Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

awesome update hammie like always👏

one day you will kill me by the hot scenes of tasha😆

naughty dutta checking nakku in drenched sari 😆and love that he respect her principles and nakku is always there to support him

suds wala scene ie breakfast scene amazing😆

so dutta thinking to talk with her mum about nakku and his marriage superb but stop due to mumbai attack victim people's so that he can help them first and console them and then after all he'll talk to AS.

love it

thanks for pm dear

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@ivy_11

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#332

Thanks for an awesome update Hamlet👏. My only wish is that it could telecast but it is so well written that I could visualize each frame..specially Major Dutta😍.

Tasha rain sequence was the cherry on the cake...Dutta so intense and passionate but yet so disciplined and controlled...values so Dutta like. I love the way D-N care for and support each other..each is incomplete without the other.

The bruise and sneezing scene was so cute na.
Suds joining the army..OMG..I couldn't control my laughter and Baaji asking degree hai na😆 and then Dutta confirming that Suds doesn't have one and should opt for voluntary service😆

The aftermath of the attack scene was heart wrenching..what a world we live in...not a day passes when we don't hear of something tragic😒.

I hope Dutta tells AS about his decision to marry Naku soon and Tasha gets married without further delay. Till then I am holding the edge of my chair.

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#333

loved it & was waiting for the update ,you were superb it had love ,emotion & everything ,the blast part was very sensitive it just bring the point like insecurity for eachone of us be it a man on front or a lay man ,i hope dutta overcome his fear & insecurities & live for the moment ,waiting for engagement dear 😊aur delay mat karna .update soon plzzz

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Hey Hammie 🤗
once again a fabulous update yaar 😊
Firstly thanks to all those girls who asked for the continuation of rain scene 😊
it was out of this world *blushing*
Moreover i love the way you write the details of their surroundings...postures...it seems that you are watching it in real...i so wish we could specially b/w MR n MV ...

Applauds for your writing skills hammie...you are just master of this art...brilliant selection of words👏

the breakfast scene was very funny...

suds wants to join army...just the thought of it makes me🤣
both dutta and naku sneezing to gether was so cute😳

Glad to read about dutta's recovery...his one leg is already working...hope he is able to stand on his feet soon...
ahmm ahmm...imagining tab naku ka kia hoga 😳

just like dutta even i have the image of that old style crutches...he he
but once again a very detailed and well researched part...still makes me wonder are you a PT yourself 😊
Baaji is one funny guy...the way he was so eager to jump into rascal was damn cute...just like a little kid 😆
but dutta is still too possessive about that bloody thing ...lol *in major's style* 😆
but may be tasha share a lot of special moments on rascal...including their first ride...in earlier chapters...
so ofcourse rascal will always remain special 😳

the bomb blast part was really sad...thats the worst issue suffered by most of the countries...i can understand what are the aftermaths of such incidents...the fear of any unexpected incident is the most hard thing to face...
feeling really sad for all those families who have suffered the loss of losing their loved ones
in such incidents in any part of the world...Wish this planet becomes a peacefull place again...

thanks for this wonderful update hammie 🤗
waiting for the next friday eagerly 😊

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Subii

@Subii

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

My hammie dearest...🤗

sorry for commenting so late.. but its better late then never😳 hai naa??😉

OMG! this update! darn HOT! I must say..

dutta's harkatein were too hot to handle 😳.. my cheeks are still burning.☺️

gosh! he is going to be the death of me for sure..☺️

I am amused as to how he even tried all this on her and that too in such style.. 😍

He has been so shy when it comes to romance and visual display of affection but this time he came out of the cocoon and showed her that he is not just a valiant soldier but he can win the battle of hearts too with the same clout & valour! Be it anything its gonna be an immaculate performance on his part.. He is one of those people who set benchmarks for others..😍

For me he is a standard of excellence!👏

pehle to ladki ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi tha aur abhi he cant even control himself.. he just cant take his eyes off her... and bheegi saree was the final blow to his desire of having her..😉

the whole scene was brilliant!

waise hammie personally i think it wasn't fare on nakku's part.. ek kiss to dutta ko milna hi chaiye tha 😉

what say??😆

Breakfast wala scene was very funny.. baji as always bindas.. and what was that gosh! suds wants to join army🤣 shakal dekhi hai aaine main😆

With love comes jealousy and dutta knows this very well.. loved him when he tried to tease her with small little things.. they way he passed a cheeky smile to her when lauren hugged him..i must say he is an adept soldier.. knows very well when and where to use his weapons..

