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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hamlet the update was amaaazing 😊you won't belive while reading it i was hearing music too & the Rj stuff dutta & naku made more sense,you said that update would be long but frankly with your writing i can go on reading 😊,dutta & naku joining duty as in your words call of duty ,i hope distance makes them more fond of eachother ,dutta as teacher looking frwd too it , i hope he gets married to naku before he joins duty ,yeh sab toh aap par hai wedding planner 😊 hum sab invitation ka intezar kar rahein hai otherwise don't worry we 'll gate crash ,update soon & tc always 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww thnks for ur compliment ,,hammie, me humbled and no worries re ,,if u missed i can understand ,, we all love ur FF na ,, and this update again ,,i loved it ,,u had a gud mix of emo's😛
so dutta changed his clothes and gave pleasant surpirse to nakku and ffamily , his happines on gettign his medical and enthu to go back to work also ,,😛
also liked how nakku did not like lauren falling all over him hehehe 😆
he compliemnitng nakku was sweet and the best is his meeitngnwith bajji ,,re and his possesive attitude with nakku ,,, so finnaly he soke to AS and she to him ,, loved the convo and way u handled it ,, i loved it the most and AS comment
"kaun ketha hai Dutta tere babba mera pas nehi , woh edhur he hain Dutta thuje mein",
was too gud
so fianlly dutta and aS agreed for bajji -roops jodi and loved D's logic of waiting for the d day ..
now the most imp part how will dutta say bye see u to nakku ..😳 nakku is already showing sympotms of them bichodfying , waiting for next part 😃
Raj
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dear Hammie,🤗 please accept my apologies for such a late post. But I wanted to take time out savor each moment and write comments for each of the updates missed. Please bear with my ramblings.

Chapter18: Part I

The engagement episode is just awesome'captured it so beautifully in your inimitable style. So beautifully detailed that I could visual each scene.

AS and DSP: a touching mother-son scene. Though he might miss his father somewhere..it's AS who has stood by him and he by her side.

Thank God Baaji is back.dhinchak dhinchak

Maj. Dutta+ red towel + wet hair = 😳 need I say more.

Dutta praising himself in the mirror😆' doesn't he know that is the most perfect Male specimen 😍 But I guess that what love does to you.

The Dhoti episode was so funny. And D not willing to eat anything other than maybe by his N.😃

Waiting for their engagement and ahem'. Ahem..AHEM. Kitni besharm hoon mein.😳

Naku looks like a princess who has captured the Kings heart. So much passion and longing between them '.which only they are aware..Some of the best romantic moments can be in a crowd where the two lovers are in their own world and no one is wiser.

Chapter18: Part II

Tasha so much in love that they cannot bear to be way from each other. But their relationship is not based on physical attraction or eternal love alone'.It is also their desire to serve the county and its citizens that brings them closer.

Loved the dance sequence where Naku was jealous of the female guest who tried to flirt with Major Dutta. But Dutta reassuring Naku and thanking her for choosing him to be her life partner took my breath away..what a sensitive and caring man.❤️

Dutta kept his promise to mamaji and approached the Mamaji-Brig. Parekh issue with a lot of responsibility, sensitivity and appropriateness. 👍🏼

Duji moments are satisfying as always. Duji vs Tasha? Like I have said so many times earlier' can never chose.. for me both are very important relationships in Dutta's journey of life.

Thanks once again for the wonderful epi's👏

Edited by ivy_11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter19

The Baby scene is really cute and I loved the bonding between the two couples. It has also helped to bring Naku-Dutta relationship one more step closer.

LOL the baby likes DSP but then who doesn't??? Sherrro Chacha that a cute name for our Leo man'. but before any one jumps at me😲'it's chacha only from Munno's perspective😆

It's great when men realize that their wives also have an identity of their own and dreams that need to be fulfilled. The first step to a healthy, long lasting relationship.. "two halves don't make a whole! two complete persons make a whole!" very well said Hammie.👏

Dutta and Phulwari have a long connection'No thoughts of shaving please Dutta'.otherwise before dealing with Naku ..you'll have to deal with the 200🤣

His one line for the day was hilarious and potent with meaning at the same time "haan insane se janawar tune hi to mujhe banya hai Naku!" D taking full advantage of N during the telephone conversation'how gleefully wicked ho aap Dutta Shreeram Patil! Ahem Amem'☺️

Just curious: what special sandwiches does Naku make for Dutta'any special filling?

Another amazing episode Hamlet.👍🏼

Edited by ivy_11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter20

Another brilliant episode, Hammie👍🏼. Thanks for the pm and update.🤗

Tasha is like One soul and one heart beating in two people. Naku is dutta's Need and not just his want…excellent way of putting it Hammie.

Naku choosing her outfit and dressing up for Dutta and he power dressing for her. Sigh. So beautifully written that it's easy to imagine Mishal and Mahi in these scenes.

Lauren is turning out to be a big pain😡..hope she does not go and fall with our Leo Man. Won't be surprised….hamare saab hain hee isse 😆

Loved the Tasha and Batasha moments.

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Posted: 13 years ago

"Gaya bhains pani me" 😆 Here i was waiting to see dutta donning the stalker role nd maybe even camping outside the hospital compund nd what not, but what do u get? he has decided to stay aloof with his fiancee🤢.

