Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 53

Hey hammie 🤗
What an update yaar...it was so perfect*applauds*
what a fantastic job you ve done for making tashas engagement so special for us 😊
Oh I forgot to mention about the similarity naku mentioned about their call of duty in the previous update...thanks for the continuation from the previous update...what a perfect reason they have to link together...their passion for their jobLoved roops and baaji dancing together...and their song was very well complimenting their love life...haha

Loved all the moments between dutta and naku...luckily they got some time alone😊
That item number came as a surprise...though it was fun to read how dutta was enjoying sulking naku😃
I loved all the speeches made by family members...what a perfect way to conclude that party...Brilliantly written 👏
Special mention for the man himself for saying so "Naku thank you for accepting me as your future husband"...awww...this line just stole the show for me.

I loved baaji's remark regarding naku and dutta not familiar with bolly songs.😆..you remember just a day back we had a chat via pms and you said that if you ll choose a romantic song for dutta naku even that is going to be fauji wala...and wow you did that in this update 😊
I enjoyed all the description you gave about their dance sequence😊

awww...baaji had to depart now...it was such a treat to read about him throughout...though his departure was very funny with all his cracking comments ...and how come police came on time *surprised*...hamesha har jaga dair say jo ati hai...hehe

Lastly ..tasha got a moment alone...much needed for dutta...he he
Looking forward to cute moments between them now when they are together :-)
and what a perfect ending babba aj sab kam bahut ache aur bere discipline ke saath hoya just the way you would like it ship shape bristle fashion...
him emphasizing on discipline...paka fauji hai 😳😊

waiting for the next part soon *dont throw chappals* 😆
I know you are very sweet...friday update paka hai na *innocent muh* 😳
Thanks a lot for the pms yaar...Stay blessed alwayz 😊
Lots of Love*hugs*
btw you didnt mention the precap 😛

Originally posted by: mnx12

Good update👏 Decorating Bapa without taking bath is never done. Brig, Parekh & Mamaji's convo was very good, almost every family whose member is in Army, has a touchy story, it is because of them we can sleep peacefully at home.Datta & Naku's engagement ceremony was quite nice. Thanks for the PM😊

Thanks for correcting😊

Originally posted by: rrs1391

awsem update love every bit of it the breakfast scene and baaji scene engagement sce love them and the interaction between tasha eyes are always awsem do next part of it as soon as possible

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

what a superb updt... luved the way Baaji took over after he came back... dutta's warning to him to stay away frm drinks... baaji is simply gr888888... and our stubborn baby Dutta missing nakku so much that he will eat breakfast prepared by nakku only... loved that dialogue of his after eating the sandwich she sent...he cried pait tu bhar gaya hai Naku per dil nehi bhara..dil abhi bhi kahli hai... so all his platoon lads too arrived fr the engagement... loved tasha interaction with their eyes when she was bought down fr the ceremony... and then his dialogue after xchanging the rings... finally he slipped the solitaire diamond ring on her finger and gave her a look saying you're mine now baby all mine... the dance by his platoon soldiers... superb...and the end ofcourse where nakku concludes...As he stood tall admired and looked up to by his platoon soldiers she thought of the one most important thing that cemented their bond ,she concluded dressed as his future bride that it had to be the utmost desire that both shared to serve their country and their people! it was the call for duty passion that had linked them together the most! and finalized their relationship ... Loved to the core the updt... all relations so perfectly managed and done... looking frwrd fr the prt 2 coming sooon... thanx fr this lovely updt Hammie...

Originally posted by: Warda.

*hides face from hammie* 😳

maafi for the last time *embarrassed muh* chaal ab buttering choor ,arise now

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Chapter 17:
Hammie firstly accept my apologies yaar for not coming on time...but coild not miss for this
wonderful chapter so starting with this first ...
Brilliant job done by you*applauds*
Starting from dutta's firm descion to stand by his principles was so much like him...I knew it not even KAla would be able to convince him to compromise...
But felt really sad that baaji would not be able to participate in the preprations...I know
it must be tearing up dutta from inside...
All Patil Niwasis took their duties and eee Suds responsible for security issues now God bless them all 😆 Dutta delegates..smart guy!
What I loved the most was Dutta not assigning any task to the would be bride ...it was very very cute...after all it was her day na

The bar scene was so touching specially dutta looking towards the stool where baaji used to

sit 😭 methinks she was the next best thing to Baji

Love you for mentioning that aaj bhi piye gy line 😊...Old memories !!!
The kitchen scene was very sweet...Love his assertive attitude even when he is romancing...

Thankfully Baaji got a bail for some time...otherwise the thought of it that
he would be missing from the ceremony was ...who would add colors with those courful kurtas if he was not there and ofcourse his famous dhinchak dhinchak 😃
Loved the convo between two friends...specailly dutta made him realize that he had to pay for his mistake now...and didnt disclosed to him that he is asking for a short bail
I loved the comparitive words you used one tall and proud , the other shorter and slightly bent ...
one strong and tall, the other shame riddled and stooped ...brilliant selection of words *applauds*
Baaji smiling at hearing that he had a clean record before bought a smile on my face
and more than that Dutta's plain response to him...he he

Dutta and sethji interaction was fun to read...and yes growing boys do sound like toads..hahaha and they like superman..spider man..aur lion king ur Gadha man! haaa
Ahmmm ahmmm...yeh kia saza day di dutta ko ..naku has to stay in her room till the ceremony starts
aww bechara...kesay rahay ga tough:D ...And him finding medical excuses ...massage ...lil baby :😆 drama baaz tu hai ..surprised he didn't feign a chest pain
The way he turned back after seeing that kangan in her hand was just like icing in that scene😳
I liked the convo b/w dutta and mamaa ji a lot...was much needed ...to bring him out of this pain
loved writing this bit..

