Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 35

Originally posted by: brvr

Awesome update, Hammie dear. Luv how u slowly draw us into the lives of the characters nd this is in itself a very rewarding experience🤗. I feel im reading a novel [e-novel]. Once ofcourse i hope it is a long way, when u finish this story i would like to compile ur entire work nd save it as an e-novel except that it is a free one nd with ur approval. Thanx a million dear for giving such a wonderful experience.

listen mate i really dont know what tosay ..me gob smacked, humbled very much though😳

e-novel hailaa.. again speech less though.. of course you can dear.. me dont know how to go about it... waise its strange those two mish/mh have left us with ..it' lie a never ending saga of their love as" Shakespeare stff dreams are made of" aur hume dkho need je jagna ko tayaar he nehi hain such fools we are..😭

Firstly, i appreciate ur updates comin at regular intervals, just like our Major very disciplined u are indeed👍🏼. yeah iam becoimg lke te character of my imagination Major Dutta..weird , or is it lie an artists junoon.. like VAN GOGH HE WAS SKITSO he chopped of his ear haaa haa per kiya use of yellow colour to show his mental instability ! sorry me digressing ..yes update bolly wood ke fimi ke theran jumma ko realease hota hai . hammie ko dekhna hota hai film hit giy he ye flop ..the trick hai .. romance ke quota bhar do ,barasesh ka ek scene hero ka tochy feely bit ,thuree se comedy aur masala and hey presto you have your 3star hit ..haan 5 star hit ke liya big events dilna parthay hain ..now iam working on that my mate!

Wow! the continuation of the rain sequence was a bonus to all romance starved Dutta deewani's. I must say our major is getting bolder by the day. I was gettin all shy nd squirming☺️. It was hot. masala ! always a winner i lked te bit where he compares her to his weapons,but few got it ,lie dutta they were more interested in what dutta was eying and how he would react..

The dining area scene was also my fav for today's update, it was all so natural, both of them sneezing at the same time was the funniest.❤️ is ko romantic comedy kheeta hai ,basically dutta ki dirty deeds pe pardha.. gosh the man's big time starved..gawd help the lass ..ye ne hoiya ke bachoon ki line laga de ye gadha!

The sudden interruption of the grief stricken people did jarr the flow nd the mood, but to expect the unexpected is life. How Dutta was itching to take up the issue of marriage with his aye, poor soul all distraught nd worried in the end😔. He is a softy from the inside nd i really worry for him. He is extemely worried for nakku fearing if something untoward happens to him due to his risky job. This could push him into the 'to do or not to do" mode. I do wonder how the men in uniform deal with this issue as i dont know anyone in the forces. 👏 Looking forward to next week, when D has to decide if he is still unsure nd announce if he decides on the affirmative. Any other twist nd turns most welcome. I just wish the two have some meaningful conversations about their lovelife and so on. I myself enjoy to some lengthy talks about anything on this planet n i can go on😍. thanks for your use ful comments you inspire me to write on mate xxxhammie

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved😉Will be back later ...

Edited😉

Hey dear Hamiee🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm 🤗As always loved it 👏

listen thanks for reading the update busy lady!👍🏼

Really fab start yaara🤗Loved the romance ...hai mein marjawa😍 thanks for your exclusive lines suhana jab ja i see these lines on the forum hammie khows suhana woz here!😃

...I have no words suhana you dont need words to describe you usaual say it by your beutiful VMs my VM LADY and you do a fab job and so say all!

to describe how good it was really mindblowing 👍🏼...Dutta tried to control his feelings coz he respects her dnt wanna cross the line without her permission ...Man of a word ..a true solider ⭐️ yes love he is a man of his word but you must remember that inspite of being tiny ,shy ,and quiet she is very powerful and pulls the shots! he cant really do much without her permission.. so lardki dum wala hai !😉

Omg The dining table wala scene with suds was funny and even Tasha"s interaction was really cute and sweet ..😍 glad this bit brought a smile to your lips, covering up for naughty ,naughty stuff ..waise acha fool bana the hain sab ko ye duno dutta aur us ke nakku 😉

Finally Major is all set to conquer the world again 😉...Everyone was happy to see him back to normal ... its nakku he wants to get to ...she's his world!

Can"t wait to see Dutta Disclose his decision to AS that he wanna marry Naku😉 wait for the update kakki

The last Bits got me all emotional yaara ..But happy that naku was there to support him ... yes that's what love is being there for the other in times of comfort and support ..as dutta showed for his people when he went to see them.. it

Loved the precap ...can"t wait for the nxt week ...Pls jaldi update karna .. yesss ma'am our wish is hammie's command.

u take care and see ya around ... see ya too x thanks for your comments suhana and for the bear and the heart ..waise major dutta is more into planes ,tanks, revovlvers etc etc!😃

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

Oh hammie u totalyy blew me off wit dis 1...!!!!

