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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hammie😊 heloo ranju..

awesome update dear😛
thank you ..glad you enjoyed it.
harshad very cunning person 😡
protagonist has to be wily,negative..sorrry
but i can't understand why naku is weeping and is harshad blackmailing her for anything 😕
i have answered this query on page 114,its to do with chapter 28.

plz clear my doubts

thanks for wonderful update👏

thanks for pm

thanks for reading and commenting on the UD ranju..as always look forward to them.xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
helooo brvvv,

Hammie u have given me the heebie jeebies, im tongued tied err..., Brain bolted, no words .., God! this cant happen to me nd u thought i could write a ff hehe!😆 oh come on phir se alliterative play on phrases..such a tease you are ..beg keroon plzz kuch lekh ...?

Had to take a stroll to get over the gloomy feel after reading the UD, all ur fault Hammie. Anyway, will not give up. here we go a cannon ball coming my way!! ab kya kiya hammie ne? honestly! ok they saw "go take a hike" !or they also say on your bike mate" ,ap ne tu hike phele se he select ker le..tu main kiya bolo...me naku style saying ,than lowering my eyes ...haaa

Hope khan minds her Ps n Qs, Finally the lady is shown her place, mighty pleased with major's response. Now if u try to take naku's place this is what u get, dimwit😈! But Kapur turned to be a smart guy, He put some sense into the girl.

kya you people have it in for my delicate yet brave lethal khan,she's a good officer ,yaar ,dum aur jigar hai uke pas! ..haan ye problem hai ke dil ke connection ab nehi lag raha...😉😉😆..I can feel a chammaat coming my way here here's my cheek maar le kush ho ja ..make your day!!

The excercise again saved the day for me, this ti me even more challenging especially the rock climbing which according to me is the toughest as it requires both mental nd physical agility, strength nd ofcourse getting over the fear of heights.

It is overcoming fear of heights,but warfare its covering all areas o f postional targets ,over ,under ,around ,in ,out!! abhi haven't coverted the naval side ju submerged activity hai not gadgets but soldiers,especially in war zones where jungle and rivers lay a big part in both deffensive and offensive operations...so me going off now...

After unsuccessfully hitting on the tutor, khan now tries to impress naku, why do i feel she is faking. Hahaha! naku sweating it out imagining major catching a chill😃. The sandwich drama continue to amuse people, only this time it was the chance of the OUTs. So khan's culinary skills reminds major of naku's food, okie dokie! its so annoying to hear the same🤢.

pagal hai Major he sees ,and even imagines about food cooked by her ,methinks he is obsessed by her allthe time like he sees her personality or her traits in all around...But what do we make of this loose canon, has psyched the daylights out of naku.
Gosh! she is shaken to the core. Too scared to open up with major fearing the worst but It was indeed heartwarming to see major all concerned nd even suspecting naku's odd behaviour. Ah! he is already acting on his hunch by calling who better than baji for help. Hope Baji makes mincemeat of harshad, but the precap is alarming as dutta is asked to go to the hospital??? Will this help or aggravate things is to be seen. Hope naku takes the bull by its horns nd its an acid test for major too. read more about her in chapter 30...

Hammie dear, u never fail to surprise me. Hope the next one bring a smile on naku nd us, yet bracing for the worst. Catch u later, take care!😊 listen thank you so much for your lovely comment ..waise i can feel a cold war from your side isi liye koi bottom denting joke nehi mara ap ne hazuoor...

much love xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi naku...tu ah gaye..nice one!
hi hammiee loved the UD 1st ly dutta showed khan her place next time she will think twice before getting too close intrusion not allowed & tresspasser 'll be prosecuted 😊 haaa nice one naku..me laughing😆😆...for a moment i thought you migt add dogs and Khan Not allowed ..but good you were not unkind to Khan..no Dutta WAS GOING TO show her her bounadar .altough I suspect ,she probably has done an in one ear and out he other..

the girls in the army must be tough too complete the training , harshad is at his worst i just hate him , naku confronted him grt ,she did speak to dutta short of explaining him the situation chalo baji toh aa he raha hai i hope he doesn't advise her to abstain from telling the truth ,she should trust her love & speak the truth read the out come in chapter 30 Naku...