Family getting emotional seeing dutta up on his feet was very much natural.. and baji torturing rascal was the funniest part😆 baji was jealous of rascal.. hehe and he felt insecure that it would take his place in his bhau's life.. this show how much he loves him.. aww bless him!😊

last part was the heart wrenching part. A big applaud to you for bringing up this social issue through your writing .. the way you merged the devastating Mumbai blasts with your story was just brilliant.. the pain people of Mumbai must have been though would be somewhat like this..

I really feel helpless when such events take place.. i wish i could do something!

To sum it up the only thing i would say is It was a fabulous update!👏

love

xxxsubi

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

Missing the writer's comments hammie 😳 as much i love reading your updates...i love your replies too on everyones comments :)

seems like you are having a busy week...waiting for the friday update

lotsof love 🤗

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: krishaa

hey hammie wonderful update just loved it .the comic part sudarshan wiling to join army wants to make a few bucks some guys tou guta ke dum type cheez hota hain aur toothy tiger sudy is that sort my be i shold have lethim join tha maasha dekh na ke lya!

sbut the part that influenced me more was attack at zaveri bazaarit was hard for me to ignore it ,for me as a writer this was the most fulfilling part of the upd. i wanted to show dutta as a man equating this tradgedy..though as a soldier ..well that's another issue kirshaa you can see it perhaps in the coming update..

you know my jijaji lost his two best friends in that attack he now often cry when he mention's the attack and the condition of his friend he lost his two hands and died on the spot.the most horrible scene he had seen in his whole life.i just pray god give strength to those who lost their loved ones in that attack.thanks for update and pm.thanks a lot.😊 amen!
now my demand please make dutta marry nakku soon please or atleast engagement.precap sounds fishy i hope roops is planning to make another girl's entry in dutta's life don't do that please.please unite tasha soon.😆😆

oye oye kaki ruk ja zara .jaldi ka kaam is no good ..Dutta has a lot of access baggage on his body and suol that needs to be ironed out .. precap, another girl ,yaar ek he nehi dutta saab si handle ho rehi ...tu dossri tu will drive him completely bonkers ..he'll be thrown out of the army probably and than he'll join Chak Hazara and become Ranjha! xxx thanks for your comments 😊

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: AzMishy

Beautiful update Hammieee'. 😳

mujhe sab pata hai thumhe kis cheez mein beuty nazar aye hai dont i know your hearts ,i was going to add brains ,but woh tu mal funstion kar rehey honna gi especially in the first bits ... even i dd'nt know whether i was coming or going

Loved the naughty side of dutta..☺️ v v steaming n romantic update i must say😛☺️☺️

yes talk about being percolated... god knows for how long the guy's been on the slow boil for!

And now major on clutches'😉 soon he will walks on his own too..

yes he was becoing too flabby sitting around and poor nakku was becoing more of a kivvey ady by day ..tu ache he he kicked his own hind into shape hai hamara sweeto sa gagha MISHU/DUTTA

Thanks for the update n for the Pm'😳 lovely to hear from you xx hammie azm

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: rrs1391
lovely update 👏 very romantic 😳 and dutta has a golden heart 😃
that the man is of highstation,professionally,financially and socially often clouds his inherent persons of being a huge softie inside ,although he gives the otward elusion of being cold and calculated,that which drwas females to him the most..to melt the ice of the Artic zone called Dutta/Bhau aka.MR aka Major Dutta Patil

and his fear for nakku 😭 and am disappointed that tasha relationship was not revealed 😕 to the family, I promise you it will come in he next update..before he does some thing we all regret but totally a awsem 👏update do next as soon as possible ⭐️

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#340

OMG ...OMG ...i totally forgot to get back to this FF...ahhh am so sorry...been unwell and then on top of it i am in the middle of writing a 6pg (single spaced) paper...eekk itz due tmmrw

I promise i will come back and comment on ur update...
am so upset with myself for totally forgetting this ...
i have not read it yet...but i will soon

Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago

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