FFPART9 KYA SACH much hai tu iss duniya meh 8/07

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😉Hi friends😉

I am not new on forum but quite shy hardly comment on topic but regularly read post

I know tht current track is horrible mishal is dream and dighu disaster

So I going take a small step to make u smile

I am going to stick with original name mishal n Mahi as the character name

As u know nakusha went with dutta '''the girl remain is saheba

Never mind

The characters

Mishal is 26 year old strong, handsome, intelligent, dashing, magnetic personality with big ego and have lots of popularity

Little arrogant .he really hate smile, love , beauty and hardly talk to people

He leave in his own world don't care abt any one

His father was a last person who care abt mishal'''..

Mahi is 23 year old girl

With dreamy eyes ''her parents die in her young age

She is rich never think abt money ''''. Want to make her identity

Live with her care taker dev who is only family member for her

She is beautiful ,bubbly ,sweet ,innocent, kind

Love to make everyone happy

She love music a lot '''..take guitar with herself where ever she goes

Rohini is mishal's step mother when Mahesh raheja lost his wife ''.

She was working in his office ''she make place in Mahesh's heart n convenes

Him for marriage earlier she used to take care of mishal but when she got her own

Son''. She started hating mishal when Mahesh pass away''' she through mishal out of house. But mishal's aunty support him give back right as half of total property

Raj is mishal's step brother hate'''' him a lot becoz mishal is successful

In business quite popular in girls

He want what mishal gets

He treats girls like cloth use n through them basically

He is bad boy

He works in same office with him

Dev is mahi's care taker he treat her like his own child ''''never make her

Sad in fact he didn't marry anyone just to look after her''''he take care of mahi's parents business which is cruise business

It is very successful also''''..

Maya is Mahesh's cousin she always care for mishal form his young age and give him right form his father's property .she gets divorce from her husband not have own children

Mishal also love her like his mother live with her'''''''..

Madam kiya is also in prominent role she is future teller

Make the way for love in lead characters

U know sab kuch hamare hatho me nahi hota

She clear her role with story

Hope u like characters

I will use simple hindi and English

I going show true love like radha n lord Krishna in Hindu mythology

And add some passion form Romeo n Juliet

Name of topic is going to be👏

Kya sach much hai tu iss duniya me

😳Luv sana😳😳😳

Plz reply

😃ur comment are valuable for me😃😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ive just commented on your other post
which is the same..double post??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome dearto our forum
nice one
me waiting
for update
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part 1

it around 8 o'clock sea wing app. 6 floar falt no 21 juhu mumbai'.alarm rang girl take back his head form silk duvet place hand on on clock with out looking at him get up form with cute smile on lips '. It was mahi n she went strate

to photo of her mom dad n say "good morning maa paa " just then she saw refection of person '.turn at that side see

abt 40 year man with large smile ..there is

tray of Coffee in it he place it on table and open his arms completely she runs toward

hug him n both smile broke hug ''.

he says "hey beautiful good morning u woke up right time as always "

she smile n says "what say handsome hu na me perfect pricess you also right time

what make to u knew that I am awake to give coffee me " "my bachcha " he says n kiss her forehead "u know when u are only 10 when ur parents die and I got ur responsibility u know

first time when hug I can fell ur heart beat clearly it was so pure like flowing water

when u see me with those innocent u are my world form that day as I give promiss to that

nothing is important in my life except u ''

I kept my promiss till now and I don't broke it till my last breath " he said with deep voice

She remove tears n says " don't dare to talk abt death ur not going anywhere""ok baba"

He take her hand take her to coffee

Give a mug to her she take sip reminds something "got to go" n rush to the bathroom

"Pagli" he says to himself n shout "I waiting for u on dining table ""ok" she says while taking shower he went from there''..

After some time she come from bath room

She warp towel around her n take her feet towards

Wardrobe she closed her eyes just open door of wardrobe n run finger on cloths stop her finger on a pair of cloth ''open her eyes

Smile look at the cloth smile goes to ware

That cloth'''' she is not person who want to look fashionable she create her own style statement ''.besides she have too many pair of cloths as dev buy almost a shop for her it difficult to choose what to ware

It's simple method to choose ''she apply least make just kajal , transparent lip gloss..

