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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

nice update

bt man wts this naku n dutta cnt stay 2geva? y... no plz make thm stay 2geva in 1 room... thts the onli way she wil slowly realise tht she belongs 2 him

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

why cant naku live wit dutta?!?!?!!!!

dis is d heights

pls dnt keep tasha away 4rm eachoda...pweez

it was very emotional yet beautiful n sad

pls continue soon.x

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prncz

@prncz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hi Bubbles ,,just caught up with all ur updates and could not stop.. amazing job,,pl update soon,,, wonderful writign ,,we can feel dutta 's anguish

hey why did AS say this ,,infact it was write time for Nakku to get to knw dutta and fall in love again 😍, i am intrigued pl update soon 😛

wonderful story 👏 wish the Show on tv now was this and mishal as dutta 😍

Raj

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hey Bubbles yeah kya Kyu Naku Dutta ke saath nahi reh sakti.

Kyu tadpa rahe ho hame colors kya kum tadpa rahe hain, Pliz continue karo. Very desperate.

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bubbles11

@bubbles11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

PART - EIGHT

You are nothing but an image of the days gone by.
I know you are still there because your eyes don't lie.
I wish I could tear through the barriers and reach your soul.
Why don't you realize you make me whole?

He gulped hard and turned around to face his mother. Aai Saheb looked at him with her eyes full of sympathy. He did not ask her the question which was burning in his mind. She would answer on her own he knew.Everyone else was staring at Aai Saheb, curiosity evident on their faces. Aai Saheb breathed hard, steeled herself against her son's anguish and then spoke gently, " Nakusha does not remember you at all Dutta. " He stared at the floor feeling a raw pain tug at his heart with those words. Even though he knew it, still hearing it was difficult. " Vo tujhe bhul chuki hai Dutta, tere sath ek kamre me kaise rahegi? Uski jhijak kya tu samajh nhi raha ya samajhna nahi chahta?"she asked him wearily. Dutta hung his head in shame for a moment. How had this thought not crossed his mind? And yet, he had known it all along. Had'nt he noticed how she acted like a scared rabbit around him? She was scared of him, in fact terrified of him. She tried to avoid his touch and his company. "Nai Dutta tu khud ko dhokhe me chahe bhi to nahi rakh sakta. Aai Saheb thik keh rahin hai"he told himself even as he closed his eyes in pain. He felt a soft touch on his shoulder. It was Aai Saheb, gazing at him with tearful eyes. "Aai Saheb, mai, mai aur bardasht nahin kar sakta!"he growled like a wounded animal and hugged her with desperation and defeat written all over his powerful frame. "Himmat rakh Dutta, himmat rakh. Hum samajhte hai. Vishwas kar Aai Jagadamba sab thik kar dengi."Aai Saheb said as she consoled her son.
Babi came forward. "Mai Nakku ko apne sath le jayegi. Mere sath rahegi na, to mereko vishwas hai, usko sab yaad aa jayega. Aap log fikar nako karo."she said with fake enthusiasm. Dutta could not take it anymore. "Baaji ! Ae Baaji, chal gadi start kar!" he shouted fiercely and stormed out of Patil Mansion.
Hours later, Dutta surveyed the three empty bottles of whisky lying on the ground. They had gone to their old hangout and he had done nothing but drink. Baaji had narrated all the happenings which had taken place in his absence. Of course the fact that Kala Tai would take over Patil Niwas had been expected. Come to think of it, he had not even seen her since his return. The desperation of Patil Niwas members, Baaji at his absence, he could take. But what brought a painful obstruction to his throat was Nakusha's story. He had not been able to take it as Baaji had told him about the incidents in the basti. When Baaji has started talking about Diggu, he had thrown him a bottle to shut him up. Mere thought of that piece of scum made his blood boil. He glanced at his friend's unconscious figure. One bottle and Baaji was sleeping soundly. "Aur yahan teen botal pikar bhi chain nahin hai mujhe."he smiled sadly. He kicked the nearest bottle angrily and it went rolling across tinkling loudly. "Ae Nakusha, kya maine tujhe sach me itni taklif pahuchayi ki tune mujhe bhulana jyada aasan samjha? Kya hamari yaaden itni karvi thi ki tu unme se koi ek bhi yaad nahin rakh payi?" he screamed out at the sky. A moment later, he started laughing harshly. Of course their memories had been full of pain. He had always rejected her had'nt he? Now if her memory had rejected his existence in her life, who was he to blame? Disgusted with himself. he bit his lip hard. "Ae Baaji, uth."he grumbled. Baaji was completely out. Dutta sighed in frustration and grabbed hold of Baaji's collar. Moments later, he had Baaji over his shoulder. "Ek biwi to ruth hi chuki hai, Sala doosra bhi jawaab nahin deta." he muttered as he clumsily walked up to the jeep.
Nakusha looked up as Babi walked in with a plate of Poha. "Ae Nakku, dekh na mai tere liye kya banayi. Tereko Poha bahut pasand hai na, le kha le."she said smiling as she put the plate in front of her. She stared at the poha and then at the face of the woman who was supposedly her mother. 'Mereko maaf kar de, mai janti hai ki meri vajah se aap sab log ko bahut pareshani ho rahi hai pan mai kya karegi, mujhe kuch yaad nhi aata." she tried to explain. "Babi wrapped a comforting arm around her and smiled encouragingly. "Kuch nahin sochne ka. Bappa sab thik karega tu dekhna. Tereko sab yaad aa jayenge, sahab bhi."she replied. At the mention of that word, Sahab, she stiffened slightly. This word had been haunting her since she had entered the Patil Niwas. She had wondered how she might have addressed that man who called himself her husband during the days when her memory had been intact. Somehow, she had known that she must have called him master only. He could have been nothing else but Sahab to her. He looked and behaved like her master, her owner. She had this feeling that they had never been equals. Whatever kind of a person she might have been before losing her memory, she could never been equal to this man."Kha na Nakusha, thanda kar ke khayegi kya?"Babi's comment shook her out of her reverie. Somewhat confusedly, she focused on her plate. But she did not feel like eating. She felt restless, confined in a gilded cage, caught and helpless. She could not take it anymore. She stood up suddenly, surprising Babi."Mai, mai aati hai. Aap kha lo, mai baad me khayegi."she muttered and almost ran out of the house. The weather was cool and a pleasant breeze was blowing. Nakusha breathed in deeply. She tried to focus her thoughts but her brain refused to function. Her head was aching badly. She looked towards her right and gazed at the mansion. It looked so imposing and huge. She had never seen a palace but she was sure that it must be something like Patil Niwas. Baaji had taken her to Dutta's room and her jaw had dropped. The room had borne his stamp. There had been something about the aura in that room. The quiet elegance of it had made her realize just how out of place she was. Her heart had throbbed madly and when Babi had come to fetch her, she had literally run from there. She went on staring at the awe inspiring structure. She felt as if the huge building was beckoning her. It had a hypnotic effect on her. Something or someone was calling out to her. She felt herself advancing towards Patil Niwas.As if in a daze, she went inside and automatically started walking towards the stairs. A part of her mind was screaming hysterically, "Why are you going to his room, you fool?"and yet she was powerless to prevent herself. Calmly she walked up to his room.
Dutta cursed his luck for the tenth time. Stupid Baaji, who could have imagined that the man would carry a razor sharp knife in his pocket? He had carried Baaji thrown him inside the jeep and driven towards home. It was only on getting off from the jeep that he had sensed a sharp pain on his back. Craning his head, he had been shocked to discover blood on the back of his pathani jacket. Furthur investigation had revealed that Baaji had carried a knife in his pocket which had sliced through when he had been giving him a piggyback ride. Leaving Baaji to sleep off the alcohol in the jeep, he had gone inside. Now the blasted wound was bleeding profusely and he could not reach it with his hand. Muttering curses, he tried to dab cotton on the injury. Someone gasped and Dutta froze. His survival instincts kicked in and he swerved to face the unknown person. Nakusha could have given anything to disappear from the spot. But his arresting eyes had her at their mercy. She was paralysed with fear and embarrasment. She was the last person he had expected to see. So unexpected had been her arrival that he was unable to hide the naked desire in his eyes. She caught his hungry expression and averted her face nervously. The blood rushed to his head and he felt more drunk than he had been while drinking with Baaji. "You!"he managed to growl hoarsely. She was struck dumb.She nodded her head and started to leave."Ae rukh!" he exclaimed before he could stop himself. She stopped and looked at him fear written all over her face. " Is ghav par patti karne me meri madad kar."he ordered. She still looked unsure, so he said irritably, "Dekhti kya hai? Vo botal utha aur aja."

