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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

thanx for the pm Mo. it was awesome and am desperate to kno how would naku feel once she touches Dutta, i hope she does get some flashes of the previous events.

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-Ritz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesome update bubbles. can't wait for the next update. 😳

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Shreeya1

@Shreeya1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Love this story Mo! One of my favs

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Swapna

@ziks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Hey ,

This is swapna . Its difficult to check it out daily . So Please add me to ur pm list yaar . Thank u .

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bubbles11

@bubbles11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

PART - NINE

A storm rages in my heart & I struggle to hide it from you.
Do you really don't realize the pain I am going through?
If our memories have died for you, what is the point of me being alive?
Without you beside me, I do not live, I survive.

She advanced slowly with hesitation written all over her demure face.She kept her eyes averted from him and he realized that she was unnerved to see his bare torso.Suddenly he was intensely aware of her body.The atmosphere seemed to have changed in the room making breathing difficult. He felt his heart throb madly and wondered if she could hear it beat.Careful not to display the turmoil in his soul, he said carelessly, "Vo botal pine ke liye nahi laya mai, ye le rui aur lagade zakhm pe." She extended a trembling hand to pick the wad of cotton from his outstretched palm.Her fingers brushed against the base of his palm for a brief moment and instantly his stomach clenched with desire.He gripped the edge of the sofa and sat down."Nai Dutta, sambhal apne aap ko.Sambhal apni soch aur apni chah ko, sambhal!"he thought frowning fiercely.Nakusha quietly walked up to the table where the bottle was and then stood looking at it. Dutta twisted to see her and instantly regretted his action. His back hurt more than ever. A fresh stream of blood started to flow.Wincing at the sharp pain, he asked her roughly, "Sochti kya hai? Sharab ko rui par dal aur lagade meri pith par."
She looked at him with unsure eyes and finally took hold of the bottle.Uncorking it,she poured some of the golden yellow whisky on the cotton. At the pungent smell of the liquor, she wrinkled her nose with distaste.A faint smile tugged at the corners of his lips as he watched her. So she still hated the smell of alcohol. "At least somethings have'nt changed yet."he thought amusedly.
Nakusha felt his eyes follow her, roam over her body and caress her.She gripped the edge of her dupatta for comfort. Inspite of being completely covered, she felt naked and exposed in the eyes of this man. His eyes had this strange knowing expression. They seemed to know her so intimately, it scared her.A doubt arose in her mind and she blushed hard.Was it possible that they? "Ae Nakku, tu kya soch rahi hai.Aisa kuch nahi hua hoga.Nai, nai hua hoga."she told herself firmly.To hide her red face from his penetrating gaze, she looked downwards at the gleaming floor.Slowly she walked upto the sofa where he was sitting, his powerful muscles flexing and on full display.He was indecent, Nakusha decided with a bit of annoyance." aaj ayegi ki kal tak pahuchne ka irada hai?"his lazy comment made her blush furiously yet again.Clumsily she shuffled closer and stood behind him.He shifted then, allowing her better access to the wound on his back.She stared at the gaping red slit with a mix of concern and revulsion.Thick dark blood oozed from it. How could she touch it? No, she could not! "Nakusha!"his weary growl stirred her into action. "Ja, jalega sahab."she managed to murmer finally. Dutta froze, he could not believe it.He did not know what gave him greater pleasure, hearing her voice or hearing her call him sahab. 'Kya boli" he asked her in a raw voice.She looked down at him with a twinge of irritation. "Mai boli ki jalega sahab." she said a bit loudly. He closed his eyes in rapture and savoured the moment. He forgot the stinging pain on his back and felt as if all his wounds, both physical and emotional, had been healed. "Sahab, the one word which is the key to my existence." he thought blissfully."Sahab?"she asked him confusedly. His joy knew no bounds.He so wanted this moment to never end, but he knew he had to answer. "Lagade nakku,ab koi dard nahin hai." he said with barely concealed relief in his voice. She paused for a second and then slowly started dabbing at his injury with featherlight touches. At the harsh burning sensation of alcohol, he winced and grabbed hold of her hand. She trembled at the gesture but continued to clean his wound.A few moments later, she had cleaned it and then bent over him to pick up the tube of antiseptic cream.Her soft hair brushed the side of his cheek and shoulder tantalizingly. He once again felt blood rushing to undesirable places in his body.Breathing hard, he tried to control his traitorous thoughts.Unaware with the havoc she was creating in him, she started to apply the soothing ointment on his back.The gentle caressing touch of her fingers were like a drug to his senses. He was lost in the sensation.Twice he had married her and twice he had rejected her. Although they had always been inseparable at an emotional level, there had never been any physical proximity.And now, when he knew that he loved her, he also realized just how much he wanted her.As she finished dressing his wound and started to leave, he grabbed hold of her hand.She looked back at him curiously, perhaps unafraid of him for the first time since her return.That lack of fear in her eyes made Dutta allow himself the one thing he had been yearning to do.He pulled her closer. Caught unawares, she fell over him with a surprised expression.For a second, he gazed into those clear hazel eyes and then with a helpless groan, he covered her lips with his own.At first, she was too shocked to respond, but then the shock wore off and she started to struggle. He was so lost in the heat of the moment that he yanked her even closer to his body. As she attempted to protest, he took advantage and slipped through her quivering lips.Having broken through her barriers, he slowly enjoyed his victory.His tongue explored her softness and sweetness.Dutta Shriram Patil had at last reclaimed his life.A desperate blow on his chest brought him back to his senses. Nakusha tore herself away from him and fell back on the floor.Appalled at what he had done, he looked at her with shame and concern. She was staring at him with naked fear in her eyes. "Nakku, mai.., vo."he started to explain but stopped as tears welled up in those very hazel eyes he had lost himself into.She scrambled up and clumsily ran out of the room.Dutta watched her run away from him. His heart completely shattered, he got up slowly, walked up to the desk where the bottle was kept and uncorked it. For a second he gazed a it bitterly. Then he picked it up, uncorked it and started to gulp down the fiery liquid in it.

