Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 60

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

oye me only doing a mishal raheja act...playing hard to get..tabhi tu sarri chorries come after Major dutta...me loving it haaahaaa. i'll be saying thankyou some time today ..busy loafing around central london

oye bibi jee ap ki UD pe hai kaam chall reha hai...slogging over the bloody last page...apne pas tu salla thukna ke bhi time nehi hai ra..

kala bundar from the forests of oblivion..in goa...or beaches haaa

Originally posted by: brvr

achaji! badi ayi londonwali. I need a translator for ur hindi dear, is it hindi or urdu or punjabi, what do u write in the name of hindi?

AWESOME HAMMIE you really rocked your update was full of mixed emotions dutta is growing fond of nakku he was confused btw need and want but was able to differentiate btw the two .he changed his attire and naku thought him to be a stranger that was cute hayee i can imagine dutta in the attire a handsome hunk dutta really maintain his dignified attitude in public loved it and car sequence was lovely .so nakku jealous of lauren hugging dutta .so lauren trying to frigten nakku but our nakku is a sherni .happy that dutta cleared his test but sad that two are gettting seperated jail scene was emotional and terace scene was too hope they will get married soon waitng eagerly for invitation plz hammie try to do it soon waiting . thanx for pm and update.😊

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved 🤗 will be back soon

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Hey dear Hamiee🤗
Thanx a million for the wonderful and long update 🤗 loved it as always 👍🏼
Hain dutta is really excited about his trip to hospital and his meeting with Brig parekh regarding his future ...Awww he can't stop thinkin about "Nakusha " the one who takes his breath away ..trying to discipline himself :.. 😳
pagal hai..breathe ghatam ho gaye tu mar jaye ga..discipline my foot!
Naku also can't stop thinking about her Saab ...and admiring the ring feeling him 😍 every moment is precious for her ...love the outfit ..just beautiful simple yet beautiful 😉 But she dnt need to impress him ...he is already in love with his naku😉
yesss..but some times he check her clothes..but he loves her loads that's for sure
As always Naku went to dutta "s room with bed tea ..but our major is no where to be seen ..
😉 Haila she is screaming like she has some ghost ... 😆 Ab kya Kare pehli baar Jo Dekh rahi hai aapne Saab ko ..in new look 😍 hain mein marjawaa 😉 Dress to kill ..
Loved the honest answers naku gave when Dutta asked about his new look 😉
Awww he is checking her out and trying to control his feelings ..man of words indeed ⭐️
waise suhana why are you marien over major sahib..he belongs to Naku only...looks liked hs dress has killed you as well!! glad you liked Naku's simple yet sraight forward answers
Loved and enjoyed the breakfast table scene btwn all ..everyone suprised to see him in new look 😉
Baby you know I want to hold You in arms ..But now on he is mused ,I have to slowly retreat from u omg what a killer line .. 😳 Naku could feel it ... lageta hai you read the UD with full on intesity and concentration..all the bits to do with Major Dutta. haaa

Loved the Tasha interaction in the car ..and chori chori chupke chupke stealing glances 😉 Loved the song ..just perfect for Tasha
listened to your VM contest winner saniyhaan, almost chose that song,but then went for saibo...chaal pleased you liked this bit
He intro everyone Naku as his fiance . 😉 thank heaven's for that,waise GF tu nehi khe sakta
Gosh this Lauren is getting too chipku ..every now and then hugging him ...and naku not liking it ... haaa liked that word..sticky you mean...haaaha
Well happy to hear that dutta is all well ...
oh he's well! bas dil mein khar bhr hai...naku ki bemarri hai
Haila he is going to teach 😉 Well I hope kids behave 😆 Well if they dnt then dutta surely does know how to knock some senses into them ..well can't wait to see him teaching ..
loved that remark! but sadly he can't touch them,he 'll be booked for assualt..
Aww they went to meet Baaji and our baaji happy to see them ..full on nautanki 😆 But was to know they will be leaving soon ..
loved writing this scene..sigh!
God dutta is mad at her for not listening and coming in ..gadha kabhi toh baat sun liye kar ..that sergeant invited her ...but he said sorry ..awww can't see tears in Naku "s eyes ...
as we all know when he's enraged his listening skills don't work..
Loved the Convo btwn AS and dutta as always brillantly written ⭐️
me too,loved penning it down
Omg last scene was a killer 😭 Got me all emotional ...no words ...They hugged and she cries ...I know he must be crying as well :.just dnt wanna show it ...
hainn.so you are along with being emoti queen ,vm queen ,ab drama queen bhi hai...ye le here's a box of tissues ..be sure to blow your nosie!!
The precap is once again going to be sad ...roops and dutta went to drop naku ...
afraid soo.lambhi juadaaaii!!
Once again thanx alot for the brillant and breathless update .. ⭐️ Loved and enjoyed every bit of it ...👏👍🏼

