Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 86

Hammie u have given me the heebie jeebies, im tongued tied err..., Brain bolted, no words .., God! this cant happen to me nd u thought i could write a ff hehe!😆 Had to take a stroll to get over the gloomy feel after reading the UD, all ur fault Hammie. Anyway, will not give up.

Hope khan minds her Ps n Qs, Finally the lady is shown her place, mighty pleased with major's response. Now if u try to take naku's place this is what u get, dimwit😈! But Kapur turned to be a smart guy, He put some sense into the girl.

The excercise again saved the day for me, this time even more challenging especially the rock climbing which according to me is the toughest as it requires both mental nd physical agility, strength nd ofcourse getting over the fear of heights.

After unsuccessfully hitting on the tutor, khan now tries to impress naku, why do i feel she is faking. Hahaha! naku sweating it out imagining major catching a chill😃. The sandwich drama continue to amuse people, only this time it was the chance of the OUTs. So khan's culinary skills reminds major of naku's food, okie dokie! its so annoying to hear the same🤢.

But what do we make of this loose canon, has psyched the daylights out of naku. Gosh! she is shaken to the core. Too scared to open up with major fearing the worst but It was indeed heartwarming to see major all concerned nd even suspecting naku's odd behaviour. Ah! he is already acting on his hunch by calling who better than baji for help. Hope Baji makes mincemeat of harshad, but the precap is alarming as dutta is asked to go to the hospital??? Will this help or aggravate things is to be seen. Hope naku takes the bull by its horns nd its an acid test for major too.

Hammie dear, u never fail to surprise me. Hope the next one bring a smile on naku nd us, yet bracing for the worst. Catch u later, take care!😊

hi hammiee loved the UD 1st ly dutta showed khan her place next time she will think twice before getting too close intrusion not allowed & tresspasser 'll be prosecuted 😊

the girls in the army must be tough too complete the training , harshad is at his worst i just hate him , naku confronted him grt ,she did speak to dutta short of explaining him the situation chalo baji toh aa he raha hai i hope he doesn't advise her to abstain from telling the truth ,she should trust her love & speak the truth

Very noce update. 👏 Their tasks & activity again reminded me of LRL. Harshad is blackmailing Naku,such a cheap trick he's tried. Datta sensed her condition. He's told Baji to find out, hope he gets to know thereal culprit & his motives. Next part will have investigatins from all the sides. But Harshad can't survive Army style investigation,though this i not a very big robbery, but he will be caught with his so called perfect story. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM😊

Chapter 28 "there is a tide in the affairs of men"

Oh hammie...did you have to start with Harshad...for his dirty deeds and thoughts...I need to hire a hitman ... ment I read she went limp and he was all like jackpot...wanted to take all bats, shoes, sticks, bricks and begin! :P now !now if she went limp ,that has nothing to do with him ,he was just lucky... so many objects you have daya..to perpetrate an act of violence...use your grey cells...to combat him.

Aww khan still all over the missile man ...haha mujhe pata ... you like khan na hummm writer's choice hai Khan,but cant make her hit off with Dutta.. waise aager woh dinko can hit it off with Naku from LCL..tu Khan kyon nehi ..daya this is my reaction to LCL..

Hammie ...really enjoyed the read on the exercises...dive tube...net crawls ...river crossing...you know these activities remind me of a tamil film I watched...big hit film... hainn,oye me no watch your film..waise tera Surya hoga hero..ahem ahem..but have to say if the film is about assaults and obstacles then must be great!also about this good looking military man who needs to train new officers ...who happen to be girls lol..but on their outing for training there ends up being real fight and yeah quite enjoyed watching that movie...now feel like watching it...hmm moving back to UD :P

Haha Kapur all over Khan and Khan is ready to swoon and thud with Dutta around lol...ahh Hammie...Khan is going to die LOL if Dutta is noticing her and complimenting her haa the poor girl...ready to fall over :P compliment is a polite remark about her cooking skils Daya na stir ker forum ke girls ko ..they'll lynch me!

Make way...look who accompanied him on his outing...his jaan...his pyar...his purple chunni :P aagai FF ka second...or should this be first heroine ? :P LOL he is like a defeated man when it comes to Naku...nothing can keep him away from her ...called her up and honestly had a good chuckle with her sniffing and his dry remark ...their convo was entertaining for sure... have to say Daya their phone convos to me are the most boring part to write same.. ,me love ,you love me ,rubbish!

Haaa omg hammie...me laughed when she mentions cold and Dutta said : 'oye lardki! don't give me your germs door reha mujhe se" I remembered you when I told you same LOL :P and even the 'ja mera kamre se' ... hmm..oye bemaari!!..tu pm ke baaten forum pe lekh deti hai...oye koi privacy hai tera saath ye nehi? ..well obviously not ... however ,common for a writer to image writing on expriences of life ..got it ye dossre method se samjhoon...pm pe ah tu will tell you! 😡

Anyway ...maaf kar for reading to late...and thank you for a wonderful update...ab next update bhi ready heehee so me going right to that ... thanks for the comment Dayanvan! all good except one boo boo you made ! haaa xxhammie..

Chapter 29 "one may smile and smile and be a villain".. errr Harshad ! :P

You know I went on the excursion once for a week or two ...and we were taught a lot of things about starting fire (they never let us do as we were young lol) and the navigating through forest areas using maps and compass , I actually also had to do this same exercise...it was quite fun...it was also a scavenger hunt two in one...we did a lot actually now that I think back...hmm it was definitely a trip worthwhile...anyway well quite enjoyed this bit ...actually it reminded me of some fun times :P great you could identify with it...i never quite got orienteering...was more of a messing about with class mates...

oh mud pool...I want em to fall into it..i thought of that one but wet uniforms ka chaaker tha ..they would have had to repeat then hang them and shrug hem dry for the next day..but good idea..would have been fun..

aww poor khan not only under watchful eyes of the tiger but also kapur isn't helping is he...poor girl tottering now...haaa manicured nails..no way...she better chop em off..haha ...back to the camp site they go :)

ok Harshad is asking for a death sentence... haan tu theekh hai na ..fashion kerne chali hai .. mind you major ke tu khud nails maincured hain ..may be Khan should say something to that effect!

ok when Lauren said 'close connection' cringed and then when i read, "well you could say that he said dryly, but inside he screamed but not close enough!." In my mind i took one hard whack at his head ...with not a bat but a long thick steel pipe! It was defo fun :P haaa..yaar daya stay calm ..you sure have a nasty criminal side to you .its coing out in your comments ...keep your lid on mate...steel pipe ..honestly!

harshad will get caught ...its bound to happen...and I cant wait for that beautiful moment... yes it has to happen eventually...

like that simple convo btwn Khan andNaku...sure getting a long great and LOL she is complaining about her day and it going bad and Naku gave the 411 on him and gave her a pep talk to make her feel ok...was indeed a nice part to read :) yes ,it was a simple girlie talk ..but it was to show Naku will not ask about he love of her life..oh no ..lst time she put her foot in her mouth and she got it from Dutta!!

ROFL 'SANDWICHES' oh Major sir...to drowned in his own thoughts...haa at least he realized his stupor ...hmm but loved his little bit about home cooked meal ...

:O :O :O Harshad blackmailing...he is so gonna get it hard...I have nothing more to say they might come out in bad words haahaa thank heavens...

Owww loved the phone convo ...how she did not say anything yet her odd behaviour did alert him and of course he wouldn't just leave it at that called Baaji and i trust this will all end well...just hope Dutta gives him what he deserves ...in his style...wonderful update...loved it as always ...sorry took so long to comment ...u noe why ...hmm chal phir milenge chalte chalte...will chat with ya soon hopefully ;)

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