On one hand he is desperate to be with her but is firm to discipline his need, Nakku on the other hand is longing to be close with him for the little time left. Yeh kya locha hain? Both are thinking on opposite lines. I thought people would try nd spend as much time together as possible so that they can treasure these memories when seperated. But dutta will do his own thing. I pity nakku that when she needs[wants?] him the most he is backing off😔. I wonder what was the point in not allowing naku to accompany her parents after the sagai when he culd have sent her packing off, atleast she would have spent some time with her parents before her marriage nd he could have been successfully disciplining his needs. BTW, when r they tying the knot? any dates dear?

God!! nakku fails to recognize him in his new curt sharp look. 😃Haha! he is curious to hear from nakku for his new look, but our sherni is happy with his sher-e-pathani look, bechara! Oh! the whole of PN is fida over his looks nd he continues to ignore her at the dining area even thou' he is ready to smother her anytime, junglee man acting gentleman😛.

Atleast he takes naku with him for the hospital trip. Thank heavens! for small mercies. Naku still waitin for his attention but has to wait for this sweet song on the radio which melts him a bit, he atlast holds her hand, that is what he is supposed to be doing, gadha ka gadha he rahega.

Oh God! lauren doesnt let go of any opportunity from [wo]manhandling dutta nd in front of nakku. To top it now she advices her to be wary of the many women [like her i guess] who culd end up having an affair with dutta. Nakku needs no warning as her man is one of a kind, one woman's man, hope he lives up to this reputation.

Wow! this will be fun, dutta a tutor to some rebellious youngsters of mixed gender. He has his hands full. This would be more formidable a job than the one in the frontline. Good for him! now he will be having young girls swooning for his attention😉.

Naku is the sister baji didnt have, im sure. She is such a sweetheart never failing him, even with so much happening in her life. It was hilarious nd emotional. Baji too not failin to notice dutta's new look and wanting to wear his blazer for his date, gosh! he is ultimate drama master. Dutta's frock remark was too funny🤣, im imagining already. Baji will be missing the two dear friends during the hearing. Atleast roops would be there, that's not bad too.

Dutta nd his mother in sync with baji nd roops relationship, dutta's farsighted nd liberal thinking regarding educating women nd its reasons is praiseworthy.

Oh! nakku, unable to control her emotions, poor girl. Dutta also im sure trying to hide his emotions...nd the precap is equally glum, sigh!

Apologies for the delay in commenting hammie, will wait for the next with bated breath, TC .,
Edited by brvr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update👏 Good to see Datta cleared all his medical tests, teaching to students is always interesting, Left Right Left, on SAB was my favourite show, this incident reminded me that show. Naku & Datta both will go back to their respective jobs, what happens aftr that. Thanks for the PM, Waiting for the next part😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
*hides face* *nail biting*
maaf kar dou saab 😳 *holding ears*
I ll post in some time for both the updates
Edited:
Firstly accept my apologies yaar...though ive read it few dayz back...but could not comment 😳
This update is perfect perfect for post engagement phase 😳
Once again very well described details...makes me more and more to wish that we were actually
watching MR onscreen playing Maj.Dutta...so wish it happens 😊
Would be a very very strong role for him ...
Loved the convo between Dutta ...Ram..RAni...NAku
not to forget that lil one...Naku didnt missed a single opportunity to place him in dutta's
lap throughout this update...he he...acha hai he will get familiar a bit with kids 😃...add to that rams question about them having kids soon..with the pace dutta is going
im sure within a year of their marrige even they will be playing with their own munnu...😆
I really liked dutta's preception towards working women...unlike ram ...glad taht dutta put some senses in himtoo...
Me too like roops was missing my baaji a lot..😭..hope whenevr dutta will talk about baaji and roops...he gets a positive response
Dutta naku scene in the room was so so cute...picture perfect...Janawar ...haha
thanks for bringing that question regarding koel naku as well...was over whelmed reading duttas point... he was right that you do like a person initially due to their looks...but to love someone you have to move beyond that...

the dining table scene was really nice...specially again naku placing munnu in his lap...😆
I really liked the wish that dutta made give me the wisdom to be a good ,and faithful husband to the woman whom you have bestowed upon me...
specially using the word bestowed...made the lady even more valuable😳
awww..naku would be leaving in two dayz time...hope they get a lot of opportunities to meet in between
and yayy dutta would drop naku to dera...hoping for a lovely journey 😊

the ending part was again beautifully written...im loving this janwar dutta a lot ...hahaha
No doubts ...the star of this update has to be dutta's chest hair..😆...first tortured by naku and then by that lil baby...hahaha
and dont he dare ever to shave them...their rights are only reserved with naku...😆
applauds for you for writing such a beautifull updates 😊...and for tolerating friends like me 😳
will make sure to be on time next time 😳...feeling really embarrassed 😳

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Edited by Warda. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Has anyone spotted the ever elusive "kala bandar" off late, reportedly missing/absconding frm forum for the past one week? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brvr

Has anyone spotted the ever elusive "kala bandar" off late, reportedly missing/absconding frm forum for the past one week? 😆

oye me only doing a mishal raheja act...playing hard to get..tabhi tu sarri chorries come after Major dutta...me loving it haaahaaa. i'll be saying thankyou some time today ..busy loafing around central london
oye bibi jee ap ki UD pe hai kaam chall reha hai...slogging over the bloody last page...apne pas tu salla thukna ke bhi time nehi hai ra..
kala bundar from the forests of oblivion..in goa...or beaches haaa

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