Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Nakusha

i loved it & i know the other half is yet to follow ,comment karne se discourge kiya hamlet par kya kare haath khud he tarref ke liya type karne chal padhe 😊 plz post part 2 soon hum sab bekaree se intezar kar rahain ,😊tc dear kye naku tu to romantic poetry ker rehe hai.. itna impress ker diya Dutta ne naku ko kya? thanks nakusha xxhammie

Originally posted by: brvr

"No comments"...

😉 ... 👍🏼 !!, 👏 !!, 🥳!! , 🤗!!!!!!

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right! saying it with signs...oh thank heaven's they are all giving good vibes..otherwise I was thinking I had fallen from grace brvr...xxhammie

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

awesome update hammie

you give every minute detail girl superb
love it😛

finally they are engaged 😳

bajji was too their love it😃

breakfast scene lovely 😉

superb update dear👏
thanks for pm

thanks for your lovely comment ranju...xxhammie

Originally posted by: rrs1391

awsem update totaly loved it dutta fulfil his promise and the fight between dutta and nakku's necklace but finally he got his wants love every bit part of it

Originally posted by: brvr

Firstly it is gonna be an uphill task to comeup with a comment worthy of the twin updates "Sagai special", still would give it a try. oh that has made my day friend..tell you what,this was the most tedious ,most reasearched bloody episode I have done in terms of looking for their outfits,her make up ,what decor to use ,what songs if any to incorporate..damn ..I prefer his injury and treatment UDs any time to these utsavs and the expectation of readers tht go with it i,tried to find out succint info.about a few simple terms ...chall i think it went ok .apart from the fact that I made a blunder in doing pooja with out having ablution ..still I have amended tha tnow ..

So Baji is back where he belongs and doing what he does best. Cannot imagine PN without him and his antics. AS is now breathing easy after seeing him and her motherly instincts draws her to Dutta's room. She has every reason to feel proud of the man lying on the bed and the convo between the two just proves how tight this bond is. The Good Son even in his half awaken state thinking of his mornin arouser😃. yeah thank heaven's he kept his gob in check

Baji's quick meeting with roops was cute and well thougt out. yes subtle but then who was he o to after aye, dutta he was going to surprise

Baji and Dutta are more than friends, i feel Dutta is like a fatherly figure, disciplining and controling the crazy streak in him, now that he is going to be the son in law, its all the more the responsibility of Dutta to see that Baji is capable of handling the new role. Its an unenviable position he[dutta] is in, hence the ziddi lover boy when he is with nakku. well spotted mate ..touche

The Baji, Dutta and Sethji interaction was so natural and even there dutta makes sure that sethji does not get wrong ideas. Sethji and Baji have some common traits and the most important common trait being their veneration for Dutta. Aaw! poor Dutta baby will not eat if its not made by his momma nakku. Yeh toh kaamse gaya, pyaar ka maara, bechara. See, every now and then he has to be pampered by nakku. Glad, nakku understands him so well. oh yes these days waise bhi men feel they are an endangered species women are too busy with their careers ,and rthey are not getting as much TLC from the fair gender

Nakku naturally nervous and getting ready to suit 'His taste'. Sirpe chada rakki hain nakku ne. haaahaa Dutta is dressed to kill as Baji rightly points out, "zinda mardalega" [as if we didnt know]. haila goli lag kye dil pe ..tahkasssah!!!!droool

So all set for the big day and Brigadier Parekh perfectly put it when he says Dutta is ambushed, and i will add taken captive for life by nakku, a "Prisoner of Love". of course i would have said what a sucker!

Loved the song selection of 'Ek ladki ko dekha' as it perfectly brings out Dutta's thought process when he sees her coming. After the exchange of rings, she is officially His nd he in turn officially wil be her stalker for life. haaaha The song and dance sequence by the Platoon soldiers was another highlight of ur update. of course ,i was very clear in my mind ke this man is a fauji and threfore sab kuck army style mein hi hoga More than anything i luved how u described every step and movement for us. U deserve one standing ovation for this👏. thanks a lot,😭

Dutta and nakku eyeing each other every now and then, admiring one another not finding a pvt moment for themselves, luv struck doves.

Baji and roops dance was spot on and goes with their characters as well, ainvayi lut gaye dono ne ek duje ke liye. yeah when i was thinking about a song for Baji only ,I thought nehi a silly peppy number jis mein duno hoon..so i came up with this ..and no I have not seen the song or the film so just read the words and wrote the movements Iam pinjabi so I know what the words mean,,

Dutta very cleverly took the opportunity to set the meeting of Brigadier and mammaji and helped them clear the air of doubt. Meanwhile he finds time to stalk nakku and ambush her.

Hammie, u put in an item number too🥳 and dutta even thou' in an unfamiliar ground enjoying the rooti hui nakkku. loved writing this bit .. Wow! u put in my fav movie 😍'Lakshya' song and what better way for the major to show the world what this relation means to him. Perfect ending for a perfect evening, but somewhere the looming seperation [due to call of duty] of the two was bothering me... yaar there is no war in sight yet...but yes they have jobs to go to ..her more so

Finally after the surprise PDA of Dutta and the send off including Baji, the two had some quiet time together where our 'man of action'😉 got busy with his fav pastime😆. necking

Thank U dear Hammie for a wonderful double bonanza, looking forward for the next instalment as always, Luv u, take care.

thanks brvr for your lovely comments..so do I have your grace and favour again ma'am?? xxxammie

Originally posted by: krishaa

awesome hammie our tasha are so much in love that they can't keep their off from eachother good loved the dance sequence when girl flirt with dutta and naku a bit jealous. finally dutta kept his promise and made mammaji talked to major parekh really i salute our soldiers and their family. loved tasha dance and when dutta thanked her for choosing him as his life partner and their romance was awesome thnax hammie for the update and pm. waiting for wedding ritual

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi dear i liked everything from decor , menu ,guests & ofcourse dutta -naku ,the sagai was 😊great ,i 'm sure you are a great wedding planner waiting for the wedding

Originally posted by: sona89

like it 😊

thanks for the comment sona ..glad you liked it ..xxxhammie