i 'm waiting for the next part dutta in james bond style investigating the whole truth from princecharming to knight in shining armour😊 ,i just hope naku speaks the truth & no misunderstanding plz oye woh james bond nehi hai baaaby fauji hai...so lets see what happens ..watch his space my pretty damsel in distress!!
as always hammiee u r amazinggg 😊😊😊😊,wish u a great weekend ,tc 😊
me was waiting for my compliment naku finally got it me happy now😃
thanks for your as per usual lovely comment! xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉azy ah gaye hammie crazzzy..kab kab i do get loopy..only kabhi kabhi ..you mood ke baat hai whether its up r down ..you caught me at an up moment...so how are you ..?woh chotta lardka kaise hai ..ab soon he'll be on winter vacs..bas lappie dor rekhana use RAone ke baache se!😉
Superb update... loved the call between Dn N n again D n B... well looking forward for the superb pre cap... lol that pre cap is making me want the friday come soon lol
Khan got an earful today oye I can assure you his chide has fallen to deaf ears ...wax bhari hoi hai Khani ke kaan mein...waise the infection stems from the cardiac side of things she bloody keeps missing a beat when she sees himm..haiii oiii 😆😆
...lol haha manicured nails she is so worried of :p
no match for Major ke slender findgers and polished nails .aagar dekh le Sir! ke haat tu kabhi chorre he gi na!!oooppps jhottis coming me way
N Harshad!!!!!!! arghhh no comments...!!!!!! I am now waiting for D to arrieve to do his Dhulai ;)
I hope the truth come out n harshad gets cought!!!
Dutta ,dhulai? ..kyon woh koi dhobhi hai kya.?? 😆... EDHER khate hai taken one to the cleaners! haaa...
N about the pic I am prety much sure D might gets mad at Nakku for giving a chance for that idiot to use against her but he deffo will trust her n will not question her... That much trust I am sure he has on her...:) true azy excellent point... me will dwell upon it...
Looking forward for some romantic DN moment too :p
ab woh romantic moment main kahan se paida karoon?...kam kerte hain..romance woh kera gi cuddly lion se ,aur SHer kera ga chunni se ...chaale ga???
.Sorry I couldn't comment last time ,
see mujhe lag reha tha ..tune bunk kiya hai ..bas your attendance figures will dether now but don't let it repeat often,will count it as unavoiable circumstanes ...in my attendace record 😆
as not well that time but skimmed through the UD but manged to do this time... thanks for he update n will be waiting for e next...
Love
Azy
thanks mate great to read your comments with much love xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi meenakshi,great to hear from you...
Very noce update. 👏 Their tasks & activity again reminded me of LRL. Harshad is blackmailing Naku,such a cheap trick he's tried. Datta sensed her condition. He's told Baji to find out, hope he gets to know thereal culprit & his motives. Next part will have investigatins from all the sides. But Harshad can't survive Army style investigation,though this i not a very big robbery, but he will be caught with his so called perfect story. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM😊
thanks for your comment..next chap.30 is more into thrashing things out between key characters ,logic ,questioning,reasoning... no rigouroous training for the first field trip has terminated..but there are other issues that he has to deal with...so yes do read chapter 30 ..which iam still penning down...but iam hoping it should be ready by fri/or sat...
much love xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for another awesome update, Hamlet🤗.

Major Dutta is the perfect officer..what command..truly regal and yet he is down to earth, giving attention to details.

I am glad he put Khan in her place😈. Red towel pe Naku aur hum sab ka haque hai😳

🤣 Sandwiches... was so hilarious...I can imagine Mishal doing the innocent dreamy eyed look to perfection😍

Harshad the slime ball needs to be kicked real hard😡



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

helooo brvvv,

😆 oh come on phir se alliterative play on phrases..such a tease you are ..beg keroon plzz kuch lekh ...?

See? ive been unsuccessful in conveying my thoughts that u mistook it to be some nautanki frm my side, just like the 'writers blocks', mine was a 'commentors block' .
listen thank you so much for your lovely comment ..waise i can feel a cold war from your side isi liye koi bottom denting joke nehi mara ap ne hazuoor...
Again the reply is the same, dearth of creative juices nd remember im the uncrowned moody cow around😉.
But dont u delay the UD tmow [plzzz], only Major can bring some cheer on my otherwise lacklustre week 😳.
much love xxhammie

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for another awesome update, Hamlet🤗.
yeah gotta you at last! naugthty gal you sssneaked in ..but but pun pun!! good to hear from you
Major Dutta is the perfect officer..what command..truly regal and yet he is down to earth, giving attention to details.
sher-i-dil
I am glad he put Khan in her place😈. Red towel pe Naku aur hum sab ka haque hai😳
oh my word!! whattt a bunchh of frussy females!! run Mishal/Dutta!
army of amazons heading your way ..trench your self man!
🤣 Sandwiches... was so hilarious...I can imagine Mishal doing the innocent dreamy eyed look to perfection😍
yes like butter wouldn't melt in his mouth! roti ko toti bolta hai aur pani ko mum...haaa
Harshad the slime ball needs to be kicked real hard😡


my favorite word these days BPL[ FILM ZNMGD, now work out name of film] ...BUM PE LAAT! ...😆😆
] thanks for your comment ivy ..love you xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

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