yaar thera e tu idea tha bheegi sari wala tu credit thuj ko jata hai .. missy you pushed the angelic hammie into this direction

it was outstanding

thanks mate glad you liked how my pen painted especially tera scene barrish wala ... thura OTT tha but chalo kakiyaan thrill

hogiyaan😛

duttas character of a true soldier was so apparent in this update...haan lardki ko bhi hatyaar sumjta hai pun chla nehi pya oye oye .. hatyaar ne use chal diyaa 👏

4rm his romantic side to his emotional 2 his tough look...theres always a present of his soldier mind...

oh yes army se jo bhara hoya hai ..gola, bari, bumb

loved the way u do that...keep hold of his persona nd dnt forget it evn for a min...rely well done!!

thanks missy i did want to protray his eye and kick he gets when a weapon is before him his fondling ,caressing the weapon ..the tactile side of things!

as u would kno i totaly loved tasha scenes the most...

bechara dutta tried 2 ha rd 2 control lol...nd at the stil gt nufin but then agen he did it 4 nakus sake...bless him

haaa yeah right she pulls the shots missy .. pistool

jam ho gi hai tu trigger khan se dabaya ka haaa

the mumbai attack victims scene was heartwrenching...seriously it was so sad seeing em all lyk dis.. yes for me ths was the key scene of the episode glad you thought so too

and duttas reaction 2 them..especially wen widow told her story wit her 3kids...he was 1ce agen reminded of his most traumatising past...his aye nd dad...

its the identification of one's own situation that crates the humanity in us .. the empathy so to say ..the we too suffered similariy element..i also wanted to big up his character who loves his people ..after seeing what a whoosh the NRD has became in LCL i had to elevate and remind my self who thereal mishal /dutta was and is!

naku being by his side all the time...spesh wen he needs her the most...loved how he actualy aldmitted his weakness 2 her nd hw he needs her..inted of hiding it behind his tough persona...it jus shows a total different side to him and their relationship wich is open in every sense...

yes she has that loving feeling,he knows she 's behind him ..and tht he needs her to go forward... how ever more to come in the next updte.. about some issues..so watch this space!

thnku so much 4 such an amazing update nd the pm bbe

😃😃😃

pls pls do cont soon...i always wait 4 fridays so eagerly...and wil b waiti g 4 nxt week.. thanks missy for your great comment yep updte on friday xxxhammie

love u lots

tc

xoxo

Originally posted by: prncz

Loved your update hammie,,as always 😳

thanks raj ..glad you liked it

,, wow sensational and hawt scene in the beginning ☺️

oye you too enjoying the hoottie shottie scenes ,naughty gal

Major dutta brke my heart , he feels for the loss fo the families and wants to help them ,,

that's the golden guy in him

ofcourse his exhilaration on walking with crutches ,, and the entire family encouraign and suporting him,, aww he was thinking of talking to his mom for nakku 's hand ,,but at tht momnet the bereaved family members came for support.. haan yaar kahani mein thuraha wait u karna parta hai audience ko .. that's how they want more...

after seeign this devastaion ,,i hope he gets to talk to nakku reg his fears and then talk to AS for his wish to get married ,,,and also liked Nakkus principles he will do some thng to that effect raj in the next update ,,thanks for the great suggestion

waiting as always for your next update 😳 thanks for your use ful comments raj .hoping to be up and ready by friday with the next lot .xxxhammie

Originally posted by: mnx12

Nice update👏 Suds wanted to join Army😆Datta's recovery is going good. B blast part was sad, this has really happened to some of the victim's families. Thanks, waiting for the next part😊

thanks for your comment gala you enjoyed it ..will look forward to you comments on the next one

up n friday xxxhammie😊

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

awesome update hammie like always👏

one day you will kill me by the hot scenes of tasha😆

oye hoi ranju tu bhi gayi kaam se ..man at this rate because of this blasted Major i wont have any

frigging reders left he shooting down all the chicks and birds with his shots

naughty dutta checking nakku in drenched sari 😆and love that he respect her principles and nakku is always there to support him
yes acting like he's never seen a woman in his life ..actually the poor ass hasn't probably!
suds wala scene ie breakfast scene amazing😆 yeh i was giggling at his mahaan assiness as well when i was penning down this scene such a sad basket case he is 😆

so dutta thinking to talk with her mum about nakku and his marriage superb but stop due to mumbai attack victim people's so that he can help them first and console them and then after all he'll talk to AS.
yes he is technically supposed to talkto his mum about her altough naku does know i'll bet hes going to set some thing up between harshad and her!
love it

thanks for pm dear thanks for your comments ranjana xxx hammie next update on friday

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Thanks for an awesome update Hamlet👏. My only wish is that it could telecast but it is so well written that I could visualize each frame..specially Major Dutta😍.

now that my friend is one of the best compliments i have had ..so googd drcrpitive passages yees ilike that ..thanks

Tasha rain sequence was the cherry on the cake...Dutta so intense and passionate but yet so disciplined and controlled...values so Dutta like. I love the way D-N care for and support each other..each is incomplete without the other. you have summed it well!