Enjoyed each and every bit of this update hammie 😊
Thanks for this wonderful update 😊
I will edit this spot for chp 18 as well
And Im so so sorry ...I just now read that you refrained your readers from commenting
until you post the remaining part...but i got so excited that without even reading reserved my spot
I hope it will not cause you any inconvenience 😭 no not at all waise bhi tu kirte hai apne dil ke like Dutta!
Will be back soon ...lots of love 🤗

Me back again 😳

Chapter18 [part a]

Wow Wow Wow...Hammie you fantastically handeled the engagement update 😊

I loved it sooo much yaar...Each and every detail is so well defined that I felt
im right there at patil niwas watching every thing with my own eyes that is the best compliment i could get ..after all its words and he rest is left to the imagination of the readers
Be it their clothes...decorations..each and everything was so well pictured ...It felt im watching
a movie...it was so real😊

Thank God baaji came back...that was a very cute moment the way Aaye saab was guessing that who did all these decorations and then Baahi came :-) oye tu baji ke fan ha kya ..
But why was he onhis toes when he entered roops room...I thought thoda tou romance karain gy...But...Inka kuch nahi ho sakta...he he 😆 duno he babies hain

Aaye saab in dutta's room was such a touching moment...I loved all of her thoughts there...A son like him is definitely a pride of his mother's womb loved writing this bit

He was expecting naku at that place na instead of AS...haha...he must thank his stars...that he didnt started of the way he mostly do whenever naku is around...😆 yeah right ,with his inuendos,double meanings

Baaji as usual adding colors...loved his dhamakedar entry in dutta's room ..
And was he expecting a VIP treatment in the cell...Shabash...hahaha...and still asking for permission to drink 😛 loved writing this scene old times..
even i thought that there are actually such alcohol addiction agencies working with police
...but dutta was making him mammu...he he...ishmart haaa
That Dutta baaji and sethji moment together was fun to read..and dutta not ready to eat anything other than made by naku 😍 talk about being childish..he's not less than SETHJI ,even he is more about himself than our donkey , any change to routine throws him,well in some areas
Sethji is one smart kid i must say...straight away went to her tai to infrom about his nawaab not ready for breakfast 😆
pait tu bhar gaya hai Naku per dil nehi bhara..dil abhi bhi kahli hai... it sounded so romantic i loved it to the core

OMG OMG ...Dutta praising himself in the mirror...that was one surprise 😳😆 yesss metro sexual male aur Dutta is,but only out impres one woman
But no doubt he deserves that appraisal 👍🏼
That dhoti discussion made me laugh...specially dutta worried about what if it falls in public...
and baaji's reply saying goli say nahi darty dhoti say darr gaye..😆.you ve added a whole bunch of fun dialoguesin this update...I had a big smile while reading😃 have to admit even my belly wobbles with laughter when I read it ..and I wrote it..and Baji's shame.shame.haaa

Naku getting ready for the ceremony was again a very very well described scene...btw you mentioned about green choura ...to be taken off after marrige is it some Mahrashtrian tradition??
I loved her nervousness regarding would she be able to please him ...thats i guess the only desire of a bride when she is getting ready for her special day 😳...Wow you mentioned all lil details about her makeover as well...specially even i have noticed in almost every bride
that their nose tips are dusted with silver shade to make it prominent you tube pe dekh ne asian bride ka mae up dekhta hain..gosh real OTT..no my naku tu model type makeup..like AG[kala]

I liked her simple hair style a lot ...that parandy...as it is mostly done in Mehndi or ubtan functions in punjaab...add to that her hair were made by her mom...that was such a delight :-) yes ,because I would have her simple with her face and hair line showing and simple jewellry

had I been a few shades darker or ,wheat germ complexioned with dark brown or black eyes would I be less attractive...she let this thought open ended in her mind ,may be she would ask her man for the answer.
that im really looking forward to...would love to hear dutta's reply on that ...yes i think the issue we have with gorra rung ..khoobsuret may be needs to be challenged ..that's why I brought that in

Dutta truly came down after gettig ready as a royal king...Im glad that he acknowledged baaji for his job in the end...but bohat besharam hai baaji even at that moment asking about drinks 😆
What a moment it would be for dutta to see all his paltoon boyz in front of him...and the way they walked in made everything stand still for a moment... Loved writing this...
The song used for nakus entry was so apt at that moment...Loved the way their eyez talk to each other 😳..i thought this song was apt...the words were dutta/naku ,ek lardki ko deha tu aisa laga jaise...
and the act baaji got prepared for dutta ...defo made him proud 😊

Finally The couple is officialy together now..mubarkan mubarkan..😃 ...me heading towards part 2 now of this chapter...hope there are a lot of ahm ahm tasha moments *rubs hands in excitement* 😳😆
Will be back soon...take care 🤗

Listen Warda..my rea is your fantastic long comments..they are my chaska..thanks a lot meethai/burfi/laddo..i love ladoos my fav.xxxhammie

Originally posted by: sana141994

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hammie darling i love the part

dont except long comment for me but one thing sure

u are awesome👏

luv to read it

😊 sana