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Posted: 14 years ago
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So dosto after all topic .i think story meh kuch jayda sweetness ho gayi …..thats why I am introducing two new characters to add spice in story …….. Meet new characters

Prachi kapoor -a model which meet mishal in party and tab se she has only one aim .to be with him as it will give her fame, money, and future ……..she always try to get mishal but he avoids her …… she gona create lots of trouble for mahi ……..

Vinay shekhawat –a nice hearted guy .he have a son name Mihir ……..lot his wife and stays with his son only…..he is CEO of make them smile foundation ………. Who gona be like………. well sab bata diya toh ff kon padega ….

Hope u like it

Luv sana

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
look guys i have next 10 update
ready
so i going to post it every day
pls read it
and i add me buddy list to pm the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
love it par yaar ye sweetness khatm mat kar dena and waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for update,you didn't send me PM please don't forget it next time,ok since it was full of sweetness i loved it please continue with it ,thanks again.so you will post update daily that will be a treat,thanks for your effort.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 9

Hi guys

I am back

Recap-

Mahi-ye mat sochna ki '..i will, change u are still an idiot

Mishal 'u are still panvati

Both laugh

So can we go on

Mishal 'one thing what do u mean .tum replacement ho'..

Mahi- I don't have any interest in business ''ye sab toh dev dekhta hai'.woh bimmar tha iss liye meh ayi '''..warna meh our business kabhi sath ho nahi sakte '.mujhe music career karna hai''''so ab mera kam finish

Mishal really become upset by all this but don't understand why

Mishal ' so it means''. u are not doing project with me '..(in sad voice )

Mahi 'kya (in confuse voice)

Raj enter in hall ''.and get news that mishal got the project ''' he was talking to everyone like '.mishal got project just becoz him'''then he saw mishal talking with girl ''''..then look at mahi '''''and scan her form toes to head ..lick his lips in disgusting manner '(sab kuch batna padega kya)

He walk to mishal .hug him and says

Raj- bhai mujhe pata tha ..aap hi project jitege '. Akhir project hamne jo banaya tha ''

Mishal did not understand ''why he was behaving in good manner

Raj broke the hug

Mahi look at him with surprised look

Raj ' bhai '.who is this beautiful ''..mera introduction nahi karwaoge ''well meh hi kar deta hoon 'hi I am raj '.mishal ka brother and

u''. offer his hand for handshake

mahi 'I am mahi '.form vij industry .now official partner mishal group industry '..

and also greet him ''but she don't like his touch '.she knows that something is fishy about it '..Immediately take her hand back

raj ' oh I am also have interest in our business''.

Mahi is feeling uneasy after his words n decides to get out of there ''

Mahi ' I will just come 'excuse me

Mahi went away from there 'raj stars her form backside n says in creepy voice "looks like I have to attend office everyday "

Mishal also notice mahi's uneasiness with raj'''.understand what was going in raj's mind

Mishal ' raj just stay away from her .she is not like ur type of girl ''''agar tune uss ko hurt karne ki koshish bhi ki na toh ''''..

Raj ' oh toh mere bhai ko gussa aya '''.and tum kuch nahi kar paoge''''she gona worm in my bed''''..

Mishal got so angry but control it as he knows that it is not right place'''..

And he went from there

Raj (to himself)-ab maja ayega '..lagta hai mishal is fall for girl '''.jab meh usse mahi ko cheen lunga '.. mishal raheja ab raj se harega '''and evil laugh

Mahi was in parking waiting for car ''. Suddenly a car stops in fornt her '.car window open n it was mishal in car ''..

He smiled and say (kitna badl gaya na hyyy ye pyaar our kya karwayega)

Mishal 'come get in car I will drop u

Mahi- no thanks...I was waiting for driver n car

Mishal really wish '''''.that god plz give just some more time with her '''bus itna bolne ki der thi '..mahi got call form driver that his son was not well and he have to be there '''.as we all know mahi is kind person so she gave a permission to him also suggest him to take car with him ''.

After hearing all this mishal was on cloud nine

Mahi-are u sure that u are not jadugar ?

