it suprising hum itne time se sath hai par ek dusre ka naam nahi jante" mahi

Mishal " kya fark padta hai vehse bhi hum kaha phir kaha milege"

Mahi with confidence " life bahut choti hai …..kise pata kab kya ho …. Shayad hum phir mile par tum ho mere liye bahut bade 'idiot'

I think name also suits u well"

"And u are always 'panvati' for me"mishal in anger

"dekho naam bhi mil gaya ek dusere ka .bye hope I don't see u again …………………. "mahi in anger

Dil se mishal ko lag raha thi ye lamha yahi tham jaye par aisa ho nahi sakta

"same here " he reply

Both turn but then suddenly there lucky take u trun and bracelet ankled in each other

They stop look what happen

Shayad ye kissmat ka isshara tha

Hope u like it

Its was too long but I have to complte it in one part

Becoz now I am working for super romantic

Week

Luv sana

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