My darling readers...i have absolutely loved your comments👏...i have tried to add you to my pm list but in case, i miss out anyone, leme knw. By the way, my name is monami and you gals can call me mo! 😃 Hope you like it nd han shuruwat wali lines kaisi thi? this time i wanted to start with something poetic nd wen i tried to imagine dutta's condition, this is wat came to my mind. love ya all...muahhh!

Edited by bubbles11 - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hey mo lovely update

wel sad n very emotional

i loved d lil poem at strt...rely wel written!!👏👏

awww poor dutta ... hes heartbroken

woohoo mo u pikd my fav scne!!! bandage scne!! MY FAV 4RM ALL!!!😃😃😃😃

thnku soo much 4 it

plsss abh zyada wait na karana

geee i wel cnt wait noww

so excited😃

n pls pm me nxt tym u update 😳

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago

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naina

@krishaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

awesome work,thanks for pm,please start friendly conversation btw tasha and their romance too,good job keep it up,👍🏼

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

me
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lovely update dear
poor dutta very sad
that lines of dutta buri yaadein and all that i love them dear what a fabulous lines.
great work
thanks for pm

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Hey mo loving the story...ahh so so sweet... please add me to ur PM list

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Very nice part ,very well writen poor dutta and nakuu too having a hard time 😕 and baji and dutta drinking oh dutta got hurt baji be na,oh so next part nakuu will be helping dutta with wound😳 ,jaldi next part update karo😊 and thanks for the PM😳

Edited by spandana11 - 14 years ago

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