thank you suhana for a lovely long feed back along with the bits and pieces you have attached with it... yeahhh hammie loves it ...xxhammie

The precap is once again going to be sad ...roops and dutta went to drop naku ...😳

Hamiee

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Dear Hammie,🤗 please accept my apologies for such a late post. But I wanted to take time out savor each moment and write comments for each of the updates missed. Please bear with my ramblings. Thank you for your for your fantastic comments ivy,Iam so bleesed to have such an avid and faithful reader as your self ..I am truly humbled by your graciousness xxxhammie

Chapter18: Part I

The engagement episode is just awesome'captured it so beautifully in your inimitable style. So beautifully detailed that I could visual each scene.

Thank God Baaji is back.dhinchak dhinchak

Maj. Dutta+ red towel + wet hair = 😳 need I say more.

Dutta praising himself in the mirror😆' doesn't he know that is the most perfect Male specimen 😍 But I guess that what love does to you.

The Dhoti episode was so funny. And D not willing to eat anything other than maybe by his N.😃

Waiting for their engagement and ahem'. Ahem..AHEM. Kitni besharm hoon mein.😳

Naku looks like a princess who has captured the Kings heart. So much passion and longing between them '.which only they are aware..Some of the best romantic moments can be in a crowd where the two lovers are in their own world and no one is wiser.

Chapter18: Part II

Tasha so much in love that they cannot bear to be way from each other. But their relationship is not based on physical attraction or eternal love alone'.It is also their desire to serve the county and its citizens that brings them closer.

Loved the dance sequence where Naku was jealous of the female guest who tried to flirt with Major Dutta. But Dutta reassuring Naku and thanking her for choosing him to be her life partner took my breath away..what a sensitive and caring man.❤️

Dutta kept his promise to mamaji and approached the Mamaji-Brig. Parekh issue with a lot of responsibility, sensitivity and appropriateness. 👍🏼

Duji moments are satisfying as always. Duji vs Tasha? Like I have said so many times earlier' can never chose.. for me both are very important relationships in Dutta's journey of life.

Thanks once again for the wonderful epi's👏

loved your fantastic comments ivy..gosh have you been buy at work? but still am touched tht you made the time to read and comment on the UDS..LOVE YOU LOADS..MATE.xxhaammie

Chapter19 have to say this was such a respite to write after he sagaai UD that I let myself go and had a whale of a time ..threw in a baby..and made his phulwari the hit of the UD.the phulwari bit came about before i joined in but zuby and your self briefed me roughly to the extent of Dutta lovers imagination with regards to his hairy chest..have to say cannot think of him without the growth...haahaaa.

The Baby scene is really cute and I loved the bonding between the two couples. It has also helped to bring Naku-Dutta relationship one more step closer.

It's great when men realize that their wives also have an identity of their own and dreams that need to be fulfilled. The first step to a healthy, long lasting relationship.. "two halves don't make a whole! two complete persons make a whole!" very well said Hammie.👏

Dutta and Phulwari have a long connection'No thoughts of shaving please Dutta'.otherwise before dealing with Naku ..you'll have to deal with the 200🤣

His one line for the day was hilarious and potent with meaning at the same time "haan insane se janawar tune hi to mujhe banya hai Naku!" D taking full advantage of N during the telephone conversation'how gleefully wicked ho aap Dutta Shreeram Patil! Ahem Amem'☺️

Just curious: what special sandwiches does Naku make for Dutta'any special filling?

Another amazing episode Hamlet.👍🏼

ivy never really thought about what she puts in but i guess lots of love drizzled with loads of shy looks ,and lowering of eyes...i.e subtle love potion/nectar... waise he'll eat any thing she gives him ..such a baby he is. thanks for the feed back mate...xxhammie