The bruise and sneezing scene was so cute na

thought i would thougt onhis naaga pana in the rain despite his burning passion ,and her sridevi type dancing to his tunes should also show the after effects of having a rollicking time in the rain while allelse waere sleep .. honestly them two a pair of teenagers!
Suds joining the army..OMG..I couldn't control my laughter and Baaji asking degree hai na😆 and then Dutta confirming that Suds doesn't have one and should opt for voluntary service😆
hain na suds ke pass degree 420 char sau beesi ki 😉
The aftermath of the attack scene was heart wrenching..what a world we live in...not a day passes when we don't hear of something tragic😒.

I hope Dutta tells AS about his decision to marry Naku soon and Tasha gets married without further delay. Till then I am holding the edge of my chair.
wait for the next update ivy..up on friday... marrige ki baad ba ek he cheez hogi SR and thn every thing capote! thts why iam a bit weray of marriage unless people come up with other ideas ,i know you'll say pregnancy hiala wht are thr veiws abiutreaing a family! thanks for your lovely comments xx hammie

Originally posted by: Nakusha

loved it & was waiting for the update ,you were superb it had love ,emotion & everything ,the blast part was very sensitive it just bring the point like insecurity for eachone of us be it a man on front or a lay man ,i hope dutta overcome his fear & insecurities & live for the moment ,waiting for engagement dear 😊aur delay mat karna .update soon plzzz

Originally posted by: Warda.

Hey Hammie 🤗
once again a fabulous update yaar 😊 me taking a bow .😊
Firstly thanks to all those girls who asked for the continuation of rain scene 😊
it was out of this world *blushing* therakhi another one! 😉
Moreover i love the way you write the details of their surroundings...postures...it seems that you are watching it in real...i so wish we could specially b/w MR n MV ... oh yess man so oi so do i magaar ye hoon ne saka tu maine ne khu he nana dala .. meri imagination par colors ka koi zarror nehi chalta ..waise bhi if the said any thing to me i'd sue them for defarmation .libel, and all the other charges i conjure up

Applauds for your writing skills hammie...you are just master of this art...brilliant selection of words👏 gosh today seems to be my day for LIONS award or should i asy to collect the award on behalf of our SHER-E-DIL .. MISHAL RAHHEJA!

the breakfast scene was very funny... glad you enjoyed it ,waise i could throttle that git sudarshan complete and utter prat ... suds wants to join army...just the thought of it makes me🤣
both dutta and naku sneezing to gether was so cute😳 waise have to say warda duno he bahut sly hai ... dirty pair kya kuch kartereha beeghi baahgi stae mein aur ab saab ke samna like butter wound'nt melt in thier mouths.. tilL Bappa exposed them by thgiving them the SNEEZE!

Glad to read about dutta's recovery...his one leg is already working...hope he is able to stand on his feet soon...
ahmm ahmm...imagining tab naku ka kia hoga 😳 yeah man tab tu he'll swallow her alive or follow her like mary's little lamb actually no nakku's liitle cub awwwh!

just like dutta even i have the image of that old style crutches...he he
but once again a very detailed and well researched part...still makes me wonder are you a PT yourself 😊 noo not a PT .just read up and check up on stuff .. but do hve Medics in the family
Baaji is one funny guy...the way he was so eager to jump into rascal was damn cute...just like a little kid 😆 yes i thought i'd add that in because baji's relation ship with dutta has been hacked to pieces in te recent episodes WU so had this urge to ressurt Baji dutta bond! its usually how i react to the current LCL track
but dutta is still too possessive about that bloody thing ...lol *in major's style* 😆 ooh yes remember he referred toit as his companion in the intial episodes ..it was to over come he fact that he was now a cripple .. and hence psychological trauma ..but i DIDENT want to ortray Majot Dutta in ht light tht's why i gve him a state of the arts wheel chair so it escites him and gves him a kick even though he suffered with temporary paralysis..the wheel chair exixts in UK and costs nearlty 2000 pound each!
but may be tasha share a lot of special moments on rascal...including their first ride...in earlier chapters... yess they doo .they certainly do.. that's where all Dutta's rogue behaviour starts!

so ofcourse rascal will always remain special 😳

the bomb blast part was really sad...thats the worst issue suffered by most of the countries...i can understand what are the aftermaths of such incidents...the fear of any unexpected incident is the most hard thing to face... such is our world ...but dutta's take should be nteresting .. does he have any? next episode?
feeling really sad for all those families who have suffered the loss of losing their loved ones
in such incidents in any part of the world...Wish this planet becomes a peacefull place again. yes true say but ... too many issues

thanks for this wonderful update hammie 🤗 listenthanks for a brilliant feed back warda

xxhammie next bit up on friday
waiting for the next friday eagerly 😊

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

I hope Dutta tells AS about his decision to marry Naku soon and Tasha gets married without further delay. Till then I am holding the edge of my chair.
wait for the next update ivy..up on friday... marrige ki baad ba ek he cheez hogi SR and thn every thing capote! thts why iam a bit weray of marriage unless people come up with other ideas ,i know you'll say pregnancy hiala wht are thr veiws abiutreaing a family! thanks for your lovely comments xx hammie