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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

awesome rose
fabulous update as always
love it
fanastic
amazing
great 😳

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Rose Another Awesome Part👏 It had all emotional,love and innocence of Tasha and a full tasha update😳😉 ,very nice outing of Tasha and nakuu want to play with waves oh it became dark I taught nakuu will do zidd good she said they will come once again when light was there so sweet😳, poor nakuu feeling bad for not she remembering past dutta making her mood happy buy using her hand in changing gears so cute😳 oh he took to her place were they first meet 🤗 all the time they spend was cute and ending was more awesome and end lines were too beautiful faaling in love another time great lines 👏 thanks for ths jaldi next part update karo😳

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Beautifully written part Rose👏

I specially loved the line -

**That night she was running away from her life only to find the love of her life**

So true naa,that night changed their life & joined their destiny.

I could feel her pain when she complained about her mother not allowing her to play with water.

I could also feel her happiness when she got to splash the water & play with it like a small kid.😃

Her comment about Baaji & Bhaji totally cracked me😆,but then she does care for him even though she lost her memory partially,those ballons are proof of that.

The mouth organ bit reminded me of their very 1st interaction when she gives Dutta bhasan about pain -pine se dard nahi jaata😍

Thanks a lot for refreshing Tasha memories in such a wonderful way.👍🏼

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

So beautiful rose...loved the lovers day out...so simple and yet so poignant!Thanks for PM.

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Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Superb update Rose :)

I loved how u bought back those past life , koyal nakku in to the scene n she missing all playing in the rain n waves!! awesome:)

The last past where dutta thinking...*sigh* me he no words!!!

Ha and last the line made me all go woshy woshy

"Mere hothe huwe thu kabi gir nahi sakthi" !!!

Miss Tasha sooo much :(

Thank u so much for the wonderful update :)

Waiting for the next part :)

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

awww dat was simply beautifuly rose

i loved it 2 bitz!!

nakus childishness is soo cute

hmm ukno aat d mention of naku eating dat gola thng..i fote we wer gona get cute tasha scne wer naku feedz hm n stf...oh wel nxt time hi sahi ;-)

baloons?!?!!! pwahahahahaha she had totaly lost it LOL bless her..i ges all her wishes jo childhood mein nahi poori hui...abh hongi...

she rmmbers hr koyal wala chehra n aayi...

awww she mde hm play hz mouth organ...me wana listen 2 it aswel...

i loved dos lil lovey dovey baatein in between...very poweful must say!!

thnx 4 pm honey

pls cont soon.x

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hey Dear Rose🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM...Loved it like always yaar ...👍🏼

Awww u just refreshed the memories of good all old days ..."sigh"...But very well written ...Wow they are playing with waves ,,,,and dutta trying to cheer are up ..i loved the dialogues👏...u are write and bring out the emotions and feelings very well ...Thanx yaar ...can"t wait for the nxt part ,,,pls jaldi update karna...u tk care ...love and hugs

suhana🤗

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbb dear...
nakus wishes n enjoying the beach with dutta...everything was nice...
i have a doubt...naku remember abt her dark makeup,her ayi...but no one in PN... she had partial memory loss??????????????????? r she slowly recovering...
looking fwd...

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

@ rrs ..ur welcome dear ..next part on friday

@ minaxi ..thanks a lot for ur appreciation ..glad u liked all the parts

@ ranjana ...so glad that u enjoyed the updt so much ..thanks a lot

@ komal ..well i try to bring out the beauty of tashas relationship thru my updts and i amso happy to know that u think i have succeeded in doing so..thanks..the character dutta and nakku are themselves so simple and uncomplicated that it is easy to write about them...the whole credit goes to the creatives for giving us such wonderful characters to write about... and thanks once again

@ spandy ..hey spandy thanks so much for ur appreciation ...gladu u could feel different emotions in the updt..i know the whole updt was solely on tasha the way u want it to be ..lol..it feels great that u enjoyed it so much esply the last lines ..thanks dear

@ pooja ..agree with u their first meeting changed their lives for the better ..ohh u enjoyed that bhaaji and baaji thing ..thanks ..me too was laughing while writing it ..glad u could understand and feel their emotions and pain ...thank u once again for ur amazing feedback

@ sinak ..thank u dear

@ shilpita ..glad u liked it .. u know i cannot write the way you do ..ur just perfect ..thank anyways..

@ azymishi ..thanks so much for appreciating the updt ..glad u enjoyed the dialogues and the scenes so much ..me too miss tasha a lot ..will updt soon

@ mlshe ..ohh m glad u found the updt so cute ..as for ur wish of nakku feeding dutta will be fulfilled in the next part ...thanks so much

@ ltlfan ..thank u dear

@ bluepal ...well nakku is suffering from partial amnesia which is why she remembers somethings but forgets other things ..glad u liked the updt and agree with u dutta was trying to fulfill her childhood wishes

@ suhana ..i so happy to know that u enjoyed reading it so much ..thanks so much for appreciating the dialogues ..glad i could put across tashas feelings properly ..will updt soon

@ geeta ..oh dear we all miss mishal so much and m glad u could imagine him all the way and thanks so much for such a wonderful feedback ..will updt soon

@ nileshni ...thank u so much for liking my ffs ..it really feels great to know that

Edited by stranger2rose - 14 years ago