hmmm, to how was it? do lemme knw. i love you comments!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 btw, saw shabbir as dutta in the promo, dunno wat to feel now!

Edited by bubbles11 - 14 years ago

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sana

@sana111

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Very nice update, lovely story..

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Azy

@-Azy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Thanks for the PM :)

Will come back soon :D

Superb!!! Dutta's emotional turmoil is clearly visible n Nakku be na !!! uoooff! when she will come to term with that he is her husband! think she awaiting for some major thing to happen to regain her memory! Poor Gadha, he has to under go torture again!

Thanks for the update n soon update the next part Dear, its getting v interesting :D

Ok now for SA, I will not gonna watch it if MR is not as Date! Full stop.!! :D

Me learned a lesson and will not gonna suport that Berang again ever!!!

Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago

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spandana11

@spandana11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Very nicely written dear it is awesome ,Tasha emotions were niche ,oh dutta kissed nakuu and nakuu ran out crying oh dutta be na he is not in his senses and nakuu sudharagha nahi,but part was very cute😳 hoping another part today please update karo na😊 Thanks for PM

Edited by spandana11 - 14 years ago

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Swapna

@ziks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Hey bubbles,

Thanks for PM yaar .

Nice romantic update from u . while reading i was in full of memories of mishal . What a scene when dutta is hurt naku nursing him . All dialogues brought back memories of mishal . "Ye bottle pine kie liye nahi " " dekhthi kya lagadey " aur naku ki " ja jalega saab" oh my god i miss very much our cute tasha yaar .😭

And dutta saab is in full mood of romance . Oh my god he kissed her
its so lovely and romantic . I love this romantic dutta who romances with his wife and forces her .😳

I thought that along with kiss every thing happens u understand know what i mean ? but stopped at kiss . Ok atleast I felt happy over dutta saab kissing his wife . 😳

I love to see more and more love and romance of tasha . Please bring more and more lovely romantic scenes between tasha . Even with out naku's consent also i love to see romance . 😳

Dutta saab forcing naku after all she is his wife . How long he will be in control right ? He is so much in love with his naku so nothing wrong in his move as a husband .I love it so much .😳

I wish i could have all these scenes on screen . Bloody colors channel i hate it .😡

And in my view no other person in the world suits for dutta other than Mishal . Mishal is dutta and dutta saab is mishal . That' s it . Its really a joke if any one imagines themselves as Dutta . How disgusting ?🤣

For me show ended with mishal's exit . There itself tasha story ends .

Its a joke some one going to be called as dutta as he just not eligible to be as dutta saab's servant also . sorry to say this but i mean it .

I just don't want to hear or share the bloody news of LTL2 and hurt myself . 😡

Not only for me for all this forum members Mishal is our Dutta . That's it and that's final . i least bother and Don't even care what the h***** is happening with that bloody show .😡

Waiting for the next update filled with with even more romantic scenes of dutta saab with his wife .😍

Edited by ziks - 14 years ago

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bubbles11

@bubbles11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

hiii ziks...thnks a lot for such a long comment. i understand that you would like to see more of romance between tasha but then again there is one thing i would like to say.
While iam a romantic yet iam a feminist too. So forced romance is something which i personally don't prefer. but yes dutta being the gadha that he is..likes to lord over nakku. he adores her, loves her but he has never respected her trully. he has seen things his way nd the man needs to learn compassion nd empathy. well i hope that thrugh this ff u wud be abl to see all of that happenin.
stay posted...for more.
also, spandana, mishy, lekz nd the rest of the gang..thnx a lot fr ur comments...i shall update soon enuf...tk cr guys...hugs nd kisses!

mo!

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