Perfume that all for her

Take her cell phone

Run towards kitchen where dev is waiting for her "sorry sorry " she says in hurry 'her feet slip on floor her cell fell down n breake in pieces dev ran toward her n says " are u ok

Chot nahi lagi doctor ko phone karu kya kuch to bol dard ho raha hai kya "he get too worried. She said "I am fine but phone" take some of the pieses form floor and" it was my favourate"he take a deep breath after hearing that she was ok. Look at her eyes

She was sad by cell phone incident he help to her to get up form floorn n says " u know cant see u sad don't worry abt phone .i can buy whole shop for u " n smile "go get ready we are going to shoping" she got big smile on her face and get ready quickly

Both came down and get seated in there black SUV '''both look at each other

Mahi don't have any idea her life going change forever

Next part tomorrow

Hope like this part

Plz comment

Precap

Dev meets madam kiya in mall ask her abt mahi's future

here is next part

part 3
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part 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1698414/ffpart9-kya-sach-much-hai-tu-iss-duniya-meh-8-07?pn=3

part 5
part 6
part 7
Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ah very nice start dear👏
love it😛
so part 1 is of mahhi's intro...like that dev take care of her and love her very much .
precap is very intersesting 😉
waiting for next update

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks dear
nice to here good comment
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rely gud strt sana
wud love 2 read more
do continue soon
pls add me to ur pm list.x
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Part 2

8 o'clock Same day morning raheja residence marine lines Mumbai

A big bedroom a guy lied flat on his stomach

Wearing same cloth of yesterday night with shoes '..his head is heavy with last night hangover a lady enter in that room wearing

Silk saree having simple necklace and long hairs

She smile went toward window and open curtains first ray of sun come on his face and

He open his eyes look toward her n "good morning pari maa" she turn says "so how is my boy"he get up n says "just a heavy head"run his finger through the hair "so you finalized the business deal n take over one more company itna bhi naa mat bhul jao khud ko business me ki wapas mud kar dekh na sako "

she said in worried voice

"mera business hi meri life hai woh' to aap hai iss liye kah sakta hoo ki mera koi apna hai warna to me sab kuch kho chuka hoon '. aap hi to thi jisne chote mishal ka haat padkar usse rah dikhayi 'Iss liye to apko pari maa bulata hoon

Aap ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon" he replied while taking sip of coffee

"stop fluttering me" she said "tumhe yad hai na aaj tumhe mujhe leke mall jana hai"

He rub his head pick up cell phone called some one n says "aaj ki sabhi meeting post pond kar do "immediately cut phone

"I going to take bath phir chanlege "she nod the head and walk out of room .after some time he came out of bath room

He look so hot with those six pack 'there is still water drop on his face he look so handsome 😳😳😳😳😳😳

That why every girl want him but he hate girl

Becoz Rohini maa bankar ne uss ki jindgi me tuphan laa chuki thi jisse woh ab tak bahar nahi nikal paya

He choose a nice black suit form his wardrobe place Rolex on his hand'' apply deo and he went toward the hall

Where maya is waiting for him "chale "

He said and they both went toward car ''.

He ask him driver for key and told him that he is going drive his own ''.

Both get seated and the car started

Finally they reach to mall parking maya got out of car. She lied to mishal that she came here for buy a gift for her friend but reason is she came to visit madam kiya who is great

Future tellar in city .she is realy worried abt mishal want ask kiya abt his future

She rush toward the madam kiya office she know that kiya was big moody person usse milne ka mauka bahut kam logo ko milta if got late by one minute kiya never meet maya again

She finally reach there on time she take a breath saw surrounding it was quite weird place having dark blue curtain , candles in many places in centre there was a table and crystal ball ,cards''''''..

