Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 83

Hammie, im jinxed with the reserved place😆, the comments updated below

"The fundamental cause of trouble in the world is that the stupid are cocksure while the intelligent are full of doubt."

Gosh! Hammie tere fiction me bollywood ke saare villians ko peeche chod diya iss bandar harshad, didnt expect him to stoop so low, he is proved, he is afterall a scumbag, despicable, conniving, contemptible, vile, mean, worthless, wretched worm, uff!!! i could go on & on.

Wait, the forces of "The Indian forums" is marching with all the disinfectants of this planet to cleanup the land of Dera, Come on girls! lets give him the BIG PUSH!😡

Naku, kaha phas gayi re tuuu. Told u, told u, not to trust this scheming skunk. wake up girl! u have a formidable opponent, thwart his attempts to malign u! Harshad has grown too big for his boots.

Ah! needed the fresh air, really! The outdoor excercise was a welcome change👍🏼. Mentally i was llike doing all the obstacles, at the dive tube, net crawl nd the river crossing, enjoyed it thorougly nd waiting for more. All the OUTs coming good without even as much a scratch, amazing! Major, good not just at throwing commands and glares but witty one liners too, wah kya dialogues mara hain! maza agaya hammie.

Major is an allrounder, has the same passion for work as well as romance😉, couldnt stay aloof for long. naku once bitten twice shy, not taking any chances this time, poor girl doesnt realize the tsunami wave coming.

Now, u have no excuse hammie, kh, kh,k, khan has a perfect match with ka, ka, k, kapur,😆 God! grant him his wish! I wonder how this lady even managed to complete the obstacles when she is all too engrosed in eyeing the tutor, chi chi! hammie, ur fav khan is mirror image of Harshad, well almost. Ajeeb dastan hain pyaar ka! kapur eyeing khan, khan eyeing major, major eyeing[thinking] naku, Harshad eyeing naku nd all us ladies in the forum glaring at Harshad[at present]. I am wondering how come dutta not noticing the unwanted attention of khan nd her antics, otherwise he is 'sharp as a tack'.

Kuch nahi toh mein toh supari dene wali hoon in dono ka, ek ko utao aur doosre ko udao, bas kissa khatam!

Thanx for the update dear, its like ages the wait for the next friday, Take care, Shalom!😊

Hamlet🤗

Just managed to catch up with the back-log today. Very well written as always.

Sorry, maafi for the late posts.

Chapter 26 Part 2

What a warm welcome for Dutta ..Humara sher hi hai aiysa' Munno baba😆

Duji never fails to amaze me and if naku is also there then it is sone pe suhaga. So sweet of Baji to buy the Dutta's gift for Naku and Dutta accepting the fact that Baaji knows both of them so well..though I wish DSP had made that effort himself. Paan kya kare DSP? Official Duty ka sawaal hai

Sher Paril ko paani ka naam sunte hi neend aah gaya😉

Dutta undressing was scorching..what a description Hammie..my pulse rate reached a 120+😳

The chunni and payal scenes were so cute.

Sandwiches, gajaar ka halwaa sweetened with love, dear Naku know that one of the ways to Major Saab's heart is through his stomach'even though he just pecks at the food'no wonder she has to feed him. Baaji was at his hilarious best with his

Ho Rama ,kya hai ye drama?😆

Chapter 27

Hai major Dutta is obsessed with HIS chunni. He reminded me of a 4 year old whose favorite toy has been taken away from him.🤣 Atleast naku knowing that Her real Lion will be with her during Diwali, didn't bring along her stuffed lion. Then a chunni is more inconspicuous.😛

Chalo they are talking about getting married. What is this munnas and munnis talk…is it Dutta's another way of teasing naku?

Laren, Khan, Harshad how many KMH's will D-N have to jhelo??😲

If Naku is insecure about Khan then what about Dutta's reaction towards slimy Harshoo earlier on?

Naku befriending Khan I understand but asking about whether Saab has had lunch 😕and trying the sleuth act is not going to settle well with Dutta.

Chapter 28

Thanks for the wonderful update Hammie👏

Harshad is becoming worse and needs to be taught a lesson and Khan should concentrate on the work instead on eyeing our Dutta.😡 That is the prerogative of Naku and the Diwaanees of this forum.

How can her khana taste like Naku ki haath ki khaha to Dutta. Major Dutta where is your bulls –eye sharpness!😕