Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 84

Good update👏 Harshad at his evil best😡 Thanks for the PM, waiting for the next part😊

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Hey Dear Hamiee🤗 hello soni kuri... kaise hai tu? oye eid ka chaand ho gie hai tu! only once a while ..nazar ati hai ..why ?aisa kya ho giya hai suhana ,bol hammie is sunninggg..

Thanx a million for the wonderful long update and Pm 🤗Loved it as always⭐️👍🏼

Sowiee me as always late latiff ,,,😳,,,ab toh yeh mera patent dialogue ho gaya hai na...But here finally ,,, oye tera surname tu latif nehi hai kya?

God Why u had start it with Harshad😡can"t stand him ,,,,,I just dnt have words for this Guy ,,,,,Can he gets any lower then this yess ofcourse 🤢i hope he just disappear to some unknown lost island and never to come back ,,,,,,,, like corfu?yess? shal hammie send him to corfu .wahan he'll find hazaroon chorris better than naku!

I hope naku see"s the real face of this guy ,,,,and show him his right place

you mean in her heart!!haaa..

,,,,this guy is getting to irratating now ,,,,,anyways u are the best and brillant so we trust with the story ...suhana this makes me sound like a shoe polish ,or washing up liqiud! ok ok ,naraaz maat ho! hammie's PJ of the day...smile please...

Hain mein marjawaa major and OUTs Going out for training ,,,,Goood loved the excercises ,,,,can major get any hot 😉 hain..thujhe bhi hots ho rahen hain major ke leya ..baaz ah ja.. waise tera se tu ek bhi exercise nehi honi suhana ,so if you think you can join his camp ,you can forget it...only jhottis you'll get from him..mind you even those you'll probably love haina? .haaa

,,,,Waise khan ke nigahe kahi per hai or kahi pe ishara haaa nice one ,,,,,Would u just hook this chick with anyone else ...Major is hooked and booked by naku ,,,so would she stop drooling ,,,,i know one can"t close eyes ,,,,,,But nobody jumps in the well in purposely ,,,But i guess she wants too ,,,haaa this whole comment suhana ,bare zabaan chale rehi ha teri... oye main ne kio marrige bureau khol haoi ju main hook karon logaun ko? and dutta is a to be drolled over item as you have admitted your self ..tu hona de ju ho raha hai...

Neele ambar par chand jab aaye is this a song suhana ? ,,,,That"s the atmosphere na 😉 Dutta wish his chand was with him ...but chand nahi toh chunni sahi 😆,,,,Major has a solution for everything..loved the comment 😆 haaa

he sure has..chotta kakaa nehi hai sher ka baachi hai,and this is his first hunt tu he is in top form ,,,,Loved there phne convo ,,,hain naku worrying about mosquitoes ,,,,Oye naku sher is sleepin dnt wake him up otherwise he will bite uuu ,,,,,,Good she trusts him and wasn"t spying on him ,,,,,, glad you liked their cono ..wohi khisi peti batien .

Why she has to bring that KMH in btwn there convo ,,,,yeh naku bhi na pagal hain ,,,,he is trying to me romantic and want to talk to her and she is annoying him ,,,,,as always ended with naku"s tears ,,i hope they meet soon ,,,,😉... glad you think that his girl can become doolally! at times!

Hain interseting precap,,,,waiting for the nxt part ,,,,i know intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai 🤗u take care ... listen suhana thanks for your lovely comments ,free laughs ..hammie enjoyed... and also thank you for the lovely picyure of the connected hearts...lovely...you look after your self lady and dont do disappearing acts... with much love xxxhammie

Lots of love and hugs

suhana🤗

"The fundamental cause of trouble in the world is that the stupid are cocksure while the intelligent are full of doubt." ?? now this cannot be by Shakespeare can it... haaa

Gosh! Hammie tere fiction me bollywood ke saare villians, yeah mera villain fair is foul,and foul is fair hai...deceptive smooth operater

Ah! needed the fresh air, really! The outdoor excercise was a welcome change👍🏼. Mentally i was llike doing all the obstacles, at the dive tube, net crawl nd the river crossing, enjoyed it thorougly nd waiting for more. All the OUTs coming good without even as much a scratch, amazing! Major, good not just at throwing commands and glares but witty one liners too, wah kya dialogues mara hain! maza agaya hammie.

Major is an allrounder, has the same passion for work as well as romance😉, couldnt stay aloof for long. naku once bitten twice shy, not taking any chances this time, poor girl doesnt realize the tsunami wave coming. haaa me don .down brvv zameen r .owwwh my bum!

Now, u have no excuse hammie, kh, kh,k, khan has a perfect match with ka, ka, k, kapur,😆

God! grant him his wish! I wonder how this lady even managed to complete the obstacles when she is all too engrosed in eyeing the tutor, chi chi! hammie, ur fav khan is mirror image of Harshad, well almost. Ajeeb dastan hain pyaar ka! kapur eyeing khan, khan eyeing major, major eyeing[thinking] naku, Harshad eyeing naku nd all us ladies in the forum glaring at Harshad[at present]. 👏👏⭐️⭐️ this is highlight of the comment ..hammie bows head before you excellently put..even I didn't think about it ...

Kuch nahi toh mein toh supari dene wali hoon in dono ka, ek ko utao aur doosre ko udao, bas kissa khatam! haaa haa last dent on the hind for me😆😆 oyee why are you being so militant..gosh watching too many underworld hindi movies..ab tu chaiwala bhi supari nehi deta...seems like a thing of the past with him..still humara hero still roars,raves,and rages onnn we love you ..Mishal/DSP! 😭😃

Thanx for the update dear, its like ages the wait for the next friday, Take care, Shalom!😊

Hamlet🤗 hello my sweet ivy how are you? good to hear from you

Just managed to catch up with the back-log today. Very well written as always.

Sorry, maafi for the late posts.

Chapter 26 Part 2

What a warm welcome for Dutta ..Humara sher hi hai aiysa' Munno baba😆

Duji never fails to amaze me and if naku is also there then it is sone pe suhaga. So sweet of Baji to buy the Dutta's gift for Naku and Dutta accepting the fact that Baaji knows both of them so well..though I wish DSP had made that effort himself. Paan kya kare DSP? Official Duty ka sawaal hai

Dutta undressing was scorching..what a description Hammie..my pulse rate reached a 120+😳 i tell you what i'll have to read those bits again... my pulse seems low these days!!haaa

The chunni and payal scenes were so cute.

Sandwiches, gajaar ka halwaa sweetened with love, dear Naku know that one of the ways to Major Saab's heart is through his stomach'even though he just pecks at the food'no wonder she has to feed him. Baaji was at his hilarious best with his haaa true true

Ho Rama ,kya hai ye drama?😆..owwhh miss my aji soo much my cutie dimple pie ..

Hai major Dutta is obsessed with HIS chunni. He reminded me of a 4 year old whose favorite toy has been taken away from him.🤣 Atleast naku knowing that Her real Lion will be with her during Diwali, didn't bring along her stuffed lion. Then a chunni is more inconspicuous.😛

Laren, Khan, Harshad how many KMH's will D-N have to jhelo??😲

Naku befriending Khan I understand but asking about whether Saab has had lunch 😕and trying the sleuth act is not going to settle well with Dutta. absolutely not! he will blow a fuse!