"There some kind of peace in this place "she says to herself "sahi kaha tumne yaha iss mall me kissne socha hoga asi bhi place hogi" maya get shock by this sweet but cold voice

She turn and saw a lady dress in black n blue outfit (imagine sonam kapoor form sawaria lol) free hair "come seat" lady said to maya

Both get seated in front of each other "so what the problem "kiya asked to maya she started story of mishal n says "I will take care of him till I am alive but who will take his care after me he become lonely I know he will survive not alone Mar jayega woh "she started crying "he hate girl, happiness, smile in fact his life also

I want see him settle in life "

Madam kiya smile n says "don't worry ye sitaare kabhi kisi ke liye akelapan nahi likhte

Har ek insaan ko usska jivansathi milta hai hum chahe ya na chahe kismat kabhi nahi badlegi "she closed her eyes concentrate on

Something and after some time she open eyes ask maya about mishal's photograph maya give the photo ''..kiya stair at the photo and then smile n says "miracle don't worry kal sun our moon ek honge ''''''.

Nafrat ko mohabat ka sath milega tumhe kahi

Dhudneki jarurat nahi usse kal apni life milegi

Jine ka maksat milega"happy tear come form

Maya's eyes "thank you" she replied "ye sab me nahi sitaare karenge sab accha hoga ye lo isse usske ke hatho me pehnana and give gold bracelet there is sun pendant ankle in it" ab tum jao sab sitaaro ka khel hai" maya take the bracelet again says "thanks you"

Kiya smile''' maya get out of the office

Went for shopping as she told mishal that she came here to take gift for her friend

Madam kiya take her bag lock the office

Seen shifted to Mahi and dev

They are in moblile shop Mahi asking for same mobile which have before finally she got the same one she was happy dev was happy also to see her happy then he told the shop owner

That pack all the same kind of cell phone which he have in shop...Mahi ask him that why he said owner to pack all such phone .he smile n says "ager phir phone ko kuch ho gaya to me tujhe phir sad nahi dekh sakta that why I order all the phone "both started laughing

Mahi tell dev that she want shop some more thing dev says "jo hokum mere aka"

But at time his phone rang'. He pick the phone but voice is not coming clearly so that's why he gave mahi all the credit card

N says "you go for shoping I will join u after some time "she nodded her head dev come out of shop trying to hear the voice '.

He didn't where he is going and collide on a lady who was madam kiya

He immediately cut the phone n said "sorry"

Help her to collect the bag " it's ok " she said

N smile she was giving his valet to him but just then she saw pic of girl in valet ''''

She stare at the pic smile and ask him that "who is this young girl'"she is my life ,my daughter, my dream everything for me but why are u asking ?"dev ask her

"I must say she is special girl" she replied

Dev recognized kiya n say" you the great kiya

Nice to meet u what are u talking my girl

Plz tell me "

"u know sitaare hamari takdir likhte hai par

Kuch log khas hote hai jinki takdir sitaare

Bhi dekhe to Sharma jaye

Iss duniya me kabhi aag our pani ko ek hote

Huein nahi dekha par ab dekhegi

Ye dono ek dusre ki jindgi ko pura karege"

"kis ki baat kar rahi ho tum mujhe kuch samaj

Nahi aa raha hai"he said in confused voice

"kuch chize naseeb par chod teni chahiye "

She take sliver bracelet out of bag having

Moon pandent ankled in it gave it him "ye usse de dena sab sitaaro ka khel hai"

He take it before he could say anything she started walking dev stand in his place trying to figure out what she was saying''''''''.

Hope u like the part

Plzzz replyyy

Ur comment are valuable for me

I want add in my pm list

Luv sana 😉😉😉😉

Percap

Mahi play's her guitar n mishal get attracted

By the tune'''''''..

Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Awesome update sana
love it
sun and moon so mishal is sun and sweet mahhi is moon lovely concept dear.
waiting for tasha's meeting.
thanks for pm.






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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it dear & thanks for keeping the mishal name for the lead ,after reading his fb message i guess he was wronged by the channel & he needs our support , great story line looking fwd to it plz update soon

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