Mishal 'well kind of, but not like u come sit ''..i am sure it will raining

Mahi sat in car with mishal .and he start the car

''. Mahi looking for something in car as she want to pass the time ''.while mishal was busy in driving and bich bich meh staring at her ''''..mahi cannot take this slilent any more

Mahi-mujhse itni chuupi sahi nahi jati ''.let's play the music na

Mishal 'look I am always like this ''and I don't like music much iss liye car meh stereo hai par not music cds

Mahi- what I kind person u are '''music accha nahi lagata . chalo chodo most nice part meh hu na tumhari our music ki dosti karwane ke liye

Mishal hit by the word dosti after past life incident '..all his feeling are completely shattered

Mishal ' dosti karwana chati ho tum uss insaan ki jo kabhi khud se bhi dosti nahi kar paya 'jisne kabhi koi rishta nahi nibhaya

Mahi feeling tears in his voice '''she now decide to know what was his story and she ask about >>

Mishal na karte karte hua '..apni jindgi ki puri kitaab usske samne khol di'''now he was felling like free form lots of loads of sadness '''''

Mahi- (also having tears in her eyes she clears it '''and promises herself that she get him from all this '.she knows that there is original mishal 'in this fake mishal ''.which was made by him ''.to show world that he was strong n not care about anything ''par ab bhi he was like kid )

Mahi- koi baat nahi meh hoon na ''''.. meh banuge tumhari dost '''' log kehte hai meh bahut acchi dost hoon

Mishal just gave her a faint smile n say (to light the mood)

Mishal ' waise risk toh hai '.. par mujhe bhi khatero se khel na Bahut acche se ata hai

Mahi- u fool'' u think I am danger ha so ab meh dikhati hoon .what I am up to

And hit him hard on shoulder

Mishal-ahhh''u are strong

Mahi 'ab samje na mujhse panga lene ki sochna bhi mat '''..

Mahi first time feel how much she become close to mishal. And feel secure with him '..its like warm feeling of friendship(par usse kya pata tha its turning with a most beautiful luv story )

Rain already started with never before mahi enjoying it...watching through window

Mishal ask in curiosity 'tumahare toh bahut friend hoge na '''I mean ur such a person

Everyone want to friend with u

Mahi-I am a normal girl .luv to make friendds''. Dosti toh pal meh hi ho jati hai .u cannot plan it.dil se dekhona toh har kisi se dosti kar sakte ho

Mishal ' yani ,jab chaho tab dost ban sakte hai <par life meh ek sabse buri chiz hai dhokha.how can I trust person in single meeting

Mahi-mishal u are taking it in wrong way. I think ye zaruri toh nahi na ki .hum kisi insaan se hi dosti kare ''.chahe kuch bhi ho jaye par kuch dost hote hai jo sath nahi chodte'..agar hum chahe bhi na tab bhi nahi unse dur nahi ja sakte

Mishal 'ye true friendship sirf story book meh hi acchi lagti hai..tum bahut innocent ho par duniya?

Mahi ' u don't trust me na come I will show the another side life jaha selfishness n sandness

Profit ya loss ki koi jaga nahi ''..jaha har koi sirf khushiya dena janta hai ''

Mahi tell him to stop the car mishal did not understand why as it was still raining heavily ''

But he has stop the car

Mahi get out of car .just stand in rain with close eyes, mishal follow her personally he hate rain but at was night ''mahi ko iss waqt par akele jane dena it's not nice idea.

Mishal try cover himself but it was vain .he was already wet completely in rain

Mishal- what are u doing mahi'..cant u understand it is raining so hard

Mahi- u are not understand it's raining .can't u feeling water drops, this wind, the thunder '.in sab meh music hai ,,,,,,,, just listen it

Mishal ' mujhe koi music sunai nahi de raha hai

Mahi just smiled walk to him take his hand place it on his chest

Mahi ' just stop thinking for one minute''..try feel it in ur heart

Her word made magic on him .he kept his entire words aside .just try to live his whole life in a moment. He closed the eyes

Mahi ask him 'now tell me mishal ?kya tumhe in sab meh bhi tumhe koi khot koi dhokha dikhta hai ?

Mishal- nahi and he opened the eyes

Mahi was playing in rains .after this he admires her beauty'''I mean she looks florescent'''in her simplicity

Mahi called his name '''..he walk up to her

He was just standing while she was dancing freely not care about anything

And the music in background (its song form kabhi alvida na kehana )

jaaniye heeriye
jaaniye heeriye

he was thinking about their first meeting .how she solve his problem as don't even know each other but still she was not ajnabi for him''''..
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

he follows her as she was just in her world '.she saw street kids playing aakh micholi''..she ask them to play with her''..they agreed and blindfold her '''.she start playing while mishal is just staring at her'''she ran to catch one of kid '''but just then she stroke him hard '''..
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata

he was not expecting this'''yet he was happy she was so close to him '''..he was about touch her face ''..she open her blind fold ''look at him smile at him n says "sorry"

he trying to say something but she turn walked to kids '''
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

he stand froze their ''.just smile at his craziness'.moves his hand through his hairs'' open his arms and look at sky



she says "bye" to kids'''..yet she was played in rain for lots of time'''par mann nahi bhara tha ''..there was still mischief in her eyes''''she saw bhutta stall nearby place ''' she brought two bhutts form stall '.. mishal was feeling too cold ''..usski nazar mahi par se pal bharke liye hati .and when he look up mahi was not there '..he immediately all his calmness ''.he was feeling like he lost most his precious thing in life ''.but mahi tap him on shoulder n says "thand lag rahi hai " mishal was happy she there in front him '''.tears in easy was hide by rain drops and she take back his hand form back offer him bhutta.
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
tu sochta hain tu puchata hain
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain

he watched her eating bhutta like kid'.he feels like he found something special '''.

They both started walking towards car while eating bhutta ''there was something on her chick '.he take his hand forward about to touch her chick suddenly he came to senses '.point her that there was something on her lips ''and pass her napkin '..stared at her while she was removing it '''after that she smiled at her ''.he retained back the smile
haa yeh wohi hain - 2
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata

She was slightly ahead form him '..he place his around her like they are hugging form side '..but without touching it was just in air (shayad yahi uski dil halat thi) ''..
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

A older couple who was walking on road sees him like this smiled at his innocence ''..
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
mitwa...

Both walking towards car '''.mishal smiled at himself after remembering how the girl change him in just two meetings''.now he his life was completely change

Scene shift to rohini residence

Raj enters in house '''.greet his mother n above to go in his room''..rohini recalled his name while filling wine glasses in her hand

Rohini-after three days raj' u has come to home''.. It's such careless behavior

Raj- don't start this again'.I am in great mood

Rohini- our waise tumhara mood accha hone ki waja '''''tumhe business meh toh interest nahi ''.agar maine pehle mishal ko raste se nahi hataya hota toh hum raste par bhik mang rahe hote''

Raj-stop it mom .i am sick of this comparisons mishal aisa hai .waisa hai

But now its time when I finish him .uss ki

Kamjori jo mil gayi hai

Rohini-raj just tell me whole thing 'gusse meh bewcoofi mat kar bethna '''tab shayad meh tumhe bacha na saku

Raj-mom calm down '.

Mishal is fall for girl

Raj told her all about mahi and mishal''.rohini was in shock becoz she never expect mishal will fall for girl

Rohini- raj it's not nice thing for us. agar

Mishal our uss ladki ke bich kuch hai'..toh hume iss ko rokna pedga ''.mishal akela rehna chahiye humesha taki .hum puri property par kabza kar sake

Raj ' aisa hi hoga mom ye jimedari meri .

Ahhh nahi ye khubsurat jimehdari meri'..i will take care of her''the game begins Mr.mishal raheja

And both laugh while taking sip of wine

Scene move to kiya's place

She broke her meditation and woke up'

As she know all this '.she says to herself

"pyaar karne walo ko kitna bhi dur karna chahe nahi kar sakegi ye duniya

Pyaar toh bhagwan ka vardan hai jise mila woh duniya meh khusnasieb

Inn tono ko bhi sitaro ne chuna hai apne khel

Dekhane ke liye

Ab dekhna hai mishal n mahi ye sufer kaise paar karte hai "

Smile to herself

Accha tha na

Plz batana

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Precap*

Prachi ki entry and aate hi mahi se fight

Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
ok i have caught up lol

am liking tasha relationship and omg he is so falling hard for her lol

and eeek i font like raj .,...plz make all his plan flop lol

and as for new entries to spice things up ...well keep it minimal spicing ...i want full on tasha :P

i am enjoying this FF...so continue soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good one.please do take care of yourself.and this time don't let us wait for long.ypdate soon and get well soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
hey sana
faboulous updates but no pm
love both updates so now tasha are business partners and mishal loves her
raj poor guy has to pay a lot if he try to do something with mahhi
love it dear
waiting for next

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
luv u all so much
always inspire me
